The "Storyline" That's Needs To Work Upon : ZDMN - Page 2

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

This reply has my heart 💖

I don't have any problem with Sid kand & Monami's actions.... Obviously they were wrong but that's the story is all about... A journey from wrong to right, a struggle from disappointments to destination.

Monami has guts but she lacks confidence on right time that's how Monami is... She is flawed so is Karan.

I have issues with only those things which I pointed out in main post Baki everything is fine. The baby misunderstanding was cliche but Monami-Karan having differences over Sid issue is absolutely normal. May be not you but I am in minority as I am loving SidSa story 😆 People here are more into MoRan and that's absolutely ok even I love them but with SidSa I am very much interested 😆

I like SidSa but MoRan thoda zyaada.

Sid has a loooooong way to go. His journey will be interesting to watch. Kunal is phenomenal.

I like watching their scenes but loop mode main MoRan hi rehte hai.

Koel-Faizi toh are going nowhere. Bechari abhi bhi room nahi le paayi hai.😁

Irony would be that she will get a separate room and then end up getting paired with Suman as a partner if Karan decides to follow Baby's advice.😁

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

True that. 👍🏼

I think Sid will clear Karan's name thus Karan gonna rejoin & as per Baby's words Karan will make Sid a part of his team leading to the actual beginning of training 😳

I was not liking things a bit since Sid k jhoot were exposed and this use bhookha pyasa jail mein daal dena track is going on...its dragging and it makes me want to skip scenes which one cant do if watching fresh telecast...they should have cut short the Sid ko leke bawal track and made his entry as a trainee a bit quick and then continue with what ever the story is supposed to be as per the promos they showed...

this last week one male lead was starving, one was making him starve, another didnt even have much screen space..two female leads were complaining and troubled on their troubles and another again didnt have much to do except jhagra with someone in some random scenes....and the other namune and their repetitive jhagde have been quite annoying...

This show has the ingredients of becoming an awesome one...promos promised so too...CVs need to look into what they are showing and start working hard...

Hopefully things will move forward now and I believe once karan and Sid both are permanently there to stay in academy, story will get on track...

Originally posted by: lovereading14

I AGREE!

And I don't come to this forum a lot because I am in the minority on this... and no hate but I do not see any chemistry between Monami and Karan. I don't know what it is, but the pair doesn't work for me onscreen. I love shaleen (talented actor). Haven't seen Kaveri before in a show (but her acting seems okay). It is the spark between the couple that I am missing.

It is a personal opinion... maybe a bias but it is becoming hard to keep seeing the show because of

a. the storyline

b. the lack of chemistry

Ayyo 😲 Ok I respect your opinion... Not liking a particular pair is absolutely normal. No issues... Kaveri was there on YRHPK 😳

I personally believe chemistry is there between ALL 3 Couples ❤️ They needs to give certain scenes to couples. Like SidSa jail conversation was awesome. I loved that 👏 MoRan conversation in her room after SidSa date was beautiful ❤️ Those type conversations they should insert more along with training scenes.

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

This reply has my heart 💖

I don't have any problem with Sid kand & Monami's actions.... Obviously they were wrong but that's the story is all about... A journey from wrong to right, a struggle from disappointments to destination.

Monami has guts but she lacks confidence on right time that's how Monami is... She is flawed so is Karan.

I have issues with only those things which I pointed out in main post Baki everything is fine. The baby misunderstanding was cliche but Monami-Karan having differences over Sid issue is absolutely normal. May be not you but I am in minority as I am loving SidSa story 😆 People here are more into MoRan and that's absolutely ok even I love them but with SidSa I am very much interested 😆

Originally posted by: mineforever

I like SidSa but MoRan thoda zyaada.

Sid has a loooooong way to go. His journey will be interesting to watch. Kunal is phenomenal.

I like watching their scenes but loop mode main MoRan hi rehte hai.

Koel-Faizi toh are going nowhere. Bechari abhi bhi room nahi le paayi hai.😁

Irony would be that she will get a separate room and then end up getting paired with Suman as a partner if Karan decides to follow Baby's advice.😁

Mere loop mode mein SidSa 🙈 😆 So I can relate to your thoda zyaada feeling 😆 🤗 I don't think she will get seperate room 🤣 Waise Faizi was missing kuch jaida hi past week, Koel was still there 🤔 Kunal is my favourite since NBT days n Waise tho even Shaleen n Kaveri are also favourite since Arjun & YRHPK days 😆 but I guess it's due to the uniqueness of Sid-Sanjana that attracts me more towards SidSa.

Originally posted by: urmita

Same here...MoRan is good , but unlike most I like SidSa better...they are more interesting to me...😆

OMG let me give you a tight virtual jhappi 🤗

Originally posted by: urmita

Hopefully👍🏼..they need to do this right away...

I was not liking things a bit since Sid k jhoot were exposed and this use bhookha pyasa jail mein daal dena track is going on...its dragging and it makes me want to skip scenes which one cant do if watching fresh telecast...they should have cut short the Sid ko leke bawal track and made his entry as a trainee a bit quick and then continue with what ever the story is supposed to be as per the promos they showed...

this last week one male lead was starving, one was making him starve, another didnt even have much screen space..two female leads were complaining and troubled on their troubles and another again didnt have much to do except jhagra with someone in some random scenes....and the other namune and their repetitive jhagde have been quite annoying...

This show has the ingredients of becoming an awesome one...promos promised so too...CVs need to look into what they are showing and start working hard...

Hopefully things will move forward now and I believe once karan and Sid both are permanently there to stay in academy, story will get on track...

one male lead was starving, one was making him starve, another didnt even have much screen space..two female leads were complaining and troubled on their troubles

Ok but THIS is hilarious 🤣

Yup I wasn't expecting Sid to propose n land in hospital 🤔 But due to this I got such a beautiful jail convo between SidSa so thik hai 😆 Yup it's high time make him a cadet n move on 😊

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Mere loop mode mein SidSa 🙈 😆 So I can relate to your thoda zyaada feeling 😆 🤗 I don't think she will get seperate room 🤣 Waise Faizi was missing kuch jaida hi past week, Koel was still there 🤔 Kunal is my favourite since NBT days n Waise tho even Shaleen n Kaveri are also favourite since Arjun & YRHPK days 😆 but I guess it's due to the uniqueness of Sid-Sanjana that attracts me more towards SidSa.

Meri problem hi hai that I always go for specific type trope..😁

Out of all the characters I have only watched Shaleen's Arjun (regularly) and few episodes of Shararat which had Simple.

Funny thing is that when character promos had released I liked SidSa's promo the best and MoRan ka okayish laga tha but now the scales have tipped towards MoRan.

Mujhe toh lagta hai Koel Suman ke saath hi rahe jayegi and Faizi will be busy playing matchmaker to other two couples at this rate😁

Not sure why I keep coming back to crib 😂😂

Online people wanted left right left (mostly). We are getting modern day romance which start with two opp people, faltoo ka mu and twisted sense of abuse/empowerment. None wants that nahi to so called saas bahu show na dekhte. They are not using the army backdrop bas naam k waste rkha hai like ghum has kept ips male and made a mockery out of it. These characters need to focus on themselves and tone down. Sumanji ka ott isn't cute anymore when she's shaming someone for EMA, similarly karan needs to stfu and focus his work as a mentor (this I have been saying from week 1 and now he has tons of support from fans).

Unpopular opinion but numbers are suffering because focus is on one character. In 4/5 weeks we get Karan k bhabhi niece (who btw what purpose will serve apart from showing haw he has a heart. Unnecessary characters) , he is also involved in sid sanju part, he has conflict with monu cause she's rich, he's issue with batra and don't like mrs Batra/sid too. He also have connections to those army subordinate dudes. Story is revolving around him only. Meanwhile what other characters are getting? What do we know about sid and his mom? Monu and her training? Where is suman ji k husband btw and how's he ok with her being here? Why Faizi is now a clown? They need to realise when you hire 6 people split ss between them. Lrl had so many bonds like huda naina, naina had her own issues (which is like monu here) , Rajiv k issues, there was KKK character and puja. They focused on their own characters and training no time for commenting on others. Just copy paste lrl if they can't write it will be a thousand times better show.

Last thing- hiring a great actor like Kunal and just wasting him. It's criminal. Dude didn't work years just to get slaps in a sab tv show.

Originally posted by: mineforever

Meri problem hi hai that I always go for specific type trope..😁

Out of all the characters I have only watched Shaleen's Arjun (regularly) and few episodes of Shararat which had Simple.

Funny thing is that when character promos had released I liked SidSa's promo the best and MoRan ka okayish laga tha but now the scales have tipped towards MoRan.

Mujhe toh lagta hai Koel Suman ke saath hi rahe jayegi and Faizi will be busy playing matchmaker to other two couples at this rate😁

OMG promo mein I liked MoRan more 🤣 But ask Neha she knows how I am destined to fall for the second lead in every damn multi couple shows 🤔 Jhand Hai Meri Life 😭

Sharrarat I used to watch too 😳 I signed up this show mainly because ALL leads except Faizi were familiar and favourites 😆 KoeZi gonna be doomed I can very well see that 😳 Let's see if they can balance out between MoRan & SidSa 🤔 I badly hope they do. 🤞