Kiska Rasta Dekhe Ae Dil : An Arylie ff Ch.5 : Ochre Yellow p.15 - Page 4

Sorry, I had the great idea of drinking two huge mugs of espresso in the afternoon.

Still a shorter than the PD track though.

Feel free to not read it and ask me to untag you

I think I held my breath the entire f'ing time. So very gripping, I could visualize every move as they moved stealthily to the water tank. I am officially in love with your writing. ❤️ Floored!

End cliffhanger hai, Pooja. @blue next time clarification milega na?

Originally posted by: mltr16

I think I held my breath the entire f'ing time. So very gripping, I could visualize every move as they moved stealthily to the water tank. I am officially in love with your writing. ❤️ Floored!

End cliffhanger hai, Pooja. @blue next time clarification milega na?

Shadi ho gayi ... Uske baad ki rasam bhi initiate ho gayi .... No cliff hanger for me....

Total action packed update.... Agar aisa kuchh screen pe dekhne miley toh aag lag jaye ...

And good use of all characters Jo imlie writer team se not expected....

Wo bas panna pari swachh Bharat script likh sakte hai

And hum bewakuf type usme sense khojte hain!!!

Love your version of events ❤️

Thanks for tagging, Blue! Will be back soon.

Originally posted by: mltr16

I think I held my breath the entire f'ing time. So very gripping, I could visualize every move as they moved stealthily to the water tank. I am officially in love with your writing. ❤️ Floored!

End cliffhanger hai, Pooja. @blue next time clarification milega na?

A bigger review please. I will force-feed you the song if I have to

Originally posted by: Bluegrass

A bigger review please. I will force-feed you the song if I have to

🤣Those songs are a trap!! I started listening and now its been playing on loop for the past 30 minutes while I do mundane 🤢 things like fold laundry. I am convinced Aryan must have been in military boarding school as a kid or something. Every move he makes is calculated and professional. I can totally visualize Imlie rushing forward to Amma in an impulse to bash the goon's face, totally forgetting that they were in stealth mode. No, we leave that to Aryan to sameto the faila raita. I was on the edge of my seat as they kept saying they were surely getting killed, surely this was it. I was literally biting into my lip, waiting to see how this was going to end. The marriage itself was so spur of the moment, a man protecting his woman from verbal and physical assault. Very raw and natural. His immediate, "F*ck" after that was perrrrrfect in the situation.

"Babusaheeeeeb", Imlie carried him to the amubulance, held his hand and instructed the medic to save him at any cost. Two other bleeding women, and Aryan Singh Rathore were cramped in the same ambulance.

"Babusaheb ko kucch nahi howat rahe. Amma aur nahi ko bhi kucch nahi howat rahees. Sab theek hui jaees." She held a crying Aparna in her arms and kept guard of the operation theatre.

No one apart from Malini Tripathi and Narmada Rathore had seen the sindoor in her maang.

I had to re-read that a few times, to understand suddenly Aparna kahaan se tapki, to realize we were now at a hospital, not in PD anymore. How did Imlie carry BS to the ambulance? Anytime I read or hear Babusaheeeeeb it makes me shudder in revulsion. You had to put that in there, in that tone, didn't you? Sadist kahin ki!!! 🤣🤣 I can only imagine how it might grate on Aryan's nerves.

Another confusiya wala koschin, how come only Malini and Narmada saw the sindoor? Were the others simply so distraught that they didn;t notice it?

Aryan ko ab pata chalega, never, ever cross Satyakaam's favorite shishyaa, Imlie Kumari phrom Pagdandiya. Tch, tch, tch, tch. I feel sorry for him. Aryan ka alpha roop kab dekhne ku milega? Ya is rishte mein Jungli Imlie is on top always... all puns intended 😳😳

Song choice as always, ek number!! ❤️

Accha essay samapt. Aapki bullying aapko waapis. Ab aap humari tender love ishtories padhane kab padharengi, aur mere jaise essays comments mein kab likhengi?? batao, batao? ❤️❤️

Sh*t sh*t sh*t da fugg did I just read... that was so graphic...felt it in my bones I swear.. I was hoping the (somewhat) cliche sindoor scene wouldn't happen but then it did and I dunno what to feel about it... And that last line had me spontaneously combusting..

Hon, why do I have a feeling they're lifting your content straight off the forum.. I swear this feels like an uncanny prediction of things to come.... I'm still tryna process the bts I saw on TT so this just became the cherry on top

Thanks for tagging

Originally posted by: reginalsecret

Sh*t sh*t sh*t da fugg did I just read... that was so graphic...felt it in my bones I swear.. I was hoping the (somewhat) cliche sindoor scene wouldn't happen but then it did and I dunno what to feel about it... And that last line had me spontaneously combusting..

Hon, why do I have a feeling they're lifting your content straight off the forum.. I swear this feels like an uncanny prediction of things to come.... I'm still tryna process the bts I saw on TT so this just became the cherry on top

Thanks for tagging

Okay, what BTS?

Mamma, I am trying to write better scripts than them so thoda bahut clichés to make sense of their stupid BTS as of now. I almost didn't want to write that cliché scene, but it's at the same time not clichéd? Hopefully?