Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 5

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Shiva kya karega ab.. curious to see that 😆

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

The idea is nice! ❤️

Shiva kya karega ab.. curious to see that 😆

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On the next update

Originally posted by: Anon21

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On the next update

Hey guys this is the story.........

I have made some changes from the prologue also......

Hope so you like it...........

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SCENE:- Shiva has gone to meet ashok, from whom he had got money and went to talk about strategy of repayment.

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Ashok is siting in his house waiting for Shiva's arrival as yesterday he gave him money and now he will come for repayment scheme,

Shiva enters the house and Ashok make him sit on the couch woth him and Shiva says,

"Thank you Ashok mujhe paise dene ke liye........ "

Ashok says,

"Iss mein thank you kii kyaa baat hai........ "

Shiva says,

"Acha meri baat sun main aur dev na aaj hi teri factory mein kaam shuru krr denge toh agar dekha jaye toh 3 mahine mein loan amount complete ho jayegi....... "

Ashok smiles and says,

"Aree nahi ree....... Tujhe kya lagta hain main tujhse itna kaam krwauga..... Nahi nahi yaar hai tu apna.......tu meri factory main kaam nahi krenga........maine tujhe 15 lakh diye hai na............loan khatam karne main help ki aur ho sake toh IVF treatment mein bhi help karunga............mujhe badle main bass ikk cheez chahiye......."

Shiva asks,

"Tu bol.... Kya chahiye...... "

Ashok looks at him and grins,

"Teri biwi.......Raavi..... "

Shiva's eyes shot up and anger was evident on his face he hold his collar and said,

"Ashok tujhe mujhse jo kaam hai vo kar usme Raavi ko.. . .. . Aur tune soch bhi kaise liye.. . . Haa.. . .. . "

Ashok retorts by removing his hands and said,

"Uff....mujhe pata hi tha kiii tu yrhi sab krega..... "

Ashok goes and brings the papers of the deal and says by handing them to Shiva,

"Padh le ikk baar..............

Fir baat karna........ "

Shiva says,

"Maine padh kar hi sign kiye the..... "

Ashok sits on his couch in a bosy manner saying,

"Page 5....."

Shuva opens page 5 and is stunned to read that he had added a clause of giving Raavi in turn of 15 lakh. Shiva's hand shiver and he throws the document on floor and holded ashok and punched him. Ashok ordered his people to hold Shiva and than he says,

"Tujhe pata hain Shiva apni dosti jab hum log fifth class mein the tab se hain............

Tab maine ikk din Raavi ko dekha tha....... Itni khoobsurat itni khoobsurat ki man kar raha tha ise apne paas rKh lu hamesha ke liye sambhal kar.............. Kisi ki nazar na lagne doon...... Main Raavi ko itna pyaar krta tha ki main kya bataun par usne kabhi mujhe bulaya hi nahi.......... Hamesha shiva shiva krti rehti thi.............. Par maine usse pyaar krna use chahne nahi choda....... Aree jab mujhe pta lgga na uski shaadi Dev se ho rahi hai.........tab main. Yahan nahi tha warna Raavi ko wahan se bhaga ke le jata........... "

He stepped near shiva who was continuously trying to free himself and getting angry on each and every that man spoke especially when he took Raavi's name he speak it with so much erotically make hus blood boil and now ashok stood in front of Shiva and speaks loudly,

"Aur uski shaadi tooti mujhe jab mere khabri ne bataya na main toh jaise naach utha tha........ Par fir khabar aayi uski aur teri shaadi ho gayi........... Tu meta jigri yaar teri shaadi meri... Meri raavi se... Ho gayi....... "

Shiva roars,

"Aeeee......... Raavi meri biwi hai........ Meri....... Aur yeh sab khayal nikal de tu......... "

Ashok hold shiva's hair and pulls them looking straight into his eyes and says,

" Vo biwi jo abb meri ho gayi hain.. . .. . . Samajh mein aaya hain.. . .. . .. Kya kar paega tu haan... . .. Legally yeh clause tune agree kiya hain.. . .. "

Shiva says,

"Tune dhokha diya maujhe pehle yeh nahi tha tune baad mein add krwaya hain.. . .. . .. "

Ashok laughs loud and says,

"Yeh baat tu janta hain main janta hoon par court mein toh legally yehi hua hai na.. . .. . . "

He pauses and continues,

"Tu mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta aur agar koshish bhi ki na toh tu jail mein hoga.. . .. . .. Abb meri Raavi mujhe mil jayegi.. . .. . . Meri raavi.. . .. . . Main usse gale se lagunga.. . . Usee apni baahon mein lunga.. . .. Aur tu kuch nahi kar payega.. . .. . . "

Shiva atood their numb as he realizes that he had nothing in his hands.. . He had did a blunder to trust ashok and the consequence is Raavi on stake.

Ashok ordered his people to leave shiva and shiva was blank thinking and seeing those papers.. . . And ashok says,

"Chalo... . .. . .. . .. Raavi ko lana hai.. . .. . .. Aur shiva ko toh uske ghar bhi chodna hai na.. . .. Shiva ne mujhe raavi de di uske liye main itna toh kar hi sakta hoon na.. . .. . "

Ashok's men hold Shiva and put him in car and drove towards pandya niwas, Shiva entered in the house first thing Shiva saw was Raavi run towards him and says,

"Shiva ho gya na kaam .. . .. Kar aaya na tu deal pkki.. . . Mujhe bhut tension ho rahi thi teri.. . .. . Chal tu aa na main pani lati hoon.. . .. . "

Shiva looked at her and a tear escaped his eyes And Raavi got startled she cups his face and says,

"Kya hua shiva tu.. . Aise.. . .. . Kuch hua hai kyaa.. . .. "

Here ashok comes and holds Raavi's wrist and drags her away from shiva.. . .. . Raavi looks at him in shock and free herself saying,

"Don't you dare.. . . Ashok.. . .. "

Ashok looks at her and says,

"Tumhare mooh se mera naam kitna acha lagta hain.. . .. . . "

Raavi looks towards him in anger and than at Shiva who is standing helplessly and meanwhile whole family arrives and ashok pulls Raavi towards him everyone in the house protested but Raavi's eyes were fixed on Shiva who was not speaking anything and his eyes were full of tears. Gaumbi says,

"Yeh kya batmeezi hai.. . .. Chodo Raavi ko "

Ashok hands the paper to gaumbi and says,

"Ise padh lijiye.. . .. Fir pata lag jayega.. . .. . .. "

Gaumbi reads the papers and got shocked and says,

"Yeh.. Yeh.. . ..kaise...."

Everyone ask,

"kya hain isme Gaumbi.... . .. "

And gaumbi says,

"Isme likha hain ki ashok 15 lakh dega par badle main use.. . . Use.. . "

Dhara says,

"Kya gaumbi.. . .. "

Gautam says,

"Raavi chahiye.. . Aur Shiva ne sign kiya hai.. . .. "

Raavi is taken aback and her whole world became dark only one person Shiva who is not looking at her even is standing there.. . .. . .she thoughts that Shiva again traded her first for kangan and now for 15 lakh. She stood numb she can't feel anything just the words Shiva ne sign krr diye hain ringed in her mind and ashok says,

"Toh app sab ko pata lag gaya higa kii mujhe kya chahiye.. . .. Aur koii mujge rok nahi sakta warna main legal action lunga.. . .. . . Aur deal cancel ho hayegi.. . .. "

Saying this he drags Raavi with him Raavi who is standing numb just looking at Shiva was being dragged away by him when Shiva looked towards her, Shiva was so guilty to see her in this state but he cannot do anything. Raavi than came into senses and started protesting and says,

"Chod mujhe.. . . .. . Leave ne.. . . Shiva........Gaumbi.. . .. Koii toh aao.. . .. . .. . "

Ashok hold her by her hairs and drag her saying,

"Kii bhu kuch nahi karega tumhare khud ke pati ne tumhe mujhe de diya hain.. . .. . . Tum meri ho.. . . Samjh main aaya.. . .. . Aur aap log 15 lakh mil gaye hai na abb mere aas paas ya meri Raavi ke aas pass bhi mat aana warna main.. . .. . .. . . "

And he leaves grining at Shiva holding Raavi by her hairs and Raavi had tears in her eyes of pain ,of disbelief ,of betrayal.... . ..

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After a long time i wrote this.. . .. I was busy in my exams and all stuff.. . .. . But now i am free and will update soon.. . .. .

Hope so you all like it.. . I made some changes in the storyline from the prologue i thought that thus change will be more appropriate for the base.

Do tell ne your views and please give suggestions to improve.

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

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Pottermeow and aimmy how Can i not tag you guys..... You helped a lot for the title........

Share your views guys will love to hear you 😘🥰😍

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Pottermeow and aimmy how Can i not tag you guys..... You helped a lot for the title........

Share your views guys will love to hear you 😘🥰😍

This was 😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥 lets see what shiva do next now .. how he make her ravi his own.... Update sooon....

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

This was 😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥 lets see what shiva do next now .. how he make her ravi his own.... Update sooon....

Will update soon.......

Totally unpredictable story the start is amazing🔥🔥 one suggestion i want to give pls pls pls make raavi stand for herself 💯makers r hellbent to show her dobi pls don't do that here and i know story start hui hai ek bohot bade misunderstanding k sath but i m sucker of happy ending so pls happyending denaand i m totally hooked up for next part do tag me 💖