Kiska Rasta Dekhe Ae Dil : An Arylie ff Ch.5 : Ochre Yellow p.15 - Page 5

Originally posted by: reginalsecret

Sh*t sh*t sh*t da fugg did I just read... that was so graphic...felt it in my bones I swear.. I was hoping the (somewhat) cliche sindoor scene wouldn't happen but then it did and I dunno what to feel about it... And that last line had me spontaneously combusting..

Hon, why do I have a feeling they're lifting your content straight off the forum.. I swear this feels like an uncanny prediction of things to come.... I'm still tryna process the bts I saw on TT so this just became the cherry on top

Thanks for tagging

Ye kaunsa BTS hai be? Humko bhi batao bhai.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Ye kaunsa BTS hai be? Humko bhi batao bhai.

Lol, directors hume koi na koi ishare dete rehte hain aur ye dono toh ise raat mein hi daal diya, sabke neend udane ke liye

Ye angst wala:

https://twitter.com/glsm_trzi/status/1485307246716272642?s=20

Aur ye woh manhoos jhopde wala:

https://twitter.com/MemeQueenOshin/status/1485326071772102656?s=20

Enjoy!

Originally posted by: reginalsecret

Lol, directors hume koi na koi ishare dete rehte hain aur ye dono toh ise raat mein hi daal diya, sabke neend udane ke liye

Ye angst wala:

https://twitter.com/glsm_trzi/status/1485307246716272642?s=20

Aur ye woh manhoos jhopde wala:

https://twitter.com/MemeQueenOshin/status/1485326071772102656?s=20

Enjoy!

Oh good lord, I am still not over these.

Originally posted by: moksha89

I love the sensory details, here. You’re a descriptive writer so I enjoy that it provides a setting and allows the “lines inbtwn” to be molded by my imagination. The description of Imlie’s home was so nicely done - I’m a fan of seeing the beauty in the quaint normalcy of life

I equate Aryan and his portrayal to feline qualities: observant, intelligence, and grace. Mischievous, intuitive & sudden at times. Loved that you included some of his guidance at the end

Mikku! (May I please call you that? My brain is caffeine-fried.)

We get to see a hut, no? Can't say I am that mad at Bhau for last week. I wish they had paid more attention to the cinematographic details in the PD track. The Adini wedding track had top notch, though overly dramatic, visuals.

Oh forgot to add the main thing :

I am trying to write better scripts for them. So hopefullllllllly my characterisation of either Aru or Imlie isn't too far off from the canon.

Originally posted by: mltr16

🤣Those songs are a trap!! I started listening and now its been playing on loop for the past 30 minutes while I do mundane 🤢 things like fold laundry. I am convinced Aryan must have been in military boarding school as a kid or something. Every move he makes is calculated and professional. I can totally visualize Imlie rushing forward to Amma in an impulse to bash the goon's face, totally forgetting that they were in stealth mode. No, we leave that to Aryan to sameto the faila raita. I was on the edge of my seat as they kept saying they were surely getting killed, surely this was it. I was literally biting into my lip, waiting to see how this was going to end. The marriage itself was so spur of the moment, a man protecting his woman from verbal and physical assault. Very raw and natural. His immediate, "F*ck" after that was perrrrrfect in the situation.

"Babusaheeeeeb", Imlie carried him to the amubulance, held his hand and instructed the medic to save him at any cost. Two other bleeding women, and Aryan Singh Rathore were cramped in the same ambulance.

"Babusaheb ko kucch nahi howat rahe. Amma aur nahi ko bhi kucch nahi howat rahees. Sab theek hui jaees." She held a crying Aparna in her arms and kept guard of the operation theatre.

No one apart from Malini Tripathi and Narmada Rathore had seen the sindoor in her maang.

I had to re-read that a few times, to understand suddenly Aparna kahaan se tapki, to realize we were now at a hospital, not in PD anymore. How did Imlie carry BS to the ambulance? Anytime I read or hear Babusaheeeeeb it makes me shudder in revulsion. You had to put that in there, in that tone, didn't you? Sadist kahin ki!!! 🤣🤣 I can only imagine how it might grate on Aryan's nerves.

Another confusiya wala koschin, how come only Malini and Narmada saw the sindoor? Were the others simply so distraught that they didn;t notice it?

Aryan ko ab pata chalega, never, ever cross Satyakaam's favorite shishyaa, Imlie Kumari phrom Pagdandiya. Tch, tch, tch, tch. I feel sorry for him. Aryan ka alpha roop kab dekhne ku milega? Ya is rishte mein Jungli Imlie is on top always... all puns intended 😳😳

Song choice as always, ek number!! ❤️

Accha essay samapt. Aapki bullying aapko waapis. Ab aap humari tender love ishtories padhane kab padharengi, aur mere jaise essays comments mein kab likhengi?? batao, batao? ❤️❤️

Oh M? This is just my caffeine-fried brain and anger-fuelled adrenaline speaking but how great would FK and ST be in emoting the song, though?

An oblivious, BS-ing Imlie, and a quiet but tormented Aru? Trying not to feel jealous and heartbroken? Imlie in her light salwar and Aru in his Black shirt. Camera going all racked focus between Aru who's looking at Imlie looking at BS-Jiju through the OT/ward windowpane.

The lights would be dim because it's night-shift at the hospital?

His yellow make-up put to good use for the first time.

Bhau ke messengers please yeh sandesha bhijwa dijiye.

Interesting & very engaging story

More like sindoor Bhari maang 🤣🤣

And what's with the bullying ritual? 🤭

Originally posted by: SundariP

More like sindoor Bhari maang 🤣🤣

And what's with the bullying ritual? 🤭

Tum humein daant rahi ho kya monitor sahiba? It is called mutual understanding. Kahaan koi bullying kiye hain. 😳😳

Oh my god. I finally read this and now I know Why you were asking me about why I was wondering why she bit his arm, I’m dying.😂😂😂😂 Please continue I need to know, you need to continue.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Tum humein daant rahi ho kya monitor sahiba? It is called mutual understanding. Kahaan koi bullying kiye hain. 😳😳

Ham daant rapat ke bas gana sunate hain

https://youtu.be/beDmrOD88mA