Kal: The Past or the Future? SS -C6a-Updated page 13 - Page 3

A Very interesting twist.. brilliantly represented.. 👏👏🤗🤗👍🏼

Honestly speaking I always wanted sai to fulfill her dreams away from the toxic environment of CN. We can't get that in the show. Thank u so much for writing this Masterpiece.. 👏👏👌👌

I loved it ..❤❤❤❤

Finally sai bai has fulfilled her n aaba's dream of becoming a successful doctor. That too cardiologist..💃💃💃💃

N her friends always supported her..

I'm eagerly waiting for next part..

After watching this show my hate list for certain words is increasing.. like vaada, best friend , deal , Beizzati, insult, etc. Effect of ghum ganja 🤣🤣

Kya hoga Mera.. 😒😒🤔

Very good start, sai ajinyka Aniket friendship is too good, earlier for stories like this I used to request author to stick for sairat endgame, but now no, I just want to know how sai and virat life turned, please update soon

Woah!! SaiRat are seperated, but Sai bai has (almost) fulfilled her and her Aaba's dream❤️

Aniket and Ajinkya❤️❤️😳

Amazing start, excited for the next update❤️

just a doubt, are SaiRat ever gonna end up together in your story??o r is this a Sai Joshi SS?? just asking.

Originally posted by: Flying_High

A brilliant start to what will be a very, very exciting story👏

I always, in some corner of my heart, wanted Sai to separate from the Chavans and move on successfully in life with the help of her friends and see, you made this happen! I absolutely loved reading everything about Ani and AJ (as Sai calls them😳) and they honestly got me reminded of my OG character, Kunal😳

I totally understand about the hectic schedule, so yes, take your time but give us at least one update per week🤣

I wrote this when I literally could have entered the screen and strangled Virat coz of his behaviour with Sai, especially when he was ganging up with Pakhi... that was really low of him and I needed to vent, hence the separation happened in this plot and not just a short one but for a span for 10 years...I always wanted Sai to have a good set of friends and live like how 19-year-olds actually live and not be bound by societal or stupid marital or family laws. Let's see where the plot leads us...because even I don't know what will be next 😆😆

thank you for reading 😊

Originally posted by: nutmeg7

I don't know why you are developing cold feet. This is absolutely brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is very very interesting 🙂 thanks for the tag

I have never written a story before. this was not supposed to be a story, in the first place. It was my personal vent out at Virat which took the shape of a story.... maybe that's why the cold feet and hands 🤣

Thank you for reading 😊

Originally posted by: methebest

very good and very interesting, please bring the next chapter soon!!

Thank you for reading. will try to update it by Sunday (no promises😆) 😊

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

This is awesome❤️

Totally loved how you have setup everything😳

Please update soon🤗

Thank you for reading. Still waiting for your updates though.... they were some of my best-read stories. 😳 Will try and update by Sunday (no promises) 😆😆

Originally posted by: ShipIsSailing

This was brilliant. It is very interesting❤️can't wait for the next part!

Coming from a phenomenal writer as you, I'd take this complement and run😳 😆

Will try and update by Sunday (no promises) 😆

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

“Itne saalo mein khud ke dil ke tukde samet kar jod nahi payi, toh socha kam se kam dusro ke dil toh fix kar hi sakti hu na?"

I swear my heart broke.

And these 3 friends, Oh my God, you've written them so adorably and so beautifully. Sai Joshi - world renowned Cardiologist,,wohooo, you go girl. How I wish we can see this on TV !!!

The friendship is just so pure, so freaking pure. After the way "friendship" has been mocked in Sai's life and our lives too, by Virat and Patralekha, it's so endearing for Sai to experience friendship all over again.

Ajinkya and Aniketh..

I admire you for writing in Hindi even though it's not your first language, because I can never do that. So Bravo👏

And can't wait to see how this is going to unfold!! Because I remember my nerves when I first posted fiction in the forum or when posting my FF. I just shivered with fear and anticipation. But I'm glad you did it despite of all the nerves and cold-fingers.

Congratulations on the new story..❤️

Yeah, I felt sad writing that line too.... the amount of trust we, as humans, invest in another only to be belittled and treated worse than trash... Nevertheless, my Sai Joshi is a free bird...She had 10 years of introspection of her past and the actions of self and those she once called family. Dr Sai Joshi is an example of how one person can be complete within themselves and that no individual is a "half" of the other, irrespective of it being a better or a worse half.

Now she just needs clarity and closure and how, where and what it will lead to is only known by her (she hasn't told me yet🤔)

I, myself had started hating the word "friendship" because of the show hence, I had to do something about it for my own sanity's sake. I really wanted to see the trio together as friends and doing stuff that normal kids do at their age.

As for Hindi, well....that was a struggle🤣 Generally, I speak English, drunk and emotional (angry, sad, shocked) me, speaks Korean and IF me speaks decent Hindi a lot, I guess 🤣

I surely had cold hands and feet while posting. Hope that feeling goes away the next time. 😊

Thank you for reading and the feedback 🤗

Originally posted by: Ay3_smitten

Beautifully penned down just loved every bit of it ❤️

Loved the friendship of these three

Can’t wait for the next update

Happy writing

Thanks for tagging me🤗

Thank you for reading. Hopefully the next update will be by Sunday (no promises) 😆