Originally posted by: Bluekohl
You are right now what 21? I seen you write better then this woman who has several years of experience under her belt. let's just not compare you two
What an idiotic thing it was for him to Remember night out🤪
If you want to have sex then f****** do it but don't it bring it between a good relationship without sorting things out. Fuc#ing instead of talking isn't a good strategy
Does it count?? I'll be upgrading to next level adult in a few days 😂
They'll become that toxic couple who're on and off every few months
they have a twisted sense of what is romance and lust, what's admiration and love (writer kuch confuse hoga, or she's deliberately like this, i cant say)
You could be a good romantic scene writer and still miss the important bits... it's like having a 'one glove fits all' kind of plot, the way angst is amped with a third wheel... the same 2M 1F triangle from molkii (no offense to those who like it, it ticks me off) i believe it exploded on a marriage track too.
It doesn't always have to be a third wheel disrupting the pair, it could be a mirade of things.