Ho gaya hai pyar tumse: A TejAng Os

This is my first fiction story. I hope you like it. Please do reply. Will write next part if you like it.

Jasmin was finally caught by police for kidnapping Riya and maligning Angad's name. Angad and Fateh took a sigh of relief as Jasmin is finally punished for her deeds. Tejo broke down as police took away Jasmin. She said" kyun Jassu, kyun tumne aisa kiya? Maine hamesha tumhari khushi chahi. Apne pyar tak ko kurban kar diya taki tum khush reh sako. Phir kyun Itni nafrat karti ho mujhse?" Fateh went to console Tejo, Angad took a step forward but stopped thinking" No, Ab Tejo par mera koi haq nahi. Tejo ne hamesha Fateh ko chaha hai aur Fateh ne bhi apni galtiyon ki bahut saza pa li. Wo ab Tejo ko khush rakhega"

He wiped his tears and went to Tejo and Fateh" Ab tum dono ke pyar ko kisi ki buri nazar nai lagegi"

Tejo- " par?"

Angad- " Bas Tejo, Ab aur kuch mat kehna. Tum Fateh se pyar karti ho, aur tum ye bhi jaan gai ho ki Fateh ne Jasmin se sach me shadi nai ki thi. Wo uska plan tha Jasmin ko sabak sikhane ka. Ab tum apne pyar ko khud se dur mat jane do."

Tejo-" Aur Riya?"

Angad- " Bahut socha. Aur ye decide kiya ko wo apni Nani k pas hi theek hai. Main uske ma bap ka gunehgar hun islie mujhe use apne sath rakhne ka koi haq nai. Main wapis ja ra hun"

This is my first fiction story. I hope you like it. Please do reply. Will write next part if you like it.

Originally posted by: raaya

This is my first fiction story. I hope you like it. Please do reply. Will write next part if you like it.

Jasmin was finally caught by police for kidnapping Riya and maligning Angad's name. Angad and Fateh took a sigh of relief as Jasmin is finally punished for her deeds. Tejo broke down as police took away Jasmin. She said" kyun Jassu, kyun tumne aisa kiya? Maine hamesha tumhari khushi chahi. Apne pyar tak ko kurban kar diya taki tum khush reh sako. Phir kyun Itni nafrat karti ho mujhse?" Fateh went to console Tejo, Angad took a step forward but stopped thinking" No, Ab Tejo par mera koi haq nahi. Tejo ne hamesha Fateh ko chaha hai aur Fateh ne bhi apni galtiyon ki bahut saza pa li. Wo ab Tejo ko khush rakhega"

He wiped his tears and went to Tejo and Fateh" Ab tum dono ke pyar ko kisi ki buri nazar nai lagegi"

Tejo- " par?"

Angad- " Bas Tejo, Ab aur kuch mat kehna. Tum Fateh se pyar karti ho, aur tum ye bhi jaan gai ho ki Fateh ne Jasmin se sach me shadi nai ki thi. Wo uska plan tha Jasmin ko sabak sikhane ka. Ab tum apne pyar ko khud se dur mat jane do."

Tejo-" Aur Riya?"

Angad- " Bahut socha. Aur ye decide kiya ko wo apni Nani k pas hi theek hai. Main uske ma bap ka gunehgar hun islie mujhe use apne sath rakhne ka koi haq nai. Main wapis ja ra hun"

This is my first fiction story. I hope you like it. Please do reply. Will write next part if you like it.

It is well written

U already have a plot in mind??

Then don't wait

Just carry on

A piece of advise from another writer

Just write with the flow that u have in mind.

Don't worry readers will come along.

Just write as much as u want.

After some time u will start getting loyal readers as well.

It's good to see u joining writers team as many have left.

I am also taking break next year. Joining back work environment.

This year was work from home and had some leisure time in between.

All the best. Keep writing. Readers will come along.

Mostly have confidence on urself.

Just pour out ur thoughts

Thank you so much for your valuable suggestions😊. Will do write next part soon.

This is a wonderful start.. 👍🏼

If you have a plot in mind keep writing..

Part 2

Angad then turns to Fateh- " I want to apologize to you. I have hurt you a lot but now I know you will keep Tejo happy. Sorry yaar"

Fateh hugs him. Angad watches Tejo and cries but wipes his tears and says " Acha, Ab main chalta hu. " He starts walking but turns in between and watches Tejo and Fateh hugging each other. He feels broken but turns and walks away.

Both the families come to know about the whole incident and reach Shimla. They are glad Jasmin is caught and Fateh had never married her. They pray to God for Fateh and Tejo's happiness. Tejo feels sad for Angad, she plans something.

Next day at Riya's Nani house. Someone rings the doorbell. Riya's Nani opens the door, it's Tejo. " Tum" she asks " Yahan kya karne aai ho?"

Tejo- " Main aapse Riya ke bare me baat karna chahti hu"

Nani- " Chali jao. Tumne aur Angad ne milkar jo Riya ki custody pane k lie natak Kia tha sab pta hai mujhe. Tumhari sagai jhoothi thi".

Tejo-" Han ye sach hai. Par humne sagai Riya k lie nai ki thi. Tab tak to Riya k bare me main kuch nai janti thi. Main aapko sab btati hu"

Tejo tells her everything about her , Fateh, Jasmin and Angad.

Tejo- "Wo sagai unhone mere lie ki thi. Jab wo mere lie, jise wo kuch din pehle se hi jante the itna kuch kar sakte hai to Riya, jo unki apni hai, jiske lie maine unki dil mein itna pyar dekha hai, use wo kaise nahi khush rakhenge. Han unse galti hui hai, par jane wale unke bhai bhabhi the. Jitna dukh aapko Hua hai, utna hi dard unhone ne bhi bardasht kia hai. Riya mein unki jaan basti hai. Please Riya ko unhe saunp dijiye".

Nani- " Usne meri beti aur damad ko mar dala. Main use Riya kabhi nai dungi"

Tejo- " Unse ek galti hui thi, jiske lie wo kabhi apne aap ko maaf nai kar pae, par unhone jaan bujhkar ye sab nai Kia. Aur hamesha to aap bhi Riya k sath nai rahengi. Kabhi socha hai, Aapke bad uska kya hoga, kaun sambhalega use?"

Same evening at Angad's house, doorbell rings.

As he opens the door, he finds Riya with her nani.

Will write next part soon.

This is turning out beautifully… 👏

Please continue whenever you have time..

Eagerly waiting

Beautiful plot😳 , pls continue 😁

Part 3

Angad gets elated. He hugs Riya. Then he notices her Nani.

Angad- " Auntyji aap yahan? Riya ke sath, ye sab?"

Riya's Nani- " Main ise yahan chhodne ai hn. Aj se iski sari zimmedari tumhari"

Angad smiles and says " Sach, aap Sach me Riya ki custody mujhe de rai h?" He takes Riya in his arms and dances joyfully but stops and asks- " Par aap ne achanak ye faisla kaise lia?"

Riya's Nani- " Aj subah Tejo mujhse milne aai thi, usne mujhe sab bta diya. Main tumse naraz thi, par usne mujhe ehsaas kraya ki jo kuch bhi hua wo kismet me likha tha, jo maine khoya wahi tumne bhi khoya. Phir Riya ne bhi btaya ki tum aur Tejo uska kitna dhyan rakhte the."

She wipes her tears- " Jo b Hua use badla nai ja sakta par ab main Riya ko khush dekhna chahti hu aur umeed karti hu tum use hamesha wahi pyar doge jo uske maa baap diya karte the."

Angad folds his hands and says- " Thanks auntyji. Apka ye ehsaan Main kabhi nai bhulunga. Aur aap itminaan rakhiye, Riya ki khushi mere lie sabse ahem hogi. Use bahut pyar se rakhunga main".

Nani hugs Riya and leaves.

Angad thinks- " Tejo ji. Aapko jitna shukriya karu Kam hoga. Aapki Wajah se Riya mere pas hamesha k lie aa gai."

He thinks to meet her but then thinks- ' Nahi. Agar Main unke samne gya to khud ko Sambhal nai paunga.'

He calls her. Tejo picks the call.

Angad- " Tejo ji. Thanks. Aapki Wajah se Riya hamesha k lie mere pas aa gai. Uski Nani ne uski custody mujhe de di hai."

Tejo- " Sach, main bahut khush hu Angad ji. Aur mujhe Pura yakeen hai Riya ko aapse zyada pyar koi nahi de sakta".

Suddenly Fateh calls her name and Angad feels sad and says- " Acha Tejo ji. Main phone rakhta hu."

Tejo thinks- 'Itni jaldi phone kyun kaat diya unhone.'

Will upload next part soon it will have some twist.

wow..wonderful plot. do write more,

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do continue

Part 4

Jasmin in police station

She's begging police officer to let her go.

Jasmin-" Main bekusur hu. Please mera vishwas Karo. Ye sab Tejo ki chaal h. Wo hamesha mujhse sab kuch cheen leti hai aur jhootha ilzam lagati hai. "

Inspector- " Band Karo ye drama. Hamare pas tumhare khilaf sabut hai."

Jasmin suddenly thinks of sometbing and asks inspector to let her call Sweety once thinking she will bail her out.

Jasmin- " Please ek bar aap mujhe call karne do use. wo apko aake yakeen dilaegi ki main bekusur hu."

After lots of drama inspector agrees. She calls Sweety

Jasmin- " Hello sweety please mujhe bacha le."

Sweety- " Ab kya kar dia tune?"

Jasmin- "mujhe police ne pakad lia h. Tu bas yahan akar meri bail karwa de main sab btati hu."

Sweety-" Mera dimag kharab hai jo tere sath main b phasu. Main nhi aungi aur Khabardar jo dobara phone Kia tune "

Jasmin- " ye ek akhri bar meri madad karde main tujhe yakeen dilati hu tujhe nai phasne dungi. Akhir Tu meri best friend hai."

Sweety laughs and says" Yakeen aur tera. Tu kisi ki sagi nai h. Jo apne ma baap ki na ho saki, apni behen jisne tujhe hamesha protect Kia, usse uska sab cheen lia, wo meri sagi kya hogi. Tu sirf apne bare me soch sakti hai aur mujhe koi shauk nahi tujhe wapis apni zindagi me laker apni pareshani badhane ka. Dobara phone mat karna warna main tere sare raaz police ko bta dungi".

These words hit Jasmin hard. She kept the reciever down in shock.

Inspector- " Ho gya tumhara. Ab chalo jail mein. Le jao ise"

Lady constables take her. Sweety's word echo in her mind

" Tu kisi ki sagi nahi hai".

At Sandhu house

Papa Sandhu- " Are jaldi Karo apni Tejo ghar aane Wali hai. "

Tejo reaches with Fateh.

Papa Sandhu- " Are wahin ruko, are jaldi Aarti ki thal lao."

Tejo's mother Takes her Aarti and wards off evil eye from her. " Meri Tejo ko ab kisi ki buri nazar nai lagegi. Tum dono hamesha khush raho ".

Tejo hugs her mom and then her dad

Virks reach there. Fateh meets his mom and dad. They hug him. Tejo touches their feet.

Papa Virk- " Chalo ab tum dono ghar chalo. Bahut din apne bacho se dur rahe hum"

Papa Sandhu shouts " Nahi, Tejo nahi jaegi"

Everyone is shocked

He looks at everyone and smiles." Are mera Matlab hai ki ab Tejo aapki bahu nai meri beti hai. Agar use le Jana h to wapis use apne ghar ki bahu bnao"

Everyone laughs.

Papa Virk- " Theek kaha Sandhu sahab. Ab hum dhoom dham se in dono ki dobara shadi krenge aur khushi k sath Tejo ko wapis apne ghar ki bahu bnaenge."

Mummy Virk- " Main jaldi se in dono ki shadi ka shubh muhurat nikalwati hn"

Fateh looks at Tejo and smiles. She feels shy and runs to her room.