IN THE NEED OF TIME- SHIVI TS last part on pg18....completed - Page 6

Going Great 😍😍😍😍 i think so its turn to be dream of shiva ... And then some how he will find clue of her there also

‘sar ka dard chai se…..aur dil ka dard baat karne se kam hota hai’ a sweet voice comes from back suddenly. Shiva turns around the source of the voice and finds a sweet little girl of age 9 or 10. Shiva recalls the moment when raavi said the same words tohim. he chuckles and calls the girl near him. she obliges.

Sh: (strocking her hairs lovingly) aapko kaise pata ki mere sar me aur dil me dard ho rhahai?...

Girl: aapke dekhke pata chal rha hai ki aapke sar me dard ho rha hai…aur aasun dekh kar pata chal rha hai ki apke dil me dard hai…..

Sh: (smiles)acha…aur apko kisne bataya ki sar ka dard chai se aur dil ka dard baat karne seka hota hai…….

Girl: (happily)meri new didi ne…..vo ek hafte phele hi humare paas aayi…..

Sh: (confused)aap rehte kahan ho?…..aapke maa-papa kahan hai?.....

Girl: mere maa-papa nhi hai….main paas me ek anaath aasram hai main vahan rehti hu…….khelte khelte yahan aa gyi….aur dekho aap se mil gyi…..

Sh: (caress her hair) acha…chalo ab jayo…varna sab paressan ho jayenge ....hmm….

Girl: aap bhi chalo na mere saath bhaiya….new didi ke haath ki ek dum mast masala chai peeke na aapka sar dard na bilkul cho ho jayega……(holds his hand starts pulling him)

Sh: (protesting)nhi beta….mujhe bahut kaam hai…..

But the girl doesn’t listen and takes him to her orphanage. Shiva wanted to protest but he himself doesn’t know why his heart was asking him to go. She searches for her new didi. She finally finds her serving food to the children. The girl runs to her shouting ‘new didiii….’. the girl’s didi turns to her giving a clear viewof face to shiva. as shiva sees her face, he gets shocked. Girl goes and hugs her and she too hugs her back giving a wide smile. Shiva, in the state of shock, whishpers ‘raavi….’. he gets frozen for a min. the girl pulls raavi and brings her towards shiva when raavi notices him. she is also shocked to him there. The girl makes raavi stand in front of shiva. both stood silent drinking each other’s presence after 1 week.

Girl: (breaking shivi’s trance) didi….ye bhaiya na mujhe abhi bahar mile…..ye bahut ache hai…..aapbh na inse friendship kar lo…..phir aapke paas bhi ek friend hoga…..

The girl leaves as her friends calls her.

Shiva-raavi looks each other intently and their eyes well up. Shiva holds raavi hands and drags her outside to a silent place.

Ra: shiva kya kar rha hai?....chod kahan leke jaa raha hai….

Shiva stops and immediately hugs raavi tightly.

Sh: (emotionally)kahan chali gyi thi tu….tujhe pta hai meri kya halat hai…..kyun chali gyi thi raavi…..tujhe koi idea bhi hai ki man me kaise kaise khayaal aa rahe the…..tu aise bina kisi ko kuch bataye aa gyi….tujhe kuch ho jata toh….hn?

Ra: (hugs him back) main thik hu shiva…..tu shant ho jaa….

Sh: (breaks her) hn….ab tu ghr chal….hmm..chal…

Shiva holds her hand and walks towards his bike but raavi doesn’t budge. Shiva looks hr confused.

Sh: (confused)kya hua chal na?......sab intejaar kar rahe hai tera….chinta ho rhi hai sabko……

Ra: (blankly) chinta ho rahi hai sabko?....kisko anita di ko…jinhone apne iss gire hue plan me mujhe mohre ki tarha use kiya…ya maasi jinhone unhe rokne ki kosish bhi nhi ki……ya phir tujhe….jisne bina sune mujhe itna bada illzam laga diya….ek baar bhi mujhpe viswaas nhi kiya…….kisko ho rhi hai chinta?....(hurtfull and with anger)

Sh: (sighs) dekh raavi….yeh baat hum ghar jaake karenge….abhi chal samjhi

Ra: (yelling) nhi jaana mujhe….nhi jaana mujhe kahin….fihaal abhi toh nhi…..aur kise fark padega mere hone na hone se…..pichale 7 din se nhi hu…kisko padi meri zaroorat…..

Sh: (grabs her shoulder and pulls her closer) mujhe….mujhe padi teri jaroorat….4 din phele jab jail se aaya tab bahut gusse me tha…par jab pata chala ki tu missing hai….maano dil ne dhadkana band kar diya ho….. 4 din se paagalo ki tarha tujhe dhund raha hu….aur tu puchti hai ki kya fark padega?

Ra: (teary eyes)acha….aur tera yeh concern tab kahan tha jab tune mujhe pe dhara di ke bache ko maarne ka illzam lagaya tha…..hn?...itna hi bharosa tha mujh pe….itna kamzoor……

Sh: (yells)bharosa kamjoor nhi hai…..tujhe ye sab bolne se phele bhi mere dimaag me ye baatein aayi thi par main unn par 1% bhi dhayan nhi diya…yahi socha ke raavi aisa nhi kar sakti….par jab hospital tujhe anita ke saath dekha….tu toh Bhabhi ke saath gyi thin a……toh tu anita ke paas pahunchi …..hn?

Ra: (retorts) mujhe anita di ne bulayaa tha….kaha ki unkakoi opration hai….

Sh: (yells) usne kaha aur tune maan liya……tu nhi jaanti thi ki voh kaisi hai…..tune hi Navaratri ke time kaha tha ki vo gaumbi ke peeche hai..toh phir tune uspe phir se bharosa kyun kar liya?......

Ra: pagal thin a main….unke chikni chupdi baato me aa gyi….behn ke pyaar ka galt fayada uthaya unhone aur main unhe uthane diya……

Sh: (sighs) chal yeh sab thik hai……par vo moti bua….usse kaise pta ki tu anita ke saath thi…..hn?

Ra: (retorts)mujhe nhi pata ki unhe ki unhe kya pata chala aur kaise pata chala…..mujhe bas itna pata hai ki anita di na apna kaam karne ke liye mujhe ek mohre ki tarha use kiya……aur tune mujhe pe vishwaas nhi kiya…..(holds his collar) tune aisa socha bhi kaise ki main….main dhara di ke saath……bhul gya ki hum dono ke beech kya kuch nhi chal rha tha..phir bhi main dhara di ke liye aa gyi thi……jitana tu unse pyaar karta hai utna hi main bhi karti hu…phir bhi…..

Sh: (emotionaly)meri najar se raavi...raavi har cheez ke jodke yahi najar aa rha tha….kya karta…upar se tu sab jaanane ke baad bhi uska saath de rahi thi….mujhe thapad mara…mujhe jail pahucha diya…..inn sab se kya samjhta main…

Ra: (cups his left cheek) thappad tujhe anita di ke liye nhi mara tha….balki tujhe ahsaas karne ke mara tha ki tu uss time galt tha…..shiva cheez kitni bhi complicated kyun na ho par tujhe kisiko bhi iss tarha treat karne ka haq nhi deta…..aur rhi baat police ki toh uss moment jo tune kiya usse mujhe bhi gussa aa gya.. aur maine bhi teri tarha galti kar di…….par jab main tujhe chodane ke liye aa rhi thi tb mera accident ho gya….aasram ke log mujhe yaha le aaye aur ek din baad mujhe hosh aaya…..main turant aana chahti thi shiva…..par weakness ki wajha se kisi mujhe hilne bhi nhi diya…..aur jab teen din phele main police station gyi toh pata chala ki teri bail ho gyi hai……

Sh: toh ghar vapis kyun nhi aayi…?

Ra: (moving backward) hurt thi main shiva….bahut hurt……anita di ked hoke na…teri baton nebahut hurt kiya tha….akela rehna chahti thi….saari uljhno…saari paresaaniya se durr….isliye wapis yahan chali aayi….

Sh: (broken) aur mere baare me ek baar bhi nhi socha……

Ra: (hurt) tune hi toh kaha tha durr rehne ko……

Sh: (remembering his words)…….(goes close to her and holds her soulders) ab main hi keh raha hun….please ghar waapis chal please…..

Ra: *nods herhead in no*

Sh: 🥺🥺

Ra: mujhe time chaiye shiva…please…

Saying this raavi removes his hand and walks away.

Toot ke hum dono mein
Jo bacha woh kum sa hai

Shiva couldn’t do anything but see the retreating figure with tears streaming down his eyes.

Ek tukda dhoop ka
Andar andar namm sa hai

Raavi reaches the orphanage and locks herself in aroom and cries her heart out.

she cried for her hurt and for her mistake.

Ek dhaage mein hain uljhe yun
Ke bunte bunte khul gaye

Shiva falls down on knees being broken.

Hum the likhe deewar pe
Baarish huyi aur dhul gaye

Raavi remembers his words ‘tu bhi iske saath mili hui hai….iski tarha tub hi nhi chahti ki dhara Bhabhi maa bane….itna kaise gir gyi tu raavi…..’.

Toot ke hum dono mein
Jo bacha woh kum sa hai

shiva remembers the decoration and that heart.

Ek tukda dhoop ka
Andar andar namm sa hai

(these are two scene going parallely)

Sh: na main galt hu…..

Ra: na tu galt hai

Sh: galti toh inn…… haalato ki hai…..

Ra: jo hume saath nhi aane dete….

Sh: par shayad abhi tujhe

Ra: thoda aur waqt chahiye…..

a/n: FULL VIDEO: Ek Tukda Dhoop | THAPPAD | Taapsee Pannu | Raghav Chaitanya | Anurag Saikia - YouTube because this song is💔💔💔

so guys this was it for this part.....again an unplanned one😅😅....still hope you'll like this.....do review you sugesstions and opinion.....

THANKS FOR READING

cont on pg 12

Virangana..........

My heart is for this song...........

I just love this.....

With that they both actual are in need of time.............

Time from there families..... Time from there problems......... Time from everything and focus on them.... Their relation..... Which is actually weak....... No trust........ No clearance of previos misunderstanding.........

They need time...........

Hope you show this type of progress further.........

My babies 🥺🥺

But atleast they had a much needed conversation about trust and space

your last parallel dialogues ❤️

This is soooooo beautiful❤️

My heart went out for both of them🥺

Just loved it🤗

Song is one of my favourite ❤❤

Their conversation was heart breaking yet very much needed

Loved the update ❤❤

"Time" that's exactly what they need right now.

Your unplanned is turning out so well.

Though I felt bad seeing them like this but it's important for them and their relationship.

And the song depicts their pain so well.🥺

Incorporating music into your story. Oh, how I love this ❤️
It fits the situation perfectly.

You have a great knack of capturing emotions!

And time heals everything! Love that she asks for time!

Awesome. Well depicted emotions. Fabulous.👏👏

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

"Time" that's exactly what they need right now.

Your unplanned is turning out so well.

Though I felt bad seeing them like this but it's important for them and their relationship.

And the song depicts their pain so well.🥺

lack of conversation is the main reason of chaos in shivi's life......and this need to sort😌😌