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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part-5

Virk House

Both Sandhu and Virk family are eagerly waiting for panditji to check Fateh and Tejo kundlis for wedding date.

Papa Virk-" Kya baat hai panditji? Itna time kyun lag raha hai. Jaldi se koi acchi si tarikh nikaliye na"

Pandit ji after some time-" Ji 3 mahine bad ki 25 tarikh badi shubh hai"

Papa Virk- " 3 mahine bad? Are thoda jaldi ka muhurat nikaliye panditji"

Panditji-" Virk Ji usse pehle ka samay thoda kharab h dono k liye. Shadi me apshagun ho sakta hai."

Everyone is shocked

Mummy Virk-" Are nahi nahi Panditji 3 mahine bad ki hi tarikh theek hai. Main nai chahti ki ab kuch b apshagun ho dono ki zindagi mein. Pehle hi bahut kuch Saha h dono ne aur hum sab ne"

Fateh gets sad.

Papa Sandhu- " Are Fateh, jahan itna intezar kiya 3 mahine aur sahi"

Everyone starts laughing


At Angad's residence same evening

Doorbell rings. Angad opens the door and finds Fateh and Tejo. He says- " Are Tejo ji, Fateh Aap yahan kaise?"

Tejo-" Andar nahi bulaenge Angad ji?"

Angad-" Sorry, Aiye na"

Fateh- " Angad 3 mahine bad 25 Tarikh ko meri aur Tejo ki shadi hai, aur hum chahte hai ki tum hamari khushi me shareek ho, kyunki tumhari hi Wajah se hum ek hue hai"

Angad is heartbroken but forces smile on his face and says -" Acha, That's good, congratulations "

Tejo- " Sirf congratulations se kaam nai chlega aapko sabhi functions me aana hai".

Angad- " Sorry Fateh ,Tejo ji main nahi aa paunga"

Tejo- " kyun?"

Angad - " Main Riya ko leke London ja raha hu bas uske visa ka paperwork jo jae"

Tejo-" Angad ji, aajtak aapne mere liye bahut kuch kiya hai. Meri zindagi mein khushiyan aapki ki Wajah se wapis ai hai. Agar aap meri shadi mein nahi aae to mujhe bahut bura lagega. Main samjhungi main aapki dost kabhi thi hi nahi."

Fateh- " Tejo theek keh rahi hai. Hum tumhari hi wajah se wapis ek ho rahe hai, tumhe ana hi hoga."

Angad-" OK main aaunga"

Riya sees Tejo and happily runs to meet her- " Tejo Aunty"

Tejo gets happy and hugs her.

Riya-" Aap kahan chale gae the? Maine Poppins se kitna pucha aapke bare mein."

Tejo- " Main apne ghar gai thi "

Riya- " Ghar? Aap to yahan rehti ha na Poppins aur mere saath?"

Angad- " Riya Maine btaya tha na, Tejo aunty apne mummy Papa k pas gai h."

Riya gets sad and asks - " To ab aap mere pas nai rahogi?"

Tejo feels sad but smiles and says- " Main aapse milne aati rahungi aur aap b mujhse milne aana"

Riya sees Fateh" Ye kaun hai?"

Fateh- " Main Fateh hu, Aapka naya dost. " Fateh brings his hand forward but Riya doesn't shake it.

Angad- " Riya aisa nai karte. Come on shake hands".

Riya reluctantly shakes his hand. " Aap Tejo aunty k sath kyun aae ho?"

Angad-" Riya , Tejo Aunty aur inki shadi hone Wali hai"

Riya- " Kya, par Tejo aunty aap mere Poppins se shadi nai kar rahe? Wo kitne good looking hai"

Tejo and Angad feel awkward.

Angad- " Riya Fateh uncle bhi to good looking hai"

Riya- " But mere Poppins Jaise nahi. He's the best".

Angad- " Acha Riya ab aap andar jao. Apka dinner time hai na"

Riya hugs Tejo and goes inside.

Fateh-" Acha Angad a hum chalte hai. Der ho rahi hai.

Angad looks at Tejo. " Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum" plays. Fateh and Tejo leave.

Edited by raaya - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

I feel bad for Angad 😪

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Story is going at good pace.. 👍🏼

Feeling bad for Angad here..

But I know we are going to get a happy ending here ( show mein toh milne se raha )

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Angad is making Riya sleep. He's thinking about his and Tejo's happy moments.

Riya asks-" Poppins Tejo aunty aapse shadi kyun nahi kar rahi?"

Angad says- " Kyunki Riya she likes Fateh uncle and Fateh uncle bhi unko bahut like karte hai".

Riya- " Kya wo apko like nai karti?"

Angad smiles and says- " karta hai, but as a friend."

Riya- " To friends shadi nai karte?"

Angad-" Riya chalo ab so jao, raat kafi ho gai h"

After Riya sleeps Angad thinks

" Aapko kaise btau Riya, main bhi Tejo ji ki bahut chahta hu. Par ek tarafa pyar kabhi pura nahi hota."

At Sandhu house

Fateh and Tejo are taking over phone.

Fateh- " pta nahi ye 3 mahine kab pure honge? Ab aur tumse dur nahi raha jata."

Tejo-" Jahan humne khushiyon ka itna intezar kia, thoda waqt aur sahi"

Fateh- " Ab tumhe kabhi hurt nai karunga. Tumhare khushi k lie kuch bhi karunga."

Tejo smiles and says-" sach".

In the morning

Fateh comes to Tejo's House . He touches elder's feet.

Papa Sandhu-" Are Fateh beta kaise aana Hua?"

Fateh-" Main Tejo ko shopping le jana chahta hu. Taki shadi ke lie wo kuch kapde select kar sake."

Mummy Sandhu-" Han Han zarur. Tejo jaldi se tayar Hoja".

They are going towards mall in their car.

Tejo-" Fateh abhi se shopping. Abhi to waqt hai"

Fateh-" shopping to bahana hai. Main tumhare sath waqt bitana chahta hu. Pehle hum movie dekhenge aur phir lunch sath me krenge"

Tejo-" jhoothe, ghar par shopping kyun Bola? "

Fateh-" ye Bolta ki aapki beti ko date pe le ja raha hu to jane dete?"

They both smile.

Angad is in the same mall with Riya.

Angad-" Riya bhaago mat idhar udhar. Jaldi Karo humein apke lie ache ache kapde lene hai."

Riya bumps into Tejo.

Riya gets happy-" Tejo aunty" and hugs her.

Tejo also gets happy. Angad stops seeing Tejo and Fateh.

Fateh- "Hi Angad"

Angad-" Hi. Tum log yahan?"

Fateh-" Han main Tejo ko date pe laya hu"

Angad-" Ohh. Main bhi Riya ki shopping k lie aya hu."

Riya-" Tejo aunty acha hua aap mil gai. Ab hum saath me shopping krenge"

Angad-" Nai Riya, Fateh uncle aur Tejo aunty ko enjoy krne do , main aur aap shopping krenge."

Riya holds Tejo's hand-" Nahi, apko kapdo ke bare mein kuch nai pta poppins.Tejo aunty chlo na mere lie achi si dresses select kro."

Angad-" Riya zid mat Karo "

Tejo- " It's ok Angadji, chalo Riya hum aapke lie achi si dresses dekhe. "

They both go to a showroom and Tejo selects beautiful dresses for Riya.

Tejo- " Riya in dresses me aap bilkul angel lagoge".

Then Riya sees a play area and insists on going there.

Riya-" Tejo aunty chalo wahan chalte hai"

Riya and Tejo enjoy in play area and Fateh and Angad watch them. Angad gets mesmerized seeing both of them enjoying and smiling. But then realizes that Tejo is about to marry Fateh.

Riya callsTejo and Angad and holds their hand then asks Fateh to click their photo.

Angad and Tejo feel awkward and Fateh clicks their photograph.

Angad- "Chalo Riya ghar chalte hai. Tejo aunty and Fateh uncle ko bye kro"

Riya-" par abhi mujhe Tejo aunty k sath aur time spend karna hai."

Angad-" Riya bas aur zid mat kro. Uncle aunty ko bhi enjoy karne do. Waise b Poppins ko office jana hai kisi kaam se"

Riya hugs Tejo,-"Bye Tejo aunty, bye uncle".

Angad-" Sorry, Riya ki wajah se tum log apni date enjoy nai kar pae"

Fateh-"Its ok. Hum phir plan kar lenge. Riya ko udas bhi to nai kar sakte the"

Tejo -"Bye Riya, good girl banna aur Poppins ko pareshan mat karna."

Angad looks at Tejo and say" Bye" and leaves with Riya.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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One month later

Jasmin has realised the importance of her family and above all Tejo. She regrets taking them for granted and hurting them for her selfish motives. She rarely talks and performs her daily chores in jail. Everyday she asks for forgiveness from God for hurting her family, especially Tejo. She has a nightmare that night that her family has broken all ties with her and Fateh saying she will never be happy and Tejo saying that God will never forgive her. She screams and wakes up. She starts crying and says" mujhe jeene ka koi haq nahi"


Next morning

Inspector calls up Angad-" Mr Mann, kya aap yahan a sakte hai?"

Angad- " Kya Hua Inspector, koi problem hai?

Inspector-" Ji kuch aisa hi, wo Jasmin.."

Angad-" Kya Hua, kahin wo bhag to nahi gai?"

Inspector-" Nahi, usne suicide karne ki koshish ki hai."

Angad-" Kya?? Main Ata hu."

Jasmin has banged her head on wall several times previous night. Lady constables caught her but due to bleeding she passed out. She was admitted in jail hospital and was handcuffed to bed in case she wakes up and tries to commit suicide again.

Angad-" Kaisi hai ab ye?"

Doctor-" Sar pe kafi zyada chot hai islie stitches lage hai, aur khoon b kafi beh gya. Par zyada chinta ki baat nahi hai. Maine neend ka injection dia hai, kuch hi der me hosh aa jaega."

Jasmin wakes up. She says in a weak voice" Mar Jane do, mujhe Mar Jane do". She sees Angad.

Angad-" ye konsa naya drama hai tumhara ab Jasmin?"

Jasmin-" Angad please mujhe maar dalo. Ab main jeena nahi chahti."

Angad laughs-" Main tumhe maar dalu? Tumhare khoon se apne haath gande karne ka shauk nahi hai mujhe. Mai ache se janta hu tumhe. Ek mahina jail me rahi to bahar nikalne k liye naya natak Shuru kar dia."

Jasmin-" Angad main jaanti hu, ab mujhpar koi kabhi bharosa nahi karega. Main hu hi is layak. Par ab ye zindagi bojh lagti hai. Main ye bhi janti hu ki mere jeene ya marne se kisi ko fark nai pdega. Islie hi keh rahi hu, maar dalo mujhe ya mujhe khud ko khatam karne do. "

She feels dizzy. Doctor comes and attends her. He says-" Aap please bahar jaie, inhe aram karne dijie. "

Angad thinks-'ye wakai me pachhta rahi hai ya iska koi naya drama hai?'

Inspector - " Mr Mann, main janta hu ki Jasmin jaisi ladki par bharosa nahi Kia ja sakta, par 1 mahine se main ise observe kar raha hu, ye chup hi rehti hai, na kisi se koi baat karti hai, na theek se khana khati hai. On duty constables bhi btati hai ki kai bar raat ko roti hui mili hai. Kehti hai,' mujhe maaf kardo Tejo'.

Angad -" Ohh, theek hai Inspector. Thanks. Aap mujhe Jasmin k bare me inform karte rahiega."

Angad leaves.

Edited by raaya - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Wow, can't wait to read more. Please write more in English, please 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot. Will surely write in English.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sandhu House


Angad reaches there and meets Tejo's mom and dad.

Angad-" Uncle auntyji if you need any help then let me know "

Tejo' s mom-" No son, you are our guest, we can't take any help from you."

Angad-" Aunty you call me son and then make me guest. That's not fair".

They laugh.

Angad-" Where's Tejoji?"

Tejo's mom-" She's in her room."

Angad-" OK. I will meet her first and then will help you."


Tejo is finding something in her room. She searches on top of almirah and an old album falls. Tejo picks it and opens it. She sees old pictures of her with Jasmin and her family. She starts crying and looks at photographs. She reminisces her happy times with Jasmin.

Tejo- " Jasso why did you do all this? We were so happy. We used to love each other. Even after a fight we never stayed mad at each other for long. Then what happened to us now? You are in jail. It hurts me to see you like this."

Angad is standing near the door and watches this. He knocks the door.

Tejo wipes her tears.-" Angadji, when did you come?"

Angad- "Just now. Were you crying?"

Tejo-" No no"

Angad-" What's that?" Pointing to the album.

Tejo- " It's nothing."

Angad takes album from her hand. He looks at Tejo and Jasmin's pictures.

Angad-" You were thinking about Jasmin right?"

Tejo- "No, I was just picking this album and..."

Angad-" Tejo ji I know you very well. You can share with me."

Tejo-" I was just reminiscing good times with her. Things have changed now and it hurts."

Angad-" You still feel bad for her? After how much she has hurt you?"

Tejo-" She's my sister. Relationships don't break like that. Even though we are at loggerheads, i still care for her. But it's of no use now."

She takes the album and keeps it back.

Tejo-" How's Riya?"

Angad-" She's good."

Suddenly they hear loud noise. They rush outside.

Tejo's mother had fallen from stairs and injured her leg. They rush her to hospital.

Doctor does an X ray.

Doctor- " She has fractured her leg. We are putting a cast over it , but make sure she doesn't walk or puts any pressure on it. She has to take bed rest for 6 weeks."

Tejo's father-" Haye mere Rabba. Tejo is getting married after 2 months. There's so much to do, and now this. "

Tejo-" Don't worry papaji, we will take care of her, rest I will help you."

Tejo's father-" No beta, you are getting married soon. I dont want you to stress out. We will figure out something"

Angad gets thinking.

Edited by raaya - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Wonderful as usual 😍😍

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