Gangs of Somnath: Pandya Store Re-Imagined! Part IV, Page 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Ae chokri tm kaa berojgar karke chorogi choubeys ko

Kaa likho ho bey

Ekdum zabardast dhansu ek noooo...

Full Ottt masala Web show banega ye toh

alt ko de k dekho 😁😁😁😁

Dhara the devil bana dena usko

hardik ko kya character arc di ho

You also full filled my idea of Raavi being indirectly related to jannuuu

The locket👏😍😍😍

Shivi lovestory bhi aayega na

Jaldi se. De do baki ka summary bhi ho sake toh

Thanks kehna baki Behena logo ko bhi jinke sath idea discussion kiya ye

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Pehle mereko laga tum bas ek part di ho

Imagine my happiness when I realise that there is more for me to read

Me doing a happy dancewa dearest milkwa💃💃💃💃💃💃

Yaar each part I'm finding a point which I thought about sometime

Ye rishita wala idea I thought ki dev dupe karna chahta ho rishu ko isliye he interacted with her

But you reversed the situation 😅😅😅😅

I don't liked Jannu misunderstanding the pandays 😢😢😢😢

But I know you will solve it superfast

Please add Rishu teaching dhara a mast sa lesson even better if Raavi will do the honours 😅😅😅😅😁

Super excited for more 👍👍😃👍😃👍😃👍😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

What a masterpiece! I’m loving this! All the plots are going so well! I’m loving Jaanu! Also obviously ShiVi!❤️‍🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Shividhadkndilk

Ae chokri tm kaa berojgar karke chorogi choubeys ko

Kaa likho ho bey

Ekdum zabardast dhansu ek noooo...

Full Ottt masala Web show banega ye toh

alt ko de k dekho 😁😁😁😁

Dhara the devil bana dena usko

hardik ko kya character arc di ho

You also full filled my idea of Raavi being indirectly related to jannuuu

The locket👏😍😍😍

Shivi lovestory bhi aayega na

Jaldi se. De do baki ka summary bhi ho sake toh

Thanks kehna baki Behena logo ko bhi jinke sath idea discussion kiya ye


Itni badi story diya aur itna chota thank you?

hum le lenge!

you have no idea how much we laughed but AVI is the genius for putting this together!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Avi absolutely loved how you incorporated jannus liking for Shiva and him thinking to hire Shiva 😍😍😍😍

The mixing of kidnapping danda kaand haveli alll seems to flow oh so smoothly as if it's the original plot

Truly mesmerizing Yaar

Specially the kachori Yaar and ointment you added it without any fuss

I had written a story which is still in my drafts wahan pe bhi dhara is responsible for shiva leaving his studies 😃😃😋😃😋😃😋😃

Ab kya hi bolu main

Gonna act greedy and ask for some more

If you are free

Aur likhdo😋😋😋😋😋😋

Edited by Shividhadkndilk - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Avi tm padhne nhi dogi na update

You write something in between ki aake comment karna jyada jaruri lagta h

So now

Gombi has three love ladies in his life

ANITA

DHARA

&

MAGGGIIIIIIIII🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

WHO WILL WIN THE RACE???????

TM oily ka oil aur dabba kaand bhi daal diya

Bechare deva aur hardik k sath itni na insafi kahe re unko bhi thoda sa lines dedo becharo ka guest appearance hi karva do chota sa

Ufff Jeera kaaanddddd🤩🤩🤩🤩

Avi kya yahan jangal main mangal mangal mil sakta h nahi toh room main kachori or Chinese khilane wala de do pleazzzzzzzzzzzxxxxx


P. S padh liya finally 😍😍😍😍🎉😍🎉😍🎉

Edited by Shividhadkndilk - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Anu_V


Itni badi story diya aur itna chota thank you?

hum le lenge!

you have no idea how much we laughed but AVI is the genius for putting this together!

Yeh Ek part ka tha

I didn't realised aake. Likh diya h

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Avi🤣🤣 Gangs of Somnath🤣🤣

I read all the parts posted so far in in one go

Dhara is gangster’s daughter🤣 She is after all not Bhagodi ki beti but mob boss Alpana ki beti

Hardik also has a small role in the OG🤣

Janu as the chief of Police training academy or more like goonday training academy😆

Raavi is Daksh and Prasuti’s daughter, Janu’s foster daugher🤣

Gautam - Dhara - Anita 🔺🤣
Dev - again Dev has no roke in this version also🤣

Rishita - A piolice and Rishimendra in action🤣

Shiva - the one man army 🤣

Raavi - once a dobi always a dobi😆

Krish - Kesar chudail stole Dhara’s diamond necklace😆


Thoroughly enjoyed all the parts🤣🤣 Now can’t wait for all of thrm to retutn to Somnath because of Jeera Kaand and finally let the clash of Gangs begin😆


Edited by mpks1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

i just realized i havent appreciated your writing the way it should have been....so sorry and Loved It GIFs - Get the best GIF on GIPHY

what a unique concept.....and janardan being hero(1st it was hard to accept but now m getting used to it).....

rishita m so proud of u

raavi and shiva are mending their relationship......love it

gautam wants oily in haveli so she can make maggie? like really?

dhara be ready.........u and your phamily😉 will be wiped out......aai badi pandya's ko wipe out karegi.......

please take shiva with you janardan ........asap......i would love to see him in khakhi he would look hottest cop😳☺️

pls keep updating whenever you get time......kind of addicted to it.........


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpks1

Avi🤣🤣 Gangs of Somnath🤣🤣

I read all the parts posted so far in in one go

Dhara is gangster’s daughter🤣 She is after all not Bhagodi ki beti but mob boss Alpana ki beti

Hardik also has a small role in the OG🤣

Janu as the chief of Police training academy or more like goonday training academy😆

Raavi is Daksh and Prasuti’s daughter, Janu’s foster daugher🤣

Gautam - Dhara - Anita 🔺🤣
Dev - again Dev has no roke in this version also🤣

Rishita - A piolice and Rishimendra in action🤣

Shiva - the one man army 🤣

Raavi - once a dobi always a dobi😆


Thoroughly enjoyed all the parts🤣🤣 Now can’t wait for all of thrm to retutn to Somnath because of Jeera Kaand and finally let the clash of Gangs begin😆


dev has no role again.......this cracked me up🤣 once a nalla always a nalla🤣

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