IN THE NEED OF TIME- SHIVI TS last part on pg18....completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Yrr kahin Raavi toh nahi thi.........

Tu na har baar cliffhanger chodti hai........

BTW nice update😘🥰😍

cliffhanger chodke bahut maza aata hai🤣

thnks for liking it😘😘

Mujhe unplanned chize zyada pasand hai usSe excitement bani rehti hai. And this story is doing exactly same so don't worry I am sure it will turn out as good as other story of yours🤗

Now coming to the update

It was a decent one.

"He picked up the pillow, covered his mouth with itand let out his inner turmoil out in form of scream. He fell on the floorcrying" this had my heart the guy is broken and cannot blame anyone for that.

Also liked Shiva and Maani part.

I guess it's Raavi please ab dil mat todna. Get her back now pretty please😒

Continue soon.❤️

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Oh my god suspense still intact and so do it i m curious to know aage kya hoga kaise raavi milegi and what will be family's reaction specially shiva 😍😍

raavi kaise milegi usse bada suspense ye hai ki vo ghar laute gi ya nhi lautegi😆

Originally posted by: nolee3097

Really liked this!
How Shiva tore the heart in anger but fixed it later! ❤️

Maami-Shiva assuring each other can only happen in Fan fiction 😆, it was sweet!

Loved how it stops at "‘sar ka dard chai se…..aurdil ka dard baat karne se kam hota hai"

Waiting for next!

somethings can happen in ff only, so let them happen😁

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Mujhe unplanned chize zyada pasand hai usSe excitement bani rehti hai. And this story is doing exactly same so don't worry I am sure it will turn out as good as other story of yours🤗

Now coming to the update

It was a decent one.

"He picked up the pillow, covered his mouth with itand let out his inner turmoil out in form of scream. He fell on the floorcrying" this had my heart the guy is broken and cannot blame anyone for that.

Also liked Shiva and Maani part.

I guess it's Raavi please ab dil mat todna. Get her back now pretty please😒

Continue soon.❤️

glad you liked this part😘😘.....

raavi will be back in next update😊😊

Originally posted by: Scribble19

This was sooo good❤️

You made me like maami for a few seconds…😃

The dialogues were heartfelt, loved it…

Continue soon…

will try to update asap

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Awesome. Please update next part soon.

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Really nice update

Originally posted by: Kristmas

My Shiva 😭

and he joined the heart back together 😭❤️

Mami loves Raavi so much yaaaar

that last line aaah ❤️😍

Can’t wait update soon ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Paru95

Again an Amazing update Virangna😍

The sweet voice kiska hein?? Raavi??

Thos is getting exciting

Waiting for the next update🤗

do you think it's raavi🤔🤔

will try update soon....