LuV iZ iN d AiR!!!!a magical luv story

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I m writing a fan fiction....plz read n review.

LuV iZ iN d AiR!!!!

a magical luv story

main characterz

SORPIUS MALFOY

TWINKLE POTTER

ISHI ARYA

ZAC WEASLEY

DRACO MALFOY AND HERMOINE MALFOY

HARRY POTTER AND GINNY POTTER

RON WEASLEY AND LUNA WEASLEY

DAN ANDREW

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the final war got over 19 yes ago.Harry and Ginny has 3 children-james,twinkle,albus.Draco n Hermoine 2 has 3 children- ashley,scorpius,drashi.Ron and luna has 2 children-zac and toshi.harry and draco ard best frnds now.their children are gonno marry.scorpius n twinkle luv each other.otz their 7th yr at hogwart when sumthin happens...a girl changes everything..............

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Malfoy manor

it was a bright night.two people were sitting in the sea sine all alone.

"wat a wonderful night???isn't it??said a blond hair boy.
"yeah!!i noe ,but scorpius, u noe wat??said a beautiful girl.
"wat twinkle?"
"every single night became wonderful for me since i started loving u"
"yeah ,i noe but today itz a very special day"
"why?"said twinkle in a very exited voice
"surprise for u "
"wat surprise?'
'letz go home,i ll tell u"

they both stood up and appearated in front of malfoy manor.
"OPEN"called out scorpius n the door flew open magically.they both walked the way through the long corridor n entered in a beautifully decorated sitting roon.the whole room is decorated with deep violet color velvet stuffs.their sat a bunch of people.twinkle detected his family and ran towards them.

"mum..dad,wat a pleasent surprise"said twinkle and leaned down to kiss her mom and dad.
"oh!!darling.how r u???" said harry potter kissing his daudhter back.
"we missed u ,princess"said ginny potter huging her daughter.
"hey,james"said twinkle kissing is brothier in his cheeks.
"i m happy 2 see u again"said james.
"oh!!!missed u a lot,albus"said twinkle kissing her younger brother who was busy palying with his snitch"
"i missed u too"said albus tossing the snitch up.

at last when she finished greeting everyone she sat next to scorpius .

"i really wanted to meet u badly,harry"said draco with a broad smile in his face.
"me too,but today i just didnt come 2 meet u but alse to talk to u something important"said harry
"but where is hermoine"asked ginny
"she is just coming now,she went to ministry of magic"anserd draco
"but why dad?"asked ashley,his elder daughter who was standing next to james.
"she wanted to submit her new story about the trio"said draco
"oh!!i m waiting to read it very badly"said harry

suddenly someone entered in the sitting room,
"how lovely to see u all"said hermoine in a pleased voice
"same here"said ginny and hugged her best friend.
"yeah!!i guess i mst start now"said harry.
"actually i want to turn our friendship into relationship"harry continiud
"wat do mean?"asked hermoine and draco at d same time
"i was just wondering if scorpius and twinkle get married"
"u said just d same thing which was going on in ma mind"said draco is a very pleased voice
"but we should ask the children first"said hermoine
"don't worry.dear,ask then now"said harry

every single face turned to scrpius and twinkle.
twinkle was blusing soo badly that she could just nod her head.
"i have no prob"said scopius
"ok then is it done"asked harry
"100%"replied draco
"NOW ITZ TIME TO CELEBRATE"said hermoine
"i ll just come"said hermoine and ran towards in.
"i wish ron was here with us"said draco
"i noe ,but he is still angry with us"said harry
"it was all my mistake"said draco in a remorse voice
"no,its not ur mistake,its completely his mistake"
"but i was d one who took away hermoine from him"
"u never took hermoine away from him,it was she who luved u n wanter to marry u"
"yeah!!but he thinks that i took away u too"
"thatz a complete nonsense,i never went away from him,he just ditched me"
"i wished i had been dead that day"

the final war is over .everything was solved.voldomort was dead,n was killed by the combine force of harry n draco.that was the only way 2 kill him.almost all d death eaters were dead including bellatrix,lucius.whoso who were alve was sent to azkaban.
from the order also many were dead including fred,charlie,remus,tonks and mr weasley.the left over members were sitting in the burrow that night.

"harry,how could u trust him?"asked ron
"ron,i had no other way"
how can u b soo sure?"
"bcause before dying snape just told me that only combine force of a good hearted wizerd and a good hearted but who pretend to b bad loke wizerd can only defeat voldemort for ever"
"n how do u noe that it was draco?"
"because hermoine told me that he was d 1"
"but how do hermoine noe?
"ask her not me"said harry in a raising voice
"where is she?"
"upstair with draco,he is badly hurt"said ginny
"wat???ok"said ron and walked towards he stairs

Draco was lying in the bad,unconcious.hermoine was holding his hand and sobbing quietly.

"what is all this hermoine?"asked ron
"wat do u mean?"said hermoine without lookig at him
"why did u say harry that draco was the one who was suppose..."
"because he is d 1"hermoine cut in
"how were u so sure?"
"i noe him better than anyone does"
"how?"
"u wanna noe how?"
"yes "
"i love him,i love him more that anyone in d world...he is ma boyfriend"
"u never told us that"said ron ,confused
'i never told u.harry n ginny knew all abt it"
"oh!!so u r ditchiing me?"
"i never loved u that way ron,u were just a frnd of mine,a very good frnd"
"bye,hermoine,be happy with d ferret"he walked away
for the first time she looked up
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"forget all that,mate"said harry
"yeah"said draco
"time to eat,all of u in d daining table"called hermoine
"letz go"said draco

"how was my surprised?" asked scorpius softly
"out of d world"said twinlke smiling.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzzz review ,,,,if u like
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its nice really nice bt i feel bad for ron i mean he loved her na bt thn she loved draco ohhhhh m always took side of those who left alone or who lost their love or cudnt gt it bt ur fanfic is nice keep it up 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
Very nice story..
Do continue

A few pointers to make it even better:

1. Spell out all the words, like insead of d, write the whole word the. And noe as know. It makes it much easier to read.

2. Space out the dialogues

😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
superb idea.....i pity ron 😆 to cope up wid luna 😆 😳 ....ggggrrrr8 goin 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
nice work....keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
thnxxx sooo much i ll keep writin😊
thnx 4 advice😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
Very nice start and Plz PM me when you update a chapter.Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 first chapter
cont with the next soon 😉

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