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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

Isko tum as Drabble kar do and jo OS/SS wala thread hai na..waha link daal dena..❤️


Ye bro iska acha sa title choose kar or post kar de❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Yeh Drabble mein count hota hai...? Agar hota hai, toh how about a series of these diary entries? Abhi nahi, dheere dheere karke ek thread par moments ki.

Like:

1. Monami confesses her love to him.

2. His emotions due to Monami's anger after the rejection.

3. Yeh wala scene.

4. His realization

5. His emotions after the gunshot wala track, right before he realizes about Walnut forcing her to leave the academy.

6. Cave wala scene, before he realizes that Monami doesn't remember.


Aur koi scene hai, toh bataana... Sab likh kar har roz ek post karoongi. What say?

Yes..good idea.You can title it as KarMi drabbles and then keep updating that post with new ones. Just reserve a post for index for easy reference.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Yeh Drabble mein count hota hai...? Agar hota hai, toh how about a series of these diary entries? Abhi nahi, dheere dheere karke ek thread par moments ki.

Like:

1. Monami confesses her love to him.

2. His emotions due to Monami's anger after the rejection.

3. Yeh wala scene.

4. His realization

5. His emotions after the gunshot wala track, right before he realizes about Walnut forcing her to leave the academy.

6. Cave wala scene, before he realizes that Monami doesn't remember.


Aur koi scene hai, toh bataana... Sab likh kar har roz ek post karoongi. What say?


Kal wala scene bhi please jab Monami ne take off se pehle hi plane land Kara diya😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Le liye par thand lag rah rahi thi toh uthne ka mood nahi tha par kisine nahi diye toh kii option bhi nahi tha😂😂

sada hua mausam hai itna..pata nahi kab jayega..😔

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

sada hua mausam hai itna..pata nahi kab jayega..😔


Garmi se toh better hai😂


Par chala jayega ek do month mark mein😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Kal wala scene bhi please jab Monami ne take off se pehle hi plane land Kara diya😂

Khushi aane se pehle hi waapis leli..😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Garmi se toh better hai😂


Par chala jayega ek do month mark mein😂

dono hi nahi pasand mujhe..

autumn wala hi time theek rehta hai..😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

AT khatam karni hai..

tum log bhi aao..

hum 3 bechare kitna karenge..😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Okay toh maine phir se scenes dekhe toh yahi samajh aaya ki karan ka excuse me offending zyada sound ho raha tha or hurt wali feel kam thii😳


Use laga ki itna sab kuch kiya par uske baare mein baat toh chodo ise toh yahi nahi pata ki kyun kiya but baad mein jab usne kaha rehne do or chala jata hai tab wo genuinely hurt hota hai🥺


Monami toh isi zone mein hai ki yeh bohot weird behave kar raha hai or use lagta hai ki isne fir kuch kiya hai use khud pe hi doubt hai karan pe nahi😆


Or ye Pushpa ka bhi close up scene tha jab KarMi bat kar rahe the ye pakka kuch karegi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Okay toh maine phir se scenes dekhe toh yahi samajh aaya ki karan ka excuse me offending zyada sound ho raha tha or hurt wali feel kam thii😳


Use laga ki itna sab kuch kiya par uske baare mein baat toh chodo ise toh yahi nahi pata ki kyun kiya but baad mein jab usne kaha rehne do or chala jata hai tab wo genuinely hurt hota hai🥺


Monami toh isi zone mein hai ki yeh bohot weird behave kar raha hai or use lagta hai ki isne fir kuch kiya hai use khud pe hi doubt hai karan pe nahi😆


Or ye Pushpa ka bhi close up scene tha jab KarMi bat kar rahe the ye pakka kuch karegi

main phir dekh kar aayi..mujhe toh uska "shock" wala hi excuse me laga😁

Jab se usne Karan ko bola hai ,we will start afresh..tab se Karan dusre hi tangent par chal raha hai..Aneesh ke aane pad toh aur bhi zyaada..😂

Pushpa ka samajh nahi aaya..I thought woh Karan ke jaane ka wait kar rahi thi..ki woh jaaye and she can replace the mike..😕

maybe woh 2-3 baar KarMi ko saath main dekhegi and samajh jayegi and keep it as backup option in case her plan fails..

Edited by mineforever - 3 years ago

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