Amrik jasmin track

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Good morning ladies,

Today is national holiday at my place due to a famous local festival.


I wanted to share this about amrik jasmin track.

I personally feel that they look boring onscreen. I don't think this will help to garner trps. Simran buzo marriage track might help.


What is ridiculous here is jasmin's level of intelligency. The one dependent on sister for everything suddenly became too smart that others look so dumb in front of her. Amrik couldn't sense that she was behind the accident as she's blackmailing him now?? Any average person can guess leave alone an intelligent one.


The fact that jasmin is made oversmart is difficult to digest. Too much ss and impotance. Forced down into the throat of the viewers. Dialogue delivery horrible and artificial. Only good in screaming scenes with her painful screeching voice


I have thought of a plot that makers should take to make the story spicy?? Just thought of sharing here. U guys can give ur reviews .


After angad's exit

Jasmin uses amrik for her dirty games and puts fatejo and virks into trouble.

Just then

An NRI from canada walks into Moga( a new cameo role) . The talk of town. Good looking rich etc looking for decent girl in Moga. He comes on a business trip. He sees tejo and attracted to her. He sends proposal to Sandhus. Rupi accepts as he wanted her to be far away from her sister and fateh


Tejo finally gave in as rupi blackmailed he will take his life. So tejo and that guy roka took place. Fateh devastated. Jasmin found out her sister had better proposal from a Canadian NRI she was jealous. She decided to tackle that guy with her own charm as the moga param sundari.


She tried to woo him calling him to meet her somewhere, she was in trouble etc. All sorts of her sweet drama. Then that guy comes and then she started using her charm , takes him to a hotel to get their photos snapped to destroy tejo's marriage with him . But tables turned.


She offered him a drink and then left to the washroom to speak on the phone with amrik telling him her next plan to destroy virks and he has to follow. When she returned and had drinks with him chatting sweetly, suddenly she felt dizzy and fainted. The guy spike the drink. When jasmin woke up a few hours later, surrounded by police and sandhus. Rupi gave her a slap.


The guy accused her of molesting him in the room. Showed pics as proof. She wants him to marry her and leave her sister. Jasmin arrested.


The twist

The guy came for revenge against Jasmin.

Reason

Many years back his brother hung himself at a ceiling fan in their hse in India. He had a crush on jaamin when they were in nine standard . Even proposed as well. Jasmin rejected harshly. Not only that . Even made fun of him in front the whole school and blamed that he took advantage of her alone in a classroom that the headmaster punished with public caning( in front all students)

The boy couldn't take and took away his life. The grieving family left for canada two yrs later when his sister got married to a Canadian NRI.


He swore to take revenge on his brother's death

Tejo was used as a bait to trap jasmin. He had no bad intentions against tejo infact plays a cupid in helping fateh and virks against Jasmin plotting. At the same time a friend to tejo.


Someone needs to give a surprise to jasmin as well.

Fateh punishing her brought the highest weekly trps for the show. By now makers should realize that viewers want the villain to face the wrath of karma instead of torturing the FL and winning most of the time.


Sometimes i wonder where are their brains located?? In the skull or in the a**. ??

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This show has nothing left even they will bring infinite amounts of cameos beda garak hi hona hai…😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

This show has nothing left even they will bring infinite amounts of cameos beda garak hi hona hai…😆

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They made a bad impression with first cameo itself.

What to expect from the rest 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Agree with what u said


I don't think jasrik will help in trps.

That will give isha more ss .

Viewers are bored with her

For tejo's character, u haven't read my earlier stories. She's made strong there . Check in story index . Latest tracks portray her as a hypocrate( fake engagement etc) so can't help writing her weak.

One side she's showing nakhra to fateh the other side still being mahaan helping hin to unite his sister and lover

She can't mind her own business at least for once.. she is portrayed as selfless but in reality women are not that dumb especially when coming to own sister


For angad's character , i am glad his track is ending. Kvg should leave this piece of sh** show and do smtg better.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Agree with what u said


I don't think jasrik will help in trps.

That will give isha more ss .

Viewers are bored with her

For tejo's character, u haven't read my earlier stories. She's made strong there . Check in story index . Latest tracks portray her as a hypocrate( fake engagement etc) so can't help writing her weak.

One side she's showing nakhra to fateh the other side still being mahaan helping hin to unite his sister and lover

She can't mind her own business at least for once.. she is portrayed as selfless but in reality women are not that dumb especially when coming to own sister


For angad's character , i am glad his track is ending. Kvg should leave this piece of sh** show and do smtg better.

Yes I've read your earlier stories, Tejo is lovable there. I was talking about the recent ones. I'm sad she has no role to play and no life to live. Makers need to focus on her character.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


They made a bad impression with first cameo itself.

What to expect from the rest 🤣🤣

🤣 Agree 💯 %

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kissi ko bhi lao kaahani toh inn teeno ke irdh girdh hi ghoomna hai... woh banda marte marte apni canada ka property Fateh ke naam karega aur phir Jassu bhagegi Fateh ke peeche and Tejo woh waise bhi mandir ki ghanti hai sirf sabke haathon bajaane paida hui hai..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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These writers should have brought this track earlier instead of ema n chearing.. both sisters fighting as devrani jethani would have brought trps..😆

Like jasso married to Amrik still dore daaloing on Fattu.. n Fattu giving puppy eyes to her.. Amrik n Tejo joining hands sabsk sikhaao jija saali..🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

These writers should have brought this track earlier instead of ema n chearing.. both sisters fighting as devrani jethani would have brought trps..😆

Like jasso married to Amrik still dore daaloing on Fattu.. n Fattu giving puppy eyes to her.. Amrik n Tejo joining hands sabsk sikhaao jija saali..🤪


The latest promo

Jasmin marrying amrik. Thinking it was fateh.

Dulha swap 🤣🤣

Jasrik taken place

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


The latest promo

Jasmin marrying amrik. Thinking it was fateh.

Dulha swap 🤣🤣

Jasrik taken place

Pehle hi kar dete toh itna story mein siyappa naa hota 😆

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