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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Interesting piece!! Arohi lives in a delusional world and teaches how to reduce negativity and keep being positive.🤣

There is a continuation for this. Right??

Keep writing girl!!

Posted: 3 years ago
#32

I don't know if I already commented this post but I read the letter again and it's so cool 😎😎 ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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No, there isn't. Just a random moment.

Might wrote something else though.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nyxigniflex

Aarohi goenka is winner and she's really happy these days.

She took a patient's file from a gullible intern, so that she had an excuse to go to his office (she shouldn't have too but soon....)

Aarohi heard voices before she entered, Abhimanyu's angry voice followed by Akshara's melodious one.

(Like Beethoven's symphony, where the thunderous sound of orchestra is always followed by the soft thin flute) Great! Now she's even thinking like Akshara, she needs to spend less time with her.

Crash.... She opened the door and entered.

(The first thing that strikes her is, it's a lot of blood for a small cut)

Akshara looks over at him and practically freezes and then.....

"Do you even realise how stupid..., You're suppose to be a smart surgeon, what if....."

"It's just a cut, no big-deal".

Akshara looks a little subdued. And then takes his finger and putting it in her mouth, and gently begins to draw out blood. He snatches his hand back.

"What are you doing?"

(Aarohi didn't notice the lowering of his voice, or the tenderness in her eyes, she doesn't notice a lot of things. It's a good way to live)

" What does it look like I am doing? I am trying to prevent the wound from becoming septic". She snatches his hand back.

Aarohi's throat felt constricted and she have to(can't) look away.

The scene before her is so sensuous, Akshara's hair falling on his hand, his finger in her mouth, his eyes on her bent head. And Aarohi vaguely remember she had read somewhere that finger-tips are the most erogenous parts of the body.

It strikes Aarohi as hilarious that, she been ripped in half and all she remembers is "Ten things to drive him crazy with".

(Aarohi bought that book when she first decided she wanted Abhimanyu. She is not a topper by doing nothing. Ofcourse she didn't get the chance to use it on him. She wanted to laugh and cry at the same time at the fact that her sister did. Like Akshara needed to.)

The still of the moment lingers in the air, like cold air after heavy downpour.

Without realising, Aarohi took a step back, for some reason she made sure she closed the door behind her quietly. Like they would have noticed even if she banged it. They were looking at each other, his finger still in her mouth, her hairs flying. Lost in their own little world.

Let them have this moment, what does it matter. At the end of the day Abhimanyu was hers(right?).

She's just going to pretend, this day never happened.


P.S. so how was it? My first fic, lots of grammatical errors I guess. Do ignore.

Wow what a spot-on characterization of Aarohi! Really shows up the insecurity behind the bravado.

In the hands of better writers, Arohi could really have been an interesting and complicated character instead of this cardboard cutout evil half-sister.

That's the thing, she sees this insane chemistry between these two even in the show and still wonders what Abhimanyu saw in Akshara and how he will tire of her. But deep down she KNOWS there's more to the two of them and it really steams her up...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you, glad you think that.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Bechari Aaru. Apney behn ki maa pe gayi hai…I act the same way when I see RK with Alia Bhatt 😭 it’s all cool

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Posted: 3 years ago
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😂 ha ha bechari aaru🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Pretend hi karte rahe aap aarohi ji

Abhi aapke senses tab tk wps na aaye jb tk AbhiRa ki shaadi na ho jaaye. 😂😂😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

I thought it makes sense, she doesn't usually freak out in front of Abhi. To keep up the nice girl apearence.

Ofcourse it's my interpretation.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Superb this is ....loved the way u started this.....


Pakka arohi.... She in her own lala land always ....

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