Shaleen - Kaveri {KarMi} • |AT#5| Yes Meri Jaan! ❤️ - Page 89

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Mujhe toh yeh lag raha hai ki kahin uska dimaag kharaab na ho jaaye, isliye usne yaa toh kiss ko dream samajh kar dismiss kar diya, ya usko ignore kar rahi hai. Warna, pehle toh hypothermia ki wajah se behosh hui thi, aur ab shock ki wajah se ho jayegi.

Merko toh pura yakeen hai wo dream samajh rahi hai😂😂

A HYPOTHETICAL DIARY ENTRY FROM KARAN'S DIARY AFTER THE SCENE WHERE MONAMI FREES HIM FROM HER LOVE:

Monami ne mujhe azaad kiya, apne pyaar se. Yahi toh chahta tha main. Humaare beech kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta hai. Meri zindagi mein pyaar ki koi jagah nahi hai. Phir kyun uske jaane se bura lag raha hai mujhe?

Param Bhaiya ke baare mein bataaya use. Kitne saal ho gaye uss mission ke baad, par aaj pehli baar, uss raat ki feelings share kari hain kisi ke saath. Kyun Monami ke saath hi mann kiya yeh sab kuch share karne ka? Aisa kya hai us mein jo mujhe uski har baat se farak padta hai?

Kyun khush nahi hoon main uske jaane se? Ek cadet ke alaawa humaara kya hi rishta tha? Uske izhaar se pehle bhi cadet thi, aur ab bhi, toh kyun yeh azaadi achhi nahi lag rahi hai?

Jab usne mujhe hug kara aur maine use, toh kyun duniya maano ek minute ke liye tham gayi thi, aur sirf hum the us ek pal mein? Naa academy thi, naa yeh mission. Naa wo thi, naa main. Sirf hum the. Uss ek pal mein aisa laga jaise zindagi mil gayi ho, jeene ki wajah mil gayi ho. Kyun? Aisa kya hai Monami mein, jo mujhe uski taraf kheenchta hai?

Kal, hum bas ek cadet-trainer dobara ban jayenge. Yahi toh rishta hai, na, humaara? Trainer Karan Shergill, aur Cadet Monami Mahajan. Bas. Toh phir kyun yeh achha nahi lag raha hai mujhe? Jis raat usne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, wahi sab kyun sun raha hai mujhe? Kyun sirf wahi yaad aa raha hai?

Kya ho gaya hai mujhe? What's wrong with me?

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

A HYPOTHETICAL DIARY ENTRY FROM KARAN'S DIARY AFTER THE SCENE WHERE MONAMI FREES HIM FROM HER LOVE:

Monami ne mujhe azaad kiya, apne pyaar se. Yahi toh chahta tha main. Humaare beech kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta hai. Meri zindagi mein pyaar ki koi jagah nahi hai. Phir kyun uske jaane se bura lag raha hai mujhe?

Param Bhaiya ke baare mein bataaya use. Kitne saal ho gaye uss mission ke baad, par aaj pehli baar, uss raat ki feelings share kari hain kisi ke saath. Kyun Monami ke saath hi mann kiya yeh sab kuch share karne ka? Aisa kya hai us mein jo mujhe uski har baat se farak padta hai?

Kyun khush nahi hoon main uske jaane se? Ek cadet ke alaawa humaara kya hi rishta tha? Uske izhaar se pehle bhi cadet thi, aur ab bhi, toh kyun yeh azaadi achhi nahi lag rahi hai?

Jab usne mujhe hug kara aur maine use, toh kyun duniya maano ek minute ke liye tham gayi thi, aur sirf hum the us ek pal mein? Naa academy thi, naa yeh mission. Naa wo thi, naa main. Sirf hum the. Uss ek pal mein aisa laga jaise zindagi mil gayi ho, jeene ki wajah mil gayi ho. Kyun? Aisa kya hai Monami mein, jo mujhe uski taraf kheenchta hai?

Kal, hum bas ek cadet-trainer dobara ban jayenge. Yahi toh rishta hai, na, humaara? Trainer Karan Shergill, aur Cadet Monami Mahajan. Bas. Toh phir kyun yeh achha nahi lag raha hai mujhe? Jis raat usne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, wahi sab kyun sun raha hai mujhe? Kyun sirf wahi yaad aa raha hai?

Kya ho gaya hai mujhe? What's wrong with me?

Sahi mein agar karan likhta toh yahi likhta❤️

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

A HYPOTHETICAL DIARY ENTRY FROM KARAN'S DIARY AFTER THE SCENE WHERE MONAMI FREES HIM FROM HER LOVE:

Monami ne mujhe azaad kiya, apne pyaar se. Yahi toh chahta tha main. Humaare beech kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta hai. Meri zindagi mein pyaar ki koi jagah nahi hai. Phir kyun uske jaane se bura lag raha hai mujhe?

Param Bhaiya ke baare mein bataaya use. Kitne saal ho gaye uss mission ke baad, par aaj pehli baar, uss raat ki feelings share kari hain kisi ke saath. Kyun Monami ke saath hi mann kiya yeh sab kuch share karne ka? Aisa kya hai us mein jo mujhe uski har baat se farak padta hai?

Kyun khush nahi hoon main uske jaane se? Ek cadet ke alaawa humaara kya hi rishta tha? Uske izhaar se pehle bhi cadet thi, aur ab bhi, toh kyun yeh azaadi achhi nahi lag rahi hai?

Jab usne mujhe hug kara aur maine use, toh kyun duniya maano ek minute ke liye tham gayi thi, aur sirf hum the us ek pal mein? Naa academy thi, naa yeh mission. Naa wo thi, naa main. Sirf hum the. Uss ek pal mein aisa laga jaise zindagi mil gayi ho, jeene ki wajah mil gayi ho. Kyun? Aisa kya hai Monami mein, jo mujhe uski taraf kheenchta hai?

Kal, hum bas ek cadet-trainer dobara ban jayenge. Yahi toh rishta hai, na, humaara? Trainer Karan Shergill, aur Cadet Monami Mahajan. Bas. Toh phir kyun yeh achha nahi lag raha hai mujhe? Jis raat usne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, wahi sab kyun sun raha hai mujhe? Kyun sirf wahi yaad aa raha hai?

Kya ho gaya hai mujhe? What's wrong with me?

Pata nahi kaisa hai. 10 minute mein likha hai. Random hai, shayad utna achha bhi nahi. Par jo mujhe nahi bhi achha lagta, wo tum logon ko achha lagta hai, toh... I don't know.

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Haan yr par headphones dusre room mein hai😂😂

toh uth kar le aao..🤦😁

Originally posted by: mineforever

wow..😍

Thanks... 😃

Is it worth posting in the Wabi-Sabi thread?

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Pata nahi kaisa hai. 10 minute mein likha hai. Random hai, shayad utna achha bhi nahi. Par jo mujhe nahi bhi achha lagta, wo tum logon ko achha lagta hai, toh... I don't know.

Isko tum as Drabble kar do and jo OS/SS wala thread hai na..waha link daal dena..❤️

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Thanks... 😃

Is it worth posting in the Wabi-Sabi thread?

I think you should post it as KarMi drabble in separate thread..❤️

Originally posted by: mineforever

Isko tum as Drabble kar do and jo OS/SS wala thread hai na..waha link daal dena..❤️

Yeh Drabble mein count hota hai...? Agar hota hai, toh how about a series of these diary entries? Abhi nahi, dheere dheere karke ek thread par moments ki.

Like:

1. Monami confesses her love to him.

2. His emotions due to Monami's anger after the rejection.

3. Yeh wala scene.

4. His realization

5. His emotions after the gunshot wala track, right before he realizes about Walnut forcing her to leave the academy.

6. Cave wala scene, before he realizes that Monami doesn't remember.

Aur koi scene hai, toh bataana... Sab likh kar har roz ek post karoongi. What say?

Originally posted by: mineforever

toh uth kar le aao..🤦😁

Le liye par thand lag rah rahi thi toh uthne ka mood nahi tha par kisine nahi diye toh kii option bhi nahi tha😂😂