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Posted: 3 years ago
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Please Geet! just help me somehow, I don’t want to be here anymore, try n understand Everyday I stay here I’m getting into deep ****


Listening to the car honk he fearfully peeks out of the window, looking at the cars passing fearing if one of them was for him? But thankfully they kept passing giving him a slight relief but one could clearly see Desperation on his face and helplessness in his eyes


Do I really want to assure him or empathise with him do I really know him were her thoughts but then


Oh this is also messed up! but why and how did you end up here? and please can you please look for somewhere else to stay? cause my parents will be home any minute and it won’t be looking good so

She said trying to comprehend whatever is going on


Please yaar please, just for tonight, please! he was desperate he didn’t have anywhere else to go to, actually did have a place in mind but even the thought of spending another minute there...he didn't want to end up there!! Coz that seemed like a bloody one-way road to him


She needed time to process all this, she went to make some coffee inorder to buy some time and process all this. There were a lot of questions running in her mind for which she needed answers for.


It was really late in the night and she knew letting him stay was out of question! she will have to answer her parents and what will she? and most importantly why will she? dismissing whatever it was not hers she made up her mind.


Whatever it was he needed to leave Right Now.


Next day morning when she woke up to the usual screaming match of her parents she just rolled her eyes and got ready for work.


Everything was normal until she heard her mom call her out.


Beta didn’t you see the Newspaper Today!!

Apparently the son of your Boss got into a terrible accident, police is suspecting a very foul play behind it. Do you know they weren’t able to recognise his face! Poor kid I tell you… and she went on and on

But she was still struck at the words THEY WEREN’T ABLE TO RECOGNISE HIS FACE!!

How could it be... he was… oh no no.. no.. this can’t be true.. something's not right.. something is definitely not right




To be continued


Short story again

Max 5 parts n parts bhi chutku hi honge. In dino Geet ki badi yaad aarahi thi toh😆


Padlena time pass hojayega... And haan pehlehi batadeti hu this is not something you will fall in love with toh expectations bhi na k barabar hi rakh na🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congrats on the SS!

Riveting update..... amazingly written

he desperately needed help and pleads with Geet to help

of cos he is scared

wonder what was troubling him?

was someone after him?

sad she was unable to help and allow him to stay the night

but her reasons are valid

dismayed that he had no where to go?

oh no he met in an accident

so the police suspect foul play?

she was shocked that they were unable to recognise his face

well she knows something is not right

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Posted: 3 years ago
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What trouble was he in and was there someone after him?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was reasonable for Geet to refuse to allow him to stay with her. How would she have known?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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If the face was not recognizable, they don't know if they got the identity right.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the SS!

Riveting update..... amazingly written

he desperately needed help and pleads with Geet to help

of cos he is scared

wonder what was troubling him?

was someone after him?

sad she was unable to help and allow him to stay the night

but her reasons are valid

dismayed that he had no where to go?

oh no he met in an accident

so the police suspect foul play?

she was shocked that they were unable to recognise his face

well she knows something is not right


Thanks for reading 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

If the face was not recognizable, they don't know if they got the identity right.


Hmmm is it me ya is it Geet forum

Geet k Babaji saare smart log mujhe hi q milte bai😆


Thanks for reading.. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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congrats for new ss

interesting story

geet is right she can't allow strenger to live in her house in absence of her parents

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new ss

interesting story

geet is right she can't allow strenger to live in her house in absence of her parents

Good to see u Aparna🤗

Thank you so much for reading

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Posted: 3 years ago
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mystery...suspense..thriller !!

my CID cum Sherlock mind has started working in parallel (along with Geet)


what happened to him, who is after him or his life..for money, property?

and why he came to her for help..the accident was unfortunate, was there no other means for her to help him? and now she too is entangled into this suspense of events.

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