Let Me Love You ♥️ A MaAn story- completed / 14.11 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Had to read it twice and will be reading it again soon because ooof...you left all of us hanging and now my imagination is going places.😆

I really liked the lines when Anupama caught him in a flaming embrace. Tumne toh mahol bana dia🤪(wiggling brows suggestively)

He towed her around and when he called her three times..hayeee

I was imagining Anuj from the hotel night episode, bas here he was giddy with Anu's love.

Scooped her face in his hands. Yesssssss!! You go boi, take her!!

Ek baar ko toh i was like ki bas aankhon main aankhon daalkar hi tum chod dogi but you did even worse🤪

Let me love you" yes please sir, isi ka toh intezaar tha.

Now ik you are done with this but would be great if there was a chotu sa aftermath, subah ka ek scene❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Wow hinaaaa this is beautiful 😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤

Wish we cld get a scene like this beautiful part of urs in d show 😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz

Teaser pg 1

Part 1: pg 2

Part 2: pg 5

Part 3: pg 7

Part 4: pg 9



Part 5:


“Anu” he called her name softly when he felt her tremble slightly against him...perhaps it was the midnight cold breeze that made her shiver he thought...


“hmmmm” she replied in a mildly miffed tone, not wanting to disturb the perfect proximity of her face close to his heart where she could hear his heartbeat loud and alive...


Drawing her hair off her face, he tucked them gently behind her ear and said “Anu andar chalein tumhein thand lag rahi hai”


“nahi abhi nahi” knowing well that she would refuse, he wrapped his arm around and pulled her closer to keep her warm and she gladly snuggled in so close that his strong manly scent made her giddy.



A few moments later he kissed her hand again and locked her fingers with his...then placing her hand on his heart he cautiously asked...

”Anu...iss rishte ka kya naam hai?”



Reluctantly, she pulled herself up and looked at him purposely...her hand still twined with his, she gently dragged him to her side and put his hand on her chest and said “Anuj iss rishte ka koi naam nahi, kyuki aap toh pyaar se bohot aage nikal gaye”


She wanted him to know how much she valued him and his unconditional love for her...


He quietly listened with modestly downcast eyes, cause to him loving her was second nature...it was something that had become a large part of him, something he was immensely proud of, a feeling that gave him a reason to live.



She wanted him to know how eager she was to return his love, though she knew it would take her a lifetime and more to pay him back in kind, she wished to start right this moment...



Moving his hand from her chest to her face, she stroked it with her lips and fervidly said “Anuj main jaanti hoon ki aapne badle mein kuch nahi chaaha...par ab meri baari hai pyaar jataane ki.....”



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Rushing back into the room to avoid getting drenched by the unexpected rain shower, Anuj briskly ran one hand through his hair and looked at the other to cherish her touch on it...



She noticed him smile and felt a little tingly thinking of it herself...

Is this what love feels like? she asked herself coyly and ‘indeed’ replied her heart...



Rubbing her arms to keep busy, she pretended to look out to enjoy the raindrops falling on the glass door...there was again a very awkward yet enjoyable silence in the room.


He felt it too and though he never wanted her to leave, he knew having her there any longer would be wrong....


Posing to check if she was wet, he walked to the bathroom to fetch a towel and said “bohot raat ho gayi hai na, tumhe tumhare room tak chod doon?”


Hoping she would understand, he handed her the towel and held on to the question...”hmm” she nodded and wiped her dry clothes.


As he turned around to get his phone, he instantly stopped at the strong jerk he felt when her arms slid in from the back up to his chest as she pulled him in a flaming embrace...



He felt her heaving breath on his back as he thrusted her closer. She was glad he couldn't see how vulnerable she looked in that moment...She hugged him tight and he held on tighter.



“Anuj mai aapse bohot bohot bohot pyaar karti hoon” her words threw him in a frenzy and she felt relieved and alive...he had never felt this feeling before, the rewarding sense of acceptance and belonging was sweeter than honey and stronger than his will...



Reeling with passion and not wanting the emotion to end, he plucked her arms off his chest and towed her around to face him...she couldn’t get herself to look up to his face, her face turned a shade darker than the pink she was wearing...



“Anu!” she stared at the floor as her head felt dizzy.

“Anu” he called her name again making it sound like the sweetest name ever.

“Anu meri taraf dekho, look at me?” this time she gave in and timidly lifted her head to play with his piercing gaze...


Stepping closer than the closest he could get , he ardently scooped her face in his hands and let his touch linger on her soft skin...


Then wiping the unseeable tears with his thumb, he fervently stared at her gorgeous face...


Relishing the chaotic closeness, she watched him watch her lovingly...


This was the moment he wished to live for eternity, with her, with them being one...



Hopelessly giving in to the insane temptation, he panted as he inched closer to her face until she could feel his warm and sensuous breath on her bare neck...”let me love you’ he whispered and intimately pressed his lips on hers...





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ok that was not what I expected and wasn't as long I know, sorry.

I did want something intense but kinda got carried away? oh well, it is what it is☺️ accha the songs here are aaj jaane ki zidd na karo by Arijit, love the intimacy in it...or Shayad from Love Aaj Kal 2 which is quite nice too...lagja gale is still too precious to use on this one I thought😌

so yeah that was the end to this series...please drop in a short comment to say if this was a decent enough end? I shall be back with something new next weekend hopefully, until then, keep active and enjoy the drama!


Goodnight!


Jaan lelo humari!!😳Itna pyaara itna pyaara!! Beautiful✨!! Just like Anuj use to put his hand om his heart whenever he sees Anu. Just like me doing after reading it.🤗haayeee!!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Perfect as it could get. I love it how women are a mess when they get brave to express love yet feel all the sharam. Its just priceless.


Well done you 🥰

Posted: 3 years ago
#85

thank you so much all you lovely people, your comments are all so so nice and heartening🤗 thank you🤗


will get back to each when I have some time off, but please know I've read them all and am really thankful to each for taking the time to comment🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Haayyeeee💓💓💓 is the only thing i can do right now....these things about anuj is what makes him spcl from other....love the update....keep writing dear

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

You know I bookmarked your story to read before going to bed and trust me this....this little part of my life is what I call happiness

Cozy bed, wrapped in a comfy blanket, chocolate to eat and on top of that your story....show me a better combination than this 🥺🖤

I knew ye part bawal hoga so mai ne parhne se pehle poora mahaul banaya feel lene k liye....only I know how difficult it was to resist myself from reading this the whole day😆

Ab mast gaane sun k so jaungi....poore din baanuj bunty kar k doosro ko pareshan karne k baad khud raat ko maan k sapne dekhungi😎

Edited by shrizz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

✌️👌👏

It sails ya. You're such an amazing writer to play with words.. lovely writing. Its flowy 🥰🥰

Wonderful wonderful story. Felt every emotion and situation ❤️

Edited by ayushijindal - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Awesome can't wait for more

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