Rishmi ff part 17updated on page 10 (completed) - Page 6

Awesome part morning I got a feeling that you will upload a part so it came true it was superb shayush 🥰🥰🥰😘😘😍😍😍 I was just imagining them but this part was such a wow

Originally posted by: chandujojo

Awesome part morning I got a feeling that you will upload a part so it came true it was superb shayush 🥰🥰🥰😘😘😍😍😍 I was just imagining them but this part was such a wow

Thank you 😊. Your feeling comes true. I am so glad that you guys like my story as I am not a good writer but still you guys support me a lot 😊

Thank you so much for all your support❤

Awesome update.. I m loving reading ur story.. can’t wait for the next update ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Roroo

Awesome update.. I m loving reading ur story.. can’t wait for the next update ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you 😊

I will try to update soon

Hii guys,

Without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

Trio Leave for the party.

Ayush and Shalu are having a cute banter, seeing this Lakshmi remember rishi and her nok jhok and get sad.

Lakshmi P. O. V

Why? Why I am not able to hate Rishi? Why I always thought about Rishi? He betrayed me but still I care for him. And Top of that I am missing him. No Lakshmi you have to be strong. You can't fall weak.

With this thought She reached to the venue.

They all go inside.

Jahnavi : (Smilingly) Happy Birthday Dev

Dev: (smilingly) Thank you so much Jaan 🤩

Jahnavi : You are looking so beautiful today Priya.

Priya: (happily) Thank you Jaanu. This dev is telling from past on hour that I am not looking good at all.

Jahnavi: He is just teasing you priya.

Priya: I know.

Priya Outfit



Dev Outfit



All start to chat for sometime. After sometime,

Ayush: (sadly) Dev everything seems incomplete.

Dev: (worriedly) Why Sir.

Ayush: Without Dance, everything seems incomplete naa.

Dev: (relaxed) Oh that way Sir.

Then Dev tells the DJ to start the dance game.

Dj: Hello guys, So to entertain all of you. We will play a dance game, in which all the partner will make a circle and I will play a song then you have to dance on it then I will change the song and when I will change the song, you guys have to have to change their partners. Again the same will repeat. Remember One thing if a person comes on stage then he can't leave. Ok guys?

Everyone:Ok

Ayush, Shalu, Dev and Priya comes on stage and Lakshmi was going on a side when someone pulls her on stage.

(I know that you all know who is the someone😍)

Lakshmi get shocked seeing him.

Lakshmi: (shocked and slowly) Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi: (smilingly) Yes, it's me Sweetheart.

Rishi Outfit



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akshmi was trying to leave but Rishi didn't leave her and the song get started.

Song is Janam Janam



All the couple start dancing romantically.

Lakshmi tries to leave but Rishi make her dance. They both dancing closely. Rishi felt peace, seeing Lakshmi close to her.Even Lakshmi feel relaxed.

After 2 mins song changed.

Now the couple are

Ayush-Lakshmi
Dev-Shalu
Samar-Priya
Rishi-Avni

(Some names are random)

Now the song is Hawayein



Again 2 or 3 minutes song changed.

Now the song is Soch naa sake



Now the couples are

Dev-Lakshmi
Ayush-Avni
Rishi-Diya
Ajay-Shalu

(Again some names are random)

Rishi got very jealous seeing Lakshmi and Dev dancing together and that too happily. He hold Diya very tightly and hurts her.

Diya: (painfully) What are you doing Mr? You are hurting me.

Hearing this, Rishi comes back to reality and said Sorry

And like this two or three rounds also happens.

Dj: All the people have dance beautifully but the best dance couple is Dev and her Jaan.

(DJ also know about their plan of making Rishi jealous because Dj is a close friend of Dev😉)

Dev and Lakshmi comes to stage to receive the award and take it happily.

Seeing this Rishi got jealous and goes to bar area and start drinking heavily.

Rishi:(drunkly) One more.

Waiter: But Sir you already had 6 Sir.

Rishi: (angrily) I said give me one more.

Waiter gives a glass of wine.

Rishi: (murmuring) Why Lakshmi Why are you doing this to me. You know naa I can't see you with anyone except me. Even after knowing this you are with that Dev. Today I will sort this for sure.

Saying this he leave.

Lakshmi was going to find Priya but Rishi forcefully take her to a room.

In the room,

Rishi pinned Lakshmi and look at her

Lakshmi: (angrily😠) What are you doing Mr Oberoi? Wait a second you are drunk Mr. Oberoi. Aren't you?

Rishi: (angrily😠) YES I AM DRUNK BUT I AM DRUNK BECAUSE OF YOU. YOU FORCE ME. YOU KNOW VERY WELL THAT I CAN'T SEE YOU WITH ANYONE. WHENEVER I SEE YOU WITH THAT DEV MY BLOOD START TO BOIL. WHAT HE CALLED YOU JAAN. BUT YOU NEVER STOP HIM. WHY DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND THAT YOU ARE MINE MRS OBEROI, JUST MINE.

Lakshmi saw a genuineness in his eye but still she didn't forgive him

Lakshmi: ( frustratedly) EVEN I TOLD YOU BEFORE TOO THAT I DON'T LOVE YOU ANYMORE. BUT YOU ARE NOT LISTENING TO ME AT ALL. I'M ALSO A HUMAN, EVEN I HAVE A HEART, I ALSO HAVE EMOTIONS, I ALSO FEEL PAIN. SO PLEASE FOR GOD SAKE JUST LEAVE. LET ME LIVE PEACEFULLY. I'M BEGGING YOU.

Now crying

PLEASE LEAVE ME RISHI IF YOU EVER LOVED ME.

PRECAP : A BOOOOOOM

THATS IT FOR TODAY.

I WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON AS POSSIBLE BUT I'M NOT SURE IF I WILL BE ABLE TO UPDATE OR NOT.

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Awesome update.. as always 💜💜💜

Originally posted by: Roroo

Awesome update.. as always 💜💜💜

Thank you so much 😊

Hii guys

Let's continue

Its start with Lakshmi asking Rishi to leave from here.

Lakshmi start leaving just then rishi says

Rishi: (painfully) Ok Lakshmi, If you don't want me in your life, if you don't love me anymore then then there is nothing left in my life, this markesh dosh is the reason behind your arrival in my life. Now let's this markesh dosh fulfill his work. I am going away from your life for forever lakshmi, I hope now you will live happily without me. You will get a life partner who will always love you. But Remember one thing Lakshmi I love you, I will love you even after my death.

Lakshmi get shocked and turned but Rishi jumped from the room's window.

Lakshmi: (shouting) RISHIIIIIIIIIIII

Hearing Lakshmi shout everyome comes there but found a crying and shocked Lakshmi.

Dev: (worriedly) What happened Jaan?

Lakshmi didn't say anything.

Priya: (worriedly) Lakshmi what happened? Where is Rishi Sir?

Lakshmi signs toward Window and get unconscious.

Dev and Ayush go to the window and saw a bleeding Rishi.

Dev & Ayush : (shouting) Rishi Sirrrr and Rishi Bhaiiiiii

Priya and Shalu comes there and get huge shock

They comes downstairs and take Lakshmi and Rishi to Ayush Car.
While putting them in the car Rishi hand touched Lakshmi hand and Rishi take a deep breath.

In the hospital,

Ayush: (shouting) Just gives two stretcher right now. Its a emergency.

Wardboys comes with two stretchers.
Doctor also comes amd after seeing Rishi

Doctor: Just take him to OT fast, he have lost too much blood and head injuries are too much. Please see this lady too. Even her condition is not good. Fast.

Doctor take Rishi to OT and Lakshmi to checkup in another room.

Ayush and Shalu start crying. Dev and Priya console them.

Just then whole family comes there and start asking about Rishi. Everyone asked about Lakshmi except Karishma, Sonia and Neelam.

Ayush and Virender get angry with Trio. Virender had an outbrust .

Virender : (shouting) How disgusting you are trio. Really you have become heartless. Ayush inform us that Rishi and Lakshmi are going to be admitted in hospital. But you all asked for Rishi, every time Lakshmi saved him but you guys never give any value to her, never care for her. Why??

Trio get silent.

Virender: (continuing) I know why because you have ego of your money. Right?? Now I am challenging you Just save Rishi life with your money. Save him naa. What happened why are you all silent now. This money can't purchase someone life Neelam, Sonia,Karishma.

Virender : (looking at neelam angrily) You know what Neelam, you have fail in everything except a egoistic and arrogant businesswoman. You never become a good wife, daughter-in-law, Sister-in-law, even a mother too. Your own son was not able to realise his true love. Your daughter (looking at sonia) Your daughter also become like you a heartless girl, who have ego of money. Only pooja, custom, traditions, rituals can't save your son neelam. Now this family is on this stage because of you. You are the one of the biggest reason of our son's condition. I will never forgive you Neelam

Neelam realize her mistake and start crying uncontrollably.

Virender : (looking at Karishma) What about you Karishma. You are my real sister, you know naa how our bauji raised us, with so much struggle. You used to be a soft hearted girl who used to help everyone.

(Everyone get shocked as Virender say karishma used to be a soft heart girl then all start to think what leads to such a big change in karishma)

Virender : (continuing) Then you fall for Vivek who was the rich person. He rejected you because we were poor that time. It leads to your personality change, you start to thought that being poor is a curse, but you are wrong my sister. You even broke your marriage with Ayush father because he is not rich like us but you know what he still loves you, on your every birthday you got a card and expensive gifts and I used to told you that it was me right.

Karishma nods.

Virender : No it was always ayush father. He still talk to Ayush and Ahana, but you know what, you never gave any value to his love. You don't deserve his love at all.
Now tell me a thing, Will my old Karishma also treated Lakshmi like you did? Tell me that you are still proud of your money? Tell me that still proud of yourself?

Karishma start crying.

Karishma: (crying) I am so sorry bhai. My heartbrake make me stonehearted girl. I start hating poor peoples because I thought poor people doesn't get anything.But I was wrong bhai, I was wrong. I also did wrong with ayush father and Lakshmi. I am World worst woman. I am really sorry guys, I am really sorry.

Virender: ( now looking at sonia) You are my daughter. I used to be very proud of you when you were a small girl you know why because you used to help everyone even servents but now I feel ashamed of you, you know why because you have a arrogant and heartless girl like your mother and your aunt. You don't have respect for others, you treat poor peoples as your servant. I am telling you for the last time, change your attitude otherwise I will stop your giving you money. Then you have to earn money on your own and that too without My name. Do you get that?

Sonia also realized her mistake and apologized to Virender.

Sonia: (apologizing) I will change my attitude dad. I will give Lakshmi bhabhi the respect which she deserves.

On the Other Hand,

Lakshmi wakes up and remembered what happened some time ago and shouted Rishiiiiiiiiiii

Hearing Lakshmi shout, everyone comes there.

Lakshmi start going outside but doctor and nurse tried to stop her but she didn't stop.

Lakshmi: (crying) Please let me go, Rishi needs me. Please let me go.

Virender: (requesting) Please let her go doctor. Only they can save each other.

Virender now to Neelam, Sonia and Karishma : See You trio always find fault in her, never respect her, loved her but even after knowing that her condition is not good still she goes to save rishi without thinking about herself.

Trio again get sad.

Rishi operation was going on and they didn't allow Lakshmi to enter.

Lakshmi: (pleading) please doctor let me meet him. Please doctor.

Doctor: No we can't allow you.

There is a senior lady doctor whose heart get melt.

Lady Doctor : Ok you can meet him but just for 5 mins. His condition is very bad.

Lakshmi : (crying) Thank you doctor.

Lakshmi goes inside and see Rishi who is attached ti various machines. She goes to him and cares his hair.

Lakshmi: (crying) Rishi I am so sorry. I thought that still you are playing with my heart. I have fear that you will broke my heart again. I am sorry rishi that I didn't trust you. Please Rishi please get up, talk to me, punish me. But don't do this to yourself rishi. I can't see you in this condition. (shaking him) Please wake up Rishi. If you want to me theb punish me but please get up Rishi for my sake Rishi. Please wake up Rishi.

Still his body didn't show any movement.

Lakshmi : (determinedly) Ok Rishi, if you are not going to listen to me, if you are going to leave me in this world, then I don't want to live in this world I am also coming with you. I will die too. I will go with you because I love you Rishi, I really love you.

After a min, Rishi body show some movements, Lakshmi saw this and inform the doctor same.

Doctor goes to OT and comes out from OT after 30 mins.

Doctor: Its a miracle Mr.Oberoi after half an hour ago, Rishi body does showing any response to our treatment but nkw he is absolutely fine.

Lady Doctor says its your trust beta that your husband is out of danger. Saying this doctor also leaves.

After 2 hours Rishi get conscious, Rishi start searching for Lakshmi through his eyes but didn't found her.

Everyone comes to meet him except Lakshmi as Lakshmi thought she is the reason behind his condition. But she was outside and hearing everything.

Rishi: (sadly) Mom Dad Where is Lakshmi. She still didn't forgive me, Maybe my crimes are too big to be forgiven. Mom when I was unconscious I feel like Lakshmi was calling me, telling me if I didn't wake up then she will kill herself too. But I was wrong, she still didn't forgive me.

He start crying and his condition start deteriorating. Seeing his deteriorating condition Lakshmi comes running to him.

Lakshmi: (crying) Rishi please don't cry, I have forgiven you and you are right, I came to meet you and tell you that if something happens to you then I will die too.

Rishi: Why?

Lakshmi: (instantly) I love you Rishi.

Rishi: (happily) I was dying to hear the same from you Lakshmi. I love you too Lakshmi. I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you

Thats it for today guys.

1600+ WORDS

Only 1 or 2 parts are left in this ff as because of someone reasons I am not able to update the story on time, so I am going to complete the story in 1 or 2 parts.

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Originally posted by: Roroo

Amazing update ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much ❤

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