Kal: The Past or the Future? SS -C6a-Updated page 13- Page 5

Tags were not working for me earlier... 😕

Its great that Sai has wonderful friends! Loved when Virat was grilled! Her past has been hard, but Looking forward to how her tomorrow shapes up.

It's great. I loved that here you gave some role to Sai’s friends. Loved it❤️

Oh my my...I love this Pulkit. Straight words and no nonsense. And he actually has a spine. And finally someone with enough logic to show a mirror to the hypocrite that Virat Chavan is. His character had been assassinated do bad that I can't feel for Virat I see on screen anymore.

And this is some really good writing. Loved it. Friendships, oh my God, are my favorite thing to read and it's so endearing to see her friends stand up for her and Sandhya actually ordering Virat to not cry in front of Sai.

Can't wait to see where this goes..

Pulkit was mind-blowing here! Kaash show mein he would be this useful.

Nice...I wanted to see something like this in show but vaga to sab confused dikha diye.

I can't imagine this sensible Pulkit... Good job...

Read both posts. Lovely writeup.

You say you are writing for the first time? Cant believe it.

Writing in Hindi is fine. When you are writing in relevance to a Hindi Serial, it is the best language. English is a bit inadequate.

Do tag me in the next update. I would love to read more from you.

I too wrote a OS Somewhere in future..in similar lines.

Wow. This Pulkit is unfiltered and a very strong version as opposed to what we are used to seeing. It was a nice nice read. Keep writing. Thank you for the tag.

I was eagerly waiting for your chapter

Thank you so much for tagging me❤️

Loved the chapter ❤️