Let Me Kiss Your Woes Away Darling - MaAn Ficlets ~31~ p108 Jul18 - Page 7

So simple yet so deep... beautifully written❤️

Nyccc part dear....mindbowing

Hey,

I don't know How I missed this thread earlier, happened to read all the shots together today and fell in love with it.

It's such a lovely and inspirational piece of art.

In the world of words, when you can say something while using a bare minimum of them and that too so beautifully, it's an altogether next level.

I find myself in a spot where I get difficulty in saying a lot in less. You are truly blessed.

Keep blessing us with this lovely ficlets.

I'm in love with the concept as well.

Originally posted by: Arshi67

With just a few strokes you fill the canvas of your ficlets with striking and profound images. Each one has been lovely to read.

Thank you 🤗 Beauty is in the eye of the beholder so... You make the images come alive by reading 🤗

Originally posted by: Km181

If this was difficult part, you excelled in it. I love how simply in few words you convey the story, subtle yet so powerfully.

It's so relatable and totally as per the character arc. Anu slowly erasing one memory after another and Anuj so patient, understanding, loving and caring.

Thank you🤗It was really difficult to set the tone of the scene... Glad you liked it🤗

Originally posted by: Kp26

A clap to you for writing such scene.. like portraying how anuj is just for her.. how he is a gentleman.. 👏🏻❤

Thank you🤗He is the gentleman of many women's dreams😆

Originally posted by: DJ_3

Wow Tiana this was written really tastefully. 😊

Any reason you changed the colour of the flashback?

Everytime we think V cannot fall lower, he simply exceeda😡

I like the consent part too between both Anu and Anuj 😳

Thank you 🤗

Flashback was supposed to be blue... As I said uploading from mobile and IF sometimes behaves crazy there🤔

Originally posted by: grace2021

Loved it Tiana...wrote very beautifully. This is so intune with Maan especially Anu. How to described was profound.

Thank you 🤗I am working on the 5k cheque prompt you gave... Hope u will like it when I post it🤗

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey,

I don't know How I missed this thread earlier, happened to read all the shots together today and fell in love with it.

It's such a lovely and inspirational piece of art.

In the world of words, when you can say something while using a bare minimum of them and that too so beautifully, it's an altogether next level.

I find myself in a spot where I get difficulty in saying a lot in less. You are truly blessed.

Keep blessing us with this lovely ficlets.

I'm in love with the concept as well.

Thank you🤗Regarding the length... I tend to go off topic and lose the theme if I don't keep it crisp and short🙈... Honestly I admire people who can write a long fiction with multiple chapters with the plot intact...I have abandoned many FFs of mine because I couldn't continue 🙈

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She looked at her phone for the 45th time. He had called around 6 to inform he that he would be late as they had an important deal to crack and they had a meeting with some investors offshore. He had called her back at 8 and asked her to go to bed as he wouldn't be back before 10. She had left early to spend some time shopping with Devika. She had planned to surprise him tonight with a lovely suit she had picked up while shopping. She glanced at herself on the mirror once again. The pale green silk really complemented her skin and the jumka that Devika picked for her matched will with the suit. Suddenly out of the blue a jolt of memory struck her.

She had found a beautiful green saree in Vanraj's cupboard. Thinking it was a surprise she had blushed in happiness and had decided to please him by wearing it. She didn't know as she dressed up happily she was in for a huge shock. As soon as he returned and saw her in that saree he had screamed at her and asked her to change immediately. He had said he was highly stressed due to some deal and not in the mood when Bapuji had questioned him. She had later learnt that it had never been for her in the first place.

She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't hear him open the door or his low gasp as he saw her looking ethereal. He slowly cleared his throat.

"This is why I love coming home to you.... somehow you manage to take my breath away every time wifey.."

She started at his voice.

"Anuj...?"

He slowly checked her out walking towards her. She felt getting undone with each step he made towards her.

"You dressed up for me didn't you Darling?"

He bent close to her and pecked her cheeks. His voice husky with want, he whispered.

"Since you have taken so much efforts to please me it is only right that I take some effort to please you too..."

She blushed at his touch and pushed him back playfully.

"Leave me na... how was the deal?"

"The deal... oh we lost it... "

"Lost it?... but.. why.. how? You said it was very important and losing meant we loose a lot..."

He placed a finger on her lips slowly grazing her lower lip with his thumb.

"Shhh... I know that these lips are capable of better things... Who cares about deals when I have such a lovely wife to return home to... Now enough talk, I have something very important to do."

"What?"

"Compliment you, my dearest..."

Saying so, he pulled her towards him and placed a kiss below her earlobe. She shut her eyes and felt her body tremble with desire at the touch of his lips. He trailed his lips slowly down her neck placing wet kisses along the way. As she melted into his embrace her last sensible thought was how she would love to get such compliments from him everyday.

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Next part: Strawberries and Whipped Cream... If you know... you know.... Any guesses😉