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tagging those who were waiting😳
kisi ko bhool gayi toh maafi
Piliiij next part.
His journey in lift with all thoughts.👏
Bahar Chalke baat kare
i mean in his arms Anu☺️
I know I m greedy, but kya Behan thoda jadi next part😆
Ahh loved it. God ur writing made me emotional . We all r so attached to MaAn 😢❤❤ eagerly waiting for the next update dear ❤
“Anu!” he sighed and with cloudy eyes he caressed the screen of his phone with his thumb as he hovered over her name.... as though the name spelt magic...like it were a painkiller that could drive all his pain away...she was indeed some kind of everything....
At first he hustled to get back to the lobby with excitement, heaps of positive energy and a lot of hope but then his pace decelerated as he saw her sitting there with her laptop, anxiously waiting for a reply.
As he inched closer there was a myriad of emotions congesting his heart and head...how he wished to run up to her and sway her in his longing arms to never let her go...she was so precious to him and the thought of hurting her, hurted him...
Bemused with the overwhelming rush he tried to detangle each emotion and placed it in the order of what he felt the most... happy was the first, relieved a close second with excitement and anxiety catching up swiftly...
After a lot of this and that he finally got to sense that stayed with him the longest and that was guilt and discomfort...he knew not why and he could give anything to rid himself of the awful feeling that made him behave irrationally and leave her by herself when she must have needed him the most...
His eyes welled up and his heart was in his mouth as he fast approached her at the slowest pace gathering every bit of courage to face her...
The short span from the lift to the reception felt like a barren desert he had to cross through a mirage of overpowering emotions in the quest of reaching the oasis.
Clueless on how to react he cleared his wailing throat and pushed his glasses to the forehead and brushed the tears away to make himself presentable before he finally went up to her...
“Anujjj” she mouthed on seeing his tall figure right in front if her and he melted into a puddle in that very moment, with his eyes tearing up again just like hers...
“Anu...pama... tum yahan? “ he asked even though he knew why...
“haan...mai yahan! “ she exclaimed and arched her brows zealously while he was still awestruck to see her there.
“sorry mai tumhe expect nahi kar raha isliye aise...” he said in an effort to convey his confused feelings..
“aapko lene... nai matlab...aapse milne aayi hoon.....” already floored by her deliberate fumble, he looked at her intently to let the feeling sink in, which made her nervous instead...
”aapko disturb toh nahi kiya maine?...agar aap biji hai toh mai wait kar sakti hoon...matlab jab tak aap free nahi ho jaate...main yahin sofey par intejaar kar sakti hoon, aao jayiye aur aona kaam khatam kar lijiye, surri mujhe bata jar aana chahiye tha...par maine socha ki surprije doongi lekin ye nahin socha ki aao biji bhi ho sakte hain...“ she rattled on like usual and made him feel like the old times...
Though he could watch her talk all day, he felt a little intimidated with the audience she had pulled with her blabber...
“Anupama, hum kahin bahar jaakar baat karey?” he gestured to the peoplewatching them...she bit her tongue with embarrassment and quietly followed him to the elevator uttering a ‘surri’ under her breath...
Gosh, he’d missed her antics terribly...his eyes were fixated on her as they got in and out of the lift towards to exit to the building....
Breathing in the fresh air, they stood outside facing the sea...the inviting smell of waves stirred a reminiscing feeling in them and they both yelled in sync “samandar chalein? ” and laughed happily thinking some things will never change....
******
Though It was a short walk to beach from the office, the very justified yet awkward silence made it feel like a whole lot longer...
While he struggled to process and prepare his defence for leaving abruptly, she was engrossed in her conflicting thoughts on his reaction of seeing her there...was he happy? yes she said to herself, was he angry? she asked and no was the answer to that for sure.. wondering how to start the conversation that she had mentally rehearsed a hundred times on the way, she rebuked herself and rushed slightly ahead of him....
Fighting the conflict in her head, she misread the oncoming traffic and stepped on the busy road when a car screeched its brakes inches away from her...
“Anu!!!!! “ he screamed as he saw his life flash before him...with his heart pounding in his chest, he leaped across to pull her off the road and yanked her straight into his arms...
so yeah that happened😳 I know I’m testing your patience but please comment and tell me what you liked so I can focus more on it in the next part, which by the way will be posted by evening woh bhi IST not BST😆, the song that could justify Anuj here was abhi mujhe mein kahin, love it again for many reasons...ok phir shaam ko milte hai, thank you for all the comments before mann khush ho gaya🤗
Behen tune dil khush kar diya. I can soo see Gaurav emoting all this beautifully!!!!
Now I am more anxious to see what actually plays on screen. Tune BP badha diya lol
Read this twice hinz🤗
Kya likha hai...it was just wow
How well you have explained Anuj's emotions. You gave name to every little feeling of his. Your wordplay is def topnotch⭐️
"She was indeed some kind of everything"
I loved this line. Kitni badi baat kehdi iss line ne. ❤️
When anuj was detangling his emotions, putting them in order...that was a literary masterpiece!
After a lot of this and that....
There were just a lot of lines here that i loved😃
His eyes were fixated on her as they got in and out of the lift ...
There is no better line to define Anuj's longing.
Hands down, this part was one of the bestest i've ever ever read👏
Contin soon and thanks for the tag maan.
EDIT - Anuj better sway anu in his arms in the next part, on the beach. Bas keh dia
Yaar not fair do do continue pleej ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️.
Pata nahi yeh sab kab milega aise scenes
This has been read but requires to be re read. Am on the way to some place so a detailed comment later but for now this is a big Wow.
Loved how Anuj is sorting his thoughts. And Anu being so so normal.
Very well done.
Lovely
Their unsaid emotions, the conflict was described beautifully.
Eager to know how they will take their conversation forward.
They can do a romantic dance for their wedding reception🤩🤩😍😍😘😋
A 70-75 year old woman somehow gets hired as housekeeping staff member in a hotel First day: she got locked inside the washroom and had to be...
I think it’s about time now or replaced Anuj these social awareness tracks are getting boring now.
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