Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 6

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Totally unpredictable story the start is amazing🔥🔥 one suggestion i want to give pls pls pls make raavi stand for herself 💯makers r hellbent to show her dobi pls don't do that here and i know story start hui hai ek bohot bade misunderstanding k sath but i m sucker of happy ending so pls happyending denaand i m totally hooked up for next part do tag me 💖

Will tag you.........

Next part will be there soon.....

Shocking but really nice start.

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Shocking but really nice start.

Omg. Didn't expect that😆 I wonder now what is Shiva gonna do? 😒

Waiting for the next update👍🏼

Thank you for the tag❤️!!! This first update was pretty unexpected, actually. Ashok was smart enough to make the whole thing legal, making sure that it wasn't just a matter of dishoom dishoom, which would've been frankly too easy for Shiva to win.

He had tears in his eyes knowing how helpless he was😭, but I cant believe he actually let Ashok walk out with her! Also, my poor Raavi thinks he did it knowingly?! Although that's alright as a knee jerk reaction, I hope she thinks on it and understands that that isn't the case...

Looking forward to the next update! ❤️

Heartbreakingly beautiful❤️my heart is paining thinking about Raavi💔

Loved it🤗

Waiting for the next part

Pls tag me too😳

It is amazing!!! Waiting for next part. Plz update soon

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Omg. Didn't expect that😆 I wonder now what is Shiva gonna do? 😒

Waiting for the next update👍🏼

Working on the next update it will be out soon........

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

It is amazing!!! Waiting for next part. Plz update soon

Keep connected will update soon.....

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Thank you for the tag❤️!!! This first update was pretty unexpected, actually. Ashok was smart enough to make the whole thing legal, making sure that it wasn't just a matter of dishoom dishoom, which would've been frankly too easy for Shiva to win.

He had tears in his eyes knowing how helpless he was😭, but I cant believe he actually let Ashok walk out with her! Also, my poor Raavi thinks he did it knowingly?! Although that's alright as a knee jerk reaction, I hope she thinks on it and understands that that isn't the case...

Looking forward to the next update! ❤️

Don't worry there will be some twist some misunderstanding but than as i always do will end up with a joyous ending😙😗