FF - Forget Me Not|Part 15 updated on page 42 - Page 26

Originally posted by: gori4

Thanks for the sequel.❤️ I read it with great pleasure.🥰 I liked everything. You write superbly. The last part is so hot and romantic.🔥🔥🔥 I love such scenes. In the next part, I both want and do not want the kiss to end😃

On the one hand, I think it's early. Let the desire for Vir be even stronger. On the other hand, I want to move on to the next stage, where she is completely confused about how she can want Vir so much that she longs for such closeness to him. I will be happy to read what you write.

Don't pay much attention to my fantasies. I apologize for the long post.🤗

Thank you for liking and commenting.🤗

I knew everyone would enjoy the last scene.😂 I've been building up to get to that scene for a while. You'll have to wait to see or read what happens.

Don't worry about the long post. I love long reviews.

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Thank you for liking and commenting.🤗

I knew everyone would enjoy the last scene.😂 I've been building up to get to that scene for a while. You'll have to wait to see or read what happens.

Don't worry about the long post. I love long reviews.

Yes, we love such scenes😂😂😂 But not just them, of course🤗 It's just that everyone before me has described absolutely everything we like. And so as not to repeat myself, I limit myself to hot scenes.behold, I have found an excuse😉😂😂😂

Of course i will wait.You made my weekend👌

Originally posted by: Zunari

Yaaayyy you got 5 more chapters planned 😃💃 can’t wait for those! And I’m telling you, you do this wayyyy better than those who are doing the scripts for a living 😁

Keep rocking Fazzzz ❤️

Originally posted by: Zunari

Yaaayyy you got 5 more chapters planned 😃💃 can’t wait for those! And I’m telling you, you do this wayyyy better than those who are doing the scripts for a living 😁

Keep rocking Fazzzz ❤️

I've got the outlines planned for the next five chapters yes. It may become more or less when I start typing up on those ideas.

Thanks Zunari! 🤗

What the F Fazzzz another cliffhanger 😡 tell me they kissed TELL ME 😆🤣

I really liked this chapter and not just because of the PurVir moment

Everyone behave’s like normal people with rational thoughts.

I’m loving your storytelling for Veer and Sudha. I like that it’s not love yet it’s just comfort in each other. Veer is clearly jealous but I like the slow build up to love. It reminds me of the serial Kasamh Se.

The children seeing Haathi I guess there’s no other reaction from the kids that’s exactly how they would react seeing her.
Now the end PurVir moment 😳our Sherni was back. I really like that you had them connect on a friendship level and emotional level. The natural progress would be to be attracted on a physical level which we see happening now and she literally was questioning her attraction to Daksh earlier. Her dreaming about him adds to her attraction so like I said I really like how you tell your story👍🏼🤗 Vir was obviously just enjoying the attention 😆

Waiting for the next chapter

When I read Vir wanted a hug me

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

What the F Fazzzz another cliffhanger tell me they kissed TELL ME

Nope! 🤐😂

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

I really liked this chapter and not just because of the PurVir moment

Everyone behave’s like normal people with rational thoughts.

I’m loving your storytelling for Veer and Sudha. I like that it’s not love yet it’s just comfort in each other. Veer is clearly jealous but I like the slow build up to love. It reminds me of the serial Kasamh Se.

The children seeing Haathi I guess there’s no other reaction from the kids that’s exactly how they would react seeing her.
Now the end PurVir moment 😳our Sherni was back. I really like that you had them connect on a friendship level and emotional level. The natural progress would be to be attracted on a physical level which we see happening now and she literally was questioning her attraction to Daksh earlier. Her dreaming about him adds to her attraction so like I said I really like how you tell your story👍🏼🤗 Vir was obviously just enjoying the attention 😆

Waiting for the next chapter

Thank you for liking and commenting.🤗

Love the reviews. They really boost my confidence. If only they managed to boost it enough to type quickly.😂 I'm joking. I'll start typing up the next chapter this coming week unless I really enjoy the episodes, which I doubt.

With regards to Veer. I expect him to have forgiven Sudha but the betrayal will be in the back of his mind.

The PurVir scene is the shirtless one I told you about ages ago. I guess the wait was worth it.😂

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Nope! 🤐😂

Thank you for liking and commenting.🤗

Love the reviews. They really boost my confidence. If only they managed to boost it enough to type quickly.😂 I'm joking. I'll start typing up the next chapter this coming week unless I really enjoy the episodes, which I doubt.

With regards to Veer. I expect him to have forgiven Sudha but the betrayal will be in the back of his mind.

The PurVir scene is the shirtless one I told you about ages ago. I guess the wait was worth it.😂

Yes the wait was worth it shirtless WET Vir 😳

I can imagine it with his smug smile 😊

This chapter fazzzz👏👍🏼

Sorry I'm a little late to the party but maine ye chapter 2 baar padha yrr.. specially the last part😳

Yrr ye aapki story mai Sudha kitni achi h yrr👏mtlb bechari sabka dhyan rakh rahi h be it Viru, kids, Purvi or Veer.. everyone👍🏼

Kids calling her haathi & she not recognising them🥺

Sudha & purvi's coffee date😊 best friend vibesss😉

Viru & kids scene was soo well written yrr..such a nice conversation between the kids & their baba.

Veer aur Sudha track ko jitna aap explore kar rahe ho naa utna show mai naa kabhi hua h aur naa kabhi hoga I guess.. maybe that's why I'm liking it soo much👍🏼

Mere PurVir ka scenebabies☺️ fazzzz please let them kiss yrr😭 like seriously yrr.. Viru needs it yrr he's been soo much already yrr🤧

Baaki PurVir scene bhot pyaara likha h yrr but suspense bana diya aapne😂 now very excited for the next part.