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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever


Maybe "Diary entries of Khadoos Shergill" (Yeh bahut basic hai but aur kuch nahi strike kar raha 😂)


Journey of Aashiq Shergill 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Lovely first meet ka bhi likh na aisa kuch😂


And jab wo aneesh ke sath dete pe jaati hai uska bhimm be please🥺

Woh episodes dekh kar likhti huin..

abhi cave walein dekhungi aur woh likhungi..😂

phir yeh phir likhti huin..

Tum bhi likho kuch ..maybe poetry on these particular episodes..? It will be a good contrast..❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

Ep 100

Its the same night where he told her the reasons for not loving her and they decided to start afresh.

Karan should have been happy but he wasnt. Perfectly defined line:

"Benaam rishta woh, bechaan karta jo, ho na sake jo baiyaa"

She had freed him from her love then why did it feel like prison instead of freedom..

His awkward attempt to talk to her..ki kuch toh bolein..maybe this uneasiness would go away..but this time both didnt know what to say to each other..

Then the night ended with him holding her hand because again his subconscious knew what his heart wanted and his heart yearned for her. He didnt want to let her go. Didnt want to accept the distance b/w them and this awkward navigation of how to function without being in each other's space. He didnt realise he was feeling this because the last barrier had fallen as soon as he told her about his past.


Ep 102 *Favourite* 31st Dec episode ❤️

Next morning, he wanted to ask her if she was going anywhere but kis haq se puchta usse..

It pricked him when she just walked away from him. Jo hamesha usse kuch na kuch bolti thi ,aaj bina kuch kahe hi chali gayi..kyun.

This time words failed him. He didnt know what to say or how to say to her.Nothing made sense.He was feeling different but still didnt want to accept that he was in love with her.

His mind could keep denying but now his dil refused to be suppressed. He started searching for her as soon as he entered the party, usne Sid ko bola to enjoy party with other people,even if Monami was not there but khud phir bhi his heart kept searching for his dhadkan.

His heart felt happy on seeing her again but phir bhi he denied till the chandelier was about to fall on her.

That shifted everything in focus for him & the commando finally accepted that he loved her,had loved her all this while.❤️

She had become his heartbeat,his reason to live.Now there would be no going back.

Jaise koi kinaara
Deta ho sahaara
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par
Koi raat ka taara
Karta ho ujaala
Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar

Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa
Kuch aisa asar huaa
Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha

Hmm.. Jaise baarish kar de tar
Yaa marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar


Tera analysis padh kar hi likha hai pata nahi kaisa h😅



Chuta jab tera sath toh kuch ehsaas hua,

Tera mera woh rishta jaane kyun khaas hua,

Khwabon mein tum aane jane lage,

Bankar iss dil ki dhadkan dhadakne lage,

Zindagi se meri jitna tum dur the,

Shayad utna meri yaadon mein tum mashhur the,

Tere izhaar-e-ishq ka har alfaaz yaad tha,

Inn dhundhali si raahon mein bas wo hi toh mere sath tha,

Kehta tha tu mere seene mein bhi kuch hasta hai,

Jab maaloom hua toh tu hi tha jo mera dil ban dhadakta hai,

Tu kehta raha mai sun na paaya, tere samjhane par samajh na paaya,

Par jab tujhse dur hone ka ehsaas hua toh teri har baat se inkaar kar na paaya.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ep103

Who was this person who came between him & Monami. Was he too late?

Look at me ,Monami! See me! I get what you meant. I get it. Why wont you look at me once, smile with me;just like you used to before.

This person knew everything about her.

He had himself closed the door and jab tak realise hua tab tak koi aur aa chuka tha and that person was interested in her.

It hurt him to see her with someone else, someone who shared history with her, who knew her maybe better than himself.

That person twirled her and she stood in front of him. They were so near yet so far apart.

She loved him.He rejected her. He realised his love but it was too late.

Was, this is it? End to their love, before it even began? No. He wouldn't give up so easily. The fight had just begun.


Ep 104

That person thought he knew his Monami but he was wrong. He might have known her likes/dislikes but he didnt know the core of his Monami. How strong she was, what battles she had fought,how she had reached till here.He knew her. Faizi had been right.


Ep 105

But again,what if her feelings had changed? What if she no longer loved him?

He could also make her feel special. He would take her to meet the other important person in his life, Baby. But again he was too late. She had gone out with that person.

So much frustration,so much anger. Why? Why was nothing going right? Who was that person to take out his Monami? It was past the cut off time. Was she fine? Why didnt he realise his love sooner?

No,he wouldnt let these thoughts come into his head. She had confessed that she loved him and not that person so how could he give up so soon.He would fight for her love.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Tera analysis padh kar hi likha hai pata nahi kaisa h😅



Chuta jab tera sath toh kuch ehsaas hua,

Tera mera woh rishta jaane kyun khaas hua,

Khwabon mein tum aane jane lage,

Bankar iss dil ki dhadkan dhadakne lage,

Zindagi se meri jitna tum dur the,

Shayad utna meri yaadon mein tum mashhur the,

Tere izhaar-e-ishq ka har alfaaz yaad tha,

Inn dhundhali si raahon mein bas wo hi toh mere sath tha,

Kehta tha tu mere seene mein bhi kuch hasta hai,

Jab maaloom hua toh tu hi tha jo mera dil ban dhadakta hai,

Tu kehta raha mai sun na paaya, tere samjhane par samajh na paaya,

Par jab tujhse dur hone ka ehsaas hua toh teri har baat se inkaar kar na paaya.

Wow..amazing. ❤️

Perfectly written. Its like jo main bolna cha rahi thi usse exactly poetry main bol diya bikul ..❤️❤️❤️

SherDilNetaji thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

Ep103

Who was this person who came between him & Monami. Was he too late?

Look at me ,Monami! See me! I get what you meant. I get it. Why wont you look at me once, smile with me;just like you used to before.

This person knew everything about her.

He had himself closed the door and jab tak realise hua tab tak koi aur aa chuka tha and that person was interested in her.

It hurt him to see her with someone else, someone who shared history with her, who knew her maybe better than himself.

That person twirled her and she stood in front of him. They were so near yet so far apart.

She loved him.He rejected her. He realised his love but it was too late.

Was, this is it? End to their love, before it even began? No. He wouldn't give up so easily. The fight had just begun.


Ep 104

That person thought he knew his Monami but he was wrong. He might have known her likes/dislikes but he didnt know the core of his Monami. How strong she was, what battles she had fought,how she had reached till here.He knew her. Faizi had been right.


Ep 105

But again,what if her feelings had changed? What if she no longer loved him?

He could also make her feel special. He would take her to meet the other important person in his life, Baby. But again he was too late. She had gone out with that person.

So much frustration,so much anger. Why? Why was nothing going right? Who was that person to take out his Monami? It was past the cut off time. Was she fine? Why didnt he realise his love sooner?

No,he wouldnt let these thoughts come into his head. She had confessed that she loved him and not that person so how could he give up so soon.He would fight for her love.


Jab hua mujhe ehsaas ki tu hi is dil mein dhadakta hai,

Tera ban ye dil kuch yun hi aawara sa bhatakta hai,

Sunna chahte the tum jo sab wo kehne aaya tha,

Par kyun fir tere mere beech kisi aur ko paaya tha,

Tu hi toh mehkata hai inn saanson mein pal pal,

Fir kyun khada tha darmiyan hamare tumhara woh kal,

Teri mohabbat pe nahi hai zara bhi shaq,

Par kya ab bhi hai tujhse mohabbat karne ka mera yeh haq,

Muskurate the jab tum mujhe dekh kar,

Dekhte the mujhe yun mud mud kar,

Woh lamhe bohot haseen the,

Par fir kyun ab tum paas hokar bhi mujhse dur the,

Meri yeh zindagi tere naam karne aaya tha,

Fir bhi kyun tumhe khud se itna dur paaya tha.

Edited by Rani_Sahiba - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Ep 112 & 113

Her friend was heartbroken and we were talking about her friend, until it was no longer about her friend, but them.

Her still broken heart, him still unable to say and then all these unsaid feelings b/w them.

He wanted to say that he had changed.He understood what love & being in love meant but phir adhoora rahe gaya..it wasnt the right time. Her friend needed her more than him,right now.

He may not have been able to say the words but he could atleast take care of her,bring a smile on her face, make her forget about her worries for some time.

It was only them. Her in his arms.

Ep 114

Her family had left. Her world was falling apart. Now what would she do? She wanted to cry, wanted to run to find her family. She didnt know what do. Then he came. The storm inside her calmed a bit. He was here. He would handle everything.He would help her find her family.Yes.

He explained and she understood. She would give her friend the space he needed. The storm inside her resided.

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