Hey guys i am a newbie in the forum i love Pandya Store especially SHIVI so i thought to write an OS on my favorite. It's my first story so please bear me with that.
All your suggestions are accepted here so that i van improve đ
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SCENE: Shivi have gave up their room to Gaura as dhara is pregnant and both sleep in aangan meanwhile new room is under construction.
Here no diary kand and sneha kand has occured and SHIVI are in love with each other.
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After Dhara fainted in the morning Gaumbi took her to doctor and when they returned they share the news that they are pregnant. Everyone in the house was on cloud nine everyone congratulated them. But after all happiness it also brought another chaos about where Gaura will live as their room is under construction and they slept in aangan. Firstly, Dev offered his room and Rishita created a ruckus and stomped her foot and went yo her office leaving behind embarrassed Dev. Then Shivi offered their room to which Gaura was reluctant but Shivi were more stubborn and they started shifting. Gaumbi went to Shiva and said,
"Shiva iski koii jaroorat " Gaumbi spoke but was cutted by shiva in mid sentence.
"Jaroorat hai aur yehi hoga Gaumbi please abb app aur sawal mat pucho" Shiva said
"Acha, tu toh so jayega Shiva par Raavi uska soch tune usse pucha ikk baar aur usne bhi teri haan main haan mila di aur maan gayi usse ikk baar baat krr le Shiva" Gaumbi said and this put Shiva in a dilemma and Gaumbi took him along with him towards their room so that Gaura and Shivi could talk on the same when they reach the door step they stopped mid way as they heard something.
"Bacha kyon krr rhe ho tum dono yeh koii jaroorat nahi hai main aur Gaumbi reh lenge" Dhara said
"Dhara dii aap aur Gaumbi na bhut selfish ho gaye ho apne bare main hi sochte ho bass mujhe pata hai aap dono reh loge aangan mein par na ab na Junior nhii rhega aur nahi uske Chaha chachi usse rehne denge, toh na app dono bhi abb apne bare mein sochna band kro aur junior ke bare mein socho" Raavi said while making dhara sit on the bed this made dhara smile.
Meanwhile shiva chest swell up in pride to see his wife like this and he gave gaumbi a assuring look and both went inside.
"Toh abb iss topic par koii baat nhii hogi sab final " Shiva said
"Ha aur mujhe shifting lunch bhi ready krna hai Shiva yeh bags le aur bahar rakh de" Raavi said
"Aree Raavi lunch main baana dungi tu tension mat le" Dhara said
"No ,naah ,bilkul nahi Dhara dii ajj se app full rest krengi maa ke orders hai aur ajj se aap ki kitchen mein entry band, Okay" Raavi says
"Par Raav...... "
"Okay... "Raavi said while glaring Dhara to which Dhara nodded childishly. This made Gaumbi and Shiva chuckle. Than Shiva and Gaumbi left before leaving Shiva took glance of Raavi and Raavi was already looking at him both smiled and went to their respective works.
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In Evening,
Raavi was alone preparing dinner and then Shiva came and admired her he wanted to thank her to support him and want to tell her about how he felt so blessed to have her so unknowingly he went near hesitantly he hugged her from behind in such a way his chest brushing with her back. Raavi breathe hitched as she knew the source of warmth.
"Thank you Raavi sab ke samne mera saath dene ke liye, Dhara bhabhi ko bhut jaroorat thi uss room ki" Shiva said
hearing this Raavi turned around still in his embrace and look at Shiva and said,
"Shiva Gaumbi aur Dhara dii kya mere kuch nahi lgte jo tu mujhe thank you bol raha hai aur maine yeh jo bhi kiya un ke liye aur hamare junior ke liye kiya hai toh mujhe koii thank you kehne kii jaroorat nhii hai "
Saying this Raavi and Shiva had an eyelock and then Shiva pinch her nose and she pouted cutely.
After having dinner everyone went to their rooms while Shivi went to their cots in angan.
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Raavi woke up early in the morning and before leaving for her daily chores she adores sleeping Shiva having a cute poute and ruffled hairs which make him irresistibly kissable and Raavi peck his both cheek one by one and then left. This was her routine from last one month.
And Shiva knowingly about her habit just chrished her soft lips on his skin.
Everything was going good as Shivi were having their nice time in their blooming love.
On one such random days Shivi were having their moment in the kitchen as shiva was hugging Raavi and next was just about kiss her when Krish came in and started his nautanki,
"Haye bhagwaan! meri ankhon ko shudhi ki jaroorat hai yeh main kya dekh rha hu" Shiva gave him a deathly glare
"Vese mujhe bhuk lagi thi par koii baat nahi main aata hoon 15 minute mein app continue kro apna" Krish said nonchantly.
"Ha jaa" Shiva said. Raavi hit his stomach by her elbow and said
"Nahi krish aaja Shiva toh bas aise hi, tu aa main khana lagati hu'
Haering this Shiva went out glaring at krish.
"Bhabhi aap na sharmate huye ek dum laal ho jate ho"
Krish giggled making Raavi blush even more. And hearing this Shiva glanced Raavi and move out smiling like a maniac on his way he was passing out of Devta's room and heard Rishita talking on phone
"Arree kirti main free hu tu tension mat ke Raavi hai na woh kaam krr legi main milungi tujhe office ke baad. Vese bhi maine tujhe bataya tha na ki mera devarani vese bhi ajj kal sara kaam krr hi leti hai mujhe toh baas office ka kam krna hota hai. Maine tujhe bataya tha na mere devar Shiva ke bare mein aree yaar wahi jo naukaron wale kaam krta hai uss ne toh apni biwi ko bhi vesa hi bana diya dono sara din naukron jaise kaam krte rehte hain i mean vo shiva toh apni biwi ko ikk kamre ka sukh bhi nhii de paya i mean yarr koii bhi ladki itna toh deserve krti hi hai na "
Shiva could hear no more and went out in anger to store. Whole day went and he was just thinking of Rishita's words which ignite his anger but more than anger there was sorrow that he cannot keep her wife as a queen which she deserved to be but he was just lost as he cared about her bhaiya bhabhi moreit made him even more guilty. That day he reached home late.
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Everyone has already retired to their rooms but Raavi was waiting for him to return. As she geard comotion from door she hurriedly rushed to open the door to welcome Shiva with her toothy smile. She opened the door and smiled usually Shiva first gave ger a loving look but than his mind struck on the venom spoke by rishita and his smile vanish and he looked down. Raavi first got cinfused and than thought he must be tired so.
"Acha tu aaja muh hath dho le main khana lga dete hu tere liye "
Shiva just nodded.
Raavi set his plate and was waiting for him to come. He came and sat on hus chair while Raavi stood behind his chair and started curcling her fingers on his head to soothe him. Shiva can't hold more and just turned around and hugged Raavi in such a way his head was resting on her belly (as Raavi was siting and he was seated on the chair) Raavi felt tears streaming down his cheek. She immediately cupped his face and made him look to her into her eyes.
"Kya hua shiva koii baat hain kyaa" She asked with concern and worry
"I am sorry Raavi main tere liye kuch bhi nahi krr pata tu gaumbi aur bahbhi ke liye kitna kuch krti hai aur main toh tujhe ikk kamra bhi nhii de paya sab log yehi kehte hain kii maine tujhe apne tarah bana liya hai i am sorry tu jo kuch bhi deserve krti hai main vo kuch bhi nahi de paaya tujhe. Main teri khawahishe toh kya teri jaroortein bhi puri nhii krr paya " He said sniffling and burying his face in to her belly and holding her tightly.
"Shiva kisi ne kuch kaha hai kya tujhse"
Raavi asked as she knew something major had took place ir else Shiva won't be this vulnerable. Shiva told her each and every word which Rishita spoke this made Raavi furious but than she looked at shiva who just like a little kid sobbing and spologizing about a mistake which he had not commited. Than she calmed shiva down by patting his back and as sound of sniffle became inaudible.
"Shiva log jo bhi kahe kuch bhi kare mujhe farak nahi padta main janti hoon ki mera shiva mere liye kitna kuch krta hain. Aur main yeh sab kaam na Dhara dii ke liye krti hoon aur mujhe koii bhi dukh ya gham nhii hai iss sab ka aur rahi baat ki tune mujhe apne jaisa bana liya hai toh main iss baat par bhut proud hoon kio kii Shiva kii Gauri ikk dum uske jaise honi chahiye, tu toh vo heera hain Shiva jo kii apne se pehle apne parivaar ka sochta hain main bhi vese hi banna chahti hoon aur dekh mujhe mera pehla compliment mil bhi gaya"
Hearing this Shiva chuckled and Raavi finally got relief and added further,
"Vese mujhe nahi pata tha ki mera Chattan pandya itna masoom hain ikk dum bacho ki tarah"
With this she pecked his nose tip and a small smile crept on his lips by this she made him ate his food Shiva sounded better now. After having food he went to his cot to sleep Raavi came out of kitchen after winding up everything. She wanted to tell Shiva that her khawahishe and jaroortein is not materialistic its him who she desire and wanted. So she made her way to him and slept on him on his cot by curling her arms around Shiva's waist and kept ger head near his chest where his heart is beating.
"Raavi.... Tu... Tu... Kya.. "
"Chup tune hi kaha tha na ki tu meri khwahishen aur jaroortein puri nahi krr pata tu theek hi keh rha tha"
she said gearing this Shiva felt bad but she continued
"Kio agar tujhe yeh pura krna hi jota na toh tu pehle hi mujhe aise hug krke sota na ki abhi ki tarah mujhe ache se hug bhi nhii krr rha"
Shiva hugs her tightly
"Pata hai Shiva meri khawahishe meri jaroortein sab tu hai ajj ke baad kabhi mat sochna ki tu mujhe vo nahi de pata Jo main deserve krti hoon kio kii main tujhe deserve krti hoon aur tere saath ko deserve krti hoon samjh mein aaya"
With her last words Shiva left Contentment and relieved and hugged her more tightly as she snuggled into his chest more.
- THE END
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