Our tangled star strings, From you to me (FF on hiatus) - Page 8

An emotional one.

I'd start off with the letter, it was an unexpectedly beautiful surprise. Something too precious without even getting to the hands of our heroine or hero for that fact. Its just there. In the beginning, with content that comes right through the heart and reaches to a reader's soul. Ngl the 'Teri Shaadi ke din tho ye saari baatein btani hi hongi tujhe tho abhi kya likhun dubara?' hit me hard. She thought she had the time, she'd be with her and now she is just simply gone. The last couple of lines also broke my heart. They didn't knew they weren't going to come back and be with their daughter again ever. It is painful.

I LOVED how to panned the the scene immediately to Shiva instead of Raavi. Hear me out : When you read the letter you feel the recipient would be shown next but no, the Sathya I know does things differently and that is why she knows how much I absolutely adore her. THIS, this cinematic excellence is the reason we pester her all the wayyyy.

I am loving this Raavi. She stood up for herself in front of Dhara like a boss. No matter the hurt and swamp of agony she was in. She stood her ground and stated point blank that you have mere 30 minutes to try anything and by that I mean I won't marry your Dev beta no matter what you do. You have no business taking me for granted. She hasn't read the letter yet but she's here doing what her Mona wanted her to do, in life.

Liked how Mausa Paa tried convincing her in the end. But she STILL has something for us...I cannot wait for the 'Shart' you've GOT TO keep updating this sooner woman. Aise ek ek mahine mein karegi tho mera kyaaaaa hoyegggaaa Behnaaa? 🤡

Update soonish Bubzooo.

We love you.

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Finally you updated this!!!!!!!!!!

It was great😘🥰😍

And i am eager to know Raavi's condition........

Do update soon.......

Glad you loved it❤️! Here's to hoping the next update will be soon! 😆

Sathya, love this update! ❤️ Though it was emotional was nice to read to both Raavi and Shiva’s POV. The details you go into to explain their thought process is indeed commendable. The letter from Raavi’s Mom, what a refreshing thought and she needed that to make her own decision. I am so looking forward to reading Raavi’s condition. It is going to be interesting as I don’t want Raavi to face things that she doesn’t deserve. This whole thing was not her fault.

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great update.

Can't wait for raavi's condition

Update soon

Thank you! I'll try to do my best about that!

Sathya, What an emotional yet beautiful update.❤️ Honestly, I just have no words to describe how good this is. The writing is just top-notch. 🤗

Waiting patiently for the next update👍🏼

Ohh Sathya! I cant begin to tell how much the latest update has me enthralled. The one thing that ALWAYS irked me about the way they got marrier were the FINAL statements made to which they agreed.. coz like you so beautifully explained.. even though they chose to marry eo.. they were too cornered for it to be a choice! So i love the way they chose eo in your retelling.

Also thank you for the song recommendation. I havent heard the sunidhi chauhan version and i feel like i need to ASAP.

Along with the whole chapter i did love your rambling too. Might revisit to continue discussion!

Waiting for update!

Sathya your words always make an impression in my heart,the depth in your stories and povs is utter perfect and beyond any words I can say,update soon ya,this is was heart wrenching and beautiful.

Saathyaa... Become a doctor but publish your writings tooo ❤️

The way you write with so much depth ..so insightful...so detailed....the wording used all just transports me into another world. Its like समा बाँधना!

Starting with the letter... It was so painful to read through and imagining what all her parents would have wanted to do for their baby girl but they never really got the chance💔

It was good to have both shiva and raavi's views. Its good that raavi is taking decision on her own with all the शर्त coming up in next chapter.

Shiva's - Agar raavi maan gayi to ye shadi karunga... My dil❤️consent marzi which was raavi's haq. ✌

P.S.-After this I dont knw if I can watch PS anymore.. 😆😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Me crying over my position like 🤡

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Me too also sad as I was not the first on the Tag list 🥺

Mere tho account ne hi bhasad kr rakhi thi 🤪