Our tangled star strings, From you to me (FF on hiatus) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Ohh Sathya! I cant begin to tell how much the latest update has me enthralled. The one thing that ALWAYS irked me about the way they got marrier were the FINAL statements made to which they agreed.. coz like you so beautifully explained.. even though they chose to marry eo.. they were too cornered for it to be a choice! So i love the way they chose eo in your retelling.

Also thank you for the song recommendation. I havent heard the sunidhi chauhan version and i feel like i need to ASAP.

Along with the whole chapter i did love your rambling too. Might revisit to continue discussion!

Waiting for update!

Suparna🤗! It's like you jumped in my heart then spoke what you saw, you know? I really, really didn't appreciate the cornering. I feel like a stronger person would've run from the whole situation in a place like that, not giving two cents about Parivaar Ki Izzat, but Shivi are simply too selfless for that.... 😭

You should really listen to it. I heard it on a Shivi VM on IG which had me obsessed with it around the end of the third angle track, then searched for the song. She performed it at a live concert, which is available on YouTube, then again on Kapil Sharma, which is also there on YouTube. There's also a Sonu Nigam concert rendition of it, but this version was my personal favourite after the original.

Glad you liked the rambling, and feel free to return for discussion whenever you feel like it!

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Sathya your words always make an impression in my heart,the depth in your stories and povs is utter perfect and beyond any words I can say,update soon ya,this is was heart wrenching and beautiful.

Janki❤️! Glad you loved this so much! The next update will, hopefully, not take this long again. Mostly up in a two weeks or so, I think....

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Saathyaa... Become a doctor but publish your writings tooo ❤️

The way you write with so much depth ..so insightful...so detailed....the wording used all just transports me into another world. Its like समा बाँधना!

Starting with the letter... It was so painful to read through and imagining what all her parents would have wanted to do for their baby girl but they never really got the chance💔

It was good to have both shiva and raavi's views. Its good that raavi is taking decision on her own with all the शर्त coming up in next chapter.

Shiva's - Agar raavi maan gayi to ye shadi karunga... My dil❤️consent marzi which was raavi's haq. ✌

P.S.-After this I dont knw if I can watch PS anymore.. 😆😆

Neha🤗! One of the best compliments I've ever heard is what that last line is! That you prefer my writing over the original? We sooooooooo happy now🥳!

I'm glad you love it so much though! And you feel drawn into the story.... And yes! We'll be giving Raavi all of her lost haq here, we will! I have a POV that I want to write, but might end up being interesting to see how people react to it.... For the next update I mean. 😆

Originally posted by: Iktara22

TWO WEEKS?😭

Oh Janki😆! That's the longest possible time! I'm stuck between record work and an important posting at college. My Uni exams start in March as well..... I'm sowwwyyyyy 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺!!!! I'll TRY to put up a faster update, okay? 😳

Here! Also, let me know if I should add you on my regular list of tags, kay?

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Neha🤗! One of the best compliments I've ever heard is what that last line is! That you prefer my writing over the original? We sooooooooo happy now🥳!

I'm glad you love it so much though! And you feel drawn into the story.... And yes! We'll be giving Raavi all of her lost haq here, we will! I have a POV that I want to write, but might end up being interesting to see how people react to it.... For the next update I mean. 😆

Originals.... Are they really😆waise bhi I am only on precaps and segments🤣

I strongly believe that you would bring out something praiseworthy only for the next chapter🤗

Sathya... I started reading this at least three times and all three times i got interrupted by my Los.... So I'm going to comment soon...

But i read halfway through the letter and can i just put this out to the writers... I want to see Raavi's parents doting on a ten day old Raavi please!!!! Asap!!! 😍😍😍

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Sathya... I started reading this at least three times and all three times i got interrupted by my Los.... So I'm going to comment soon...

But i read halfway through the letter and can i just put this out to the writers... I want to see Raavi's parents doting on a ten day old Raavi please!!!! Asap!!! 😍😍😍

Oh Min! That's okay! I haven't commented properly on any story in a weeks now, I think. Real life needs to take a priority sometimes... 😆

As for Raavi's parents doting on her? There's quite the bit of drama in the next few chapters, I think. But I'll definitely consider adding this in once the drama ends, okay? 😳

The start was so amazing, it reminded me of the Bent Neck Lady from Haunting of the Hill House, the scene which blows our mind, similarly how Raavi glances though all of the future scenes. Chills, Literal Chills.

Adding the past into the future always makes it so comfy and better, I'd know that lol, it just give so much freedom to shape the story and I am so eager to see where this story heads.

Also, what shart does this Raavi want to impose on everyone, super excited.

Do update soon but of course, life>>>

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Yaar pls continue this ff it's interesting ❤️

And her mom's letter was soo beautiful ❤️

What is Raavi's condition to get married ??

Pls update