The "Storyline" That's Needs To Work Upon : ZDMN

Seems like IPL is affecting SAB a little extra, TMKOC TRP is the basic proof of that and considering the drop of TMKOC I think ZDMN is still doing better BUT

Sunshine needs to work on the STORYLINE. Honestly they needs to work on developing bond between the couples now because

• To be honest the typical misunderstanding about girlfriend (Read Baby) between MoRan (KarMi) is very cliche. They needs to build up the understanding between Karan-Monami, they needs to show MoRan sometimes agreeing to disagree & sometimes understanding each other.
• The cat fight between Koel-Suman Ji is getting repetitive, yup they aren't very fond of each other we got that now move on. 😵
• SidSa has a lot of potential, Sid needs to know about Kundan Ji asap, Sid needs outdoor training where he can witness the "Village life" Sanju talks about.
• KoeZi needs to get over the bhoot bulshitt asap. Wait, they needs screen space too. 🤔

Most importantly, Dilbag Ji should try something else other than Biryani... Itni Biryani khilayenge tho pet kharab ho jayega sabka 😳

Thanks for reading 😳

Namaste,

Right on point.

The story was much awaited and keenly followed. It has the makings of a chartbuster just that somewhere (rather soon) they have lost track.

If the CVs are reading, the forum has some interesting views that they could pick off.

IPL is a reason, of course but the makers aren't helping either.

It is ok to walk the perilous path. To show what should happen even if it is against popular view.

You never know, that may lead to a pleasantly surprising destination or charter a new way for others to follow.

Basically show us what you showed in the promo stick to that characterization, don't butcher/ dumb them down.

There's soo much potential, just do it!!

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Namaste,

Right on point.

The story was much awaited and keenly followed. It has the makings of a chartbuster just that somewhere (rather soon) they have lost track.

If the CVs are reading, the forum has some interesting views that they could pick off.

IPL is a reason, of course but the makers aren't helping either.

It is ok to walk the perilous path. To show what should happen even if it is against popular view.

You never know, that may lead to a pleasantly surprising destination or charter a new way for others to follow.

Well said 👏 Yup as a viewer I would love to get a surprise if they actually have something entirely else in their mind and building that up. Plus this channel is about light hearted shows too much drama wouldn't work here, there needs to be a balance. Training should get utmost importance & understanding/bond between couples much needed.

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Basically show us what you showed in the promo stick to that characterization, don't butcher/ dumb them down.

There's soo much potential, just do it!!

Hey Neha, I personally don't think they have "Butchered" any character as of now.... But yes the way it's going, butchering isn't far away 🤔

I mostly agree with you.

I think its just been about 25 episodes(by this week) and we need to give them a chance to unfold the story. They are setting up characters right now.

I know they could have cut short Sid fiasco but atleast now Sid has realised the ramifications of his action. It wont be easy for him.

For Karan-Monami,I feel this current track will get them to a basic understanding. Her misconception regarding Karan's cheater tag needs to be corrected and she also needs to realise she was wrong.

Monami tries but she is not able to express her points clearly,like she blamed Karan that it was all his fault but I am sure she will work on her weak areas and come out as stronger.

Karan might see her making efforts to clear his name(maybe..?) and change his perception a little. Also,Sid might help clear his name and gain entry to the academy.

Sid-Monami have a long journey ahead because both have been part of a different world altogether and they need to adapt to this army life. As Karan once told Monami,being ziddi will only benefit when you channelize it in right direction,this is their end point(Talking about their rich background when almost all other cadets seem to be from middle class or below).

I feel in this track it might be also revealed that Karan never destroyed the cadet's things.Karan is a man of few words but his intentions are mostly right and the cadets will definitely realise that and come together to save him.

This track might be a game changer in lot of relationships.

Side note-

Yes,Koel- Suman's fights are boring. Koel doesnt seem to have anything to do except fight with her. Chances are that she has filed complaint against Karan(assuming as per her dialogue in show) ,maybe this will give us Koezi scenes.

I might be in minority,but I am liking the flawed characters.(Mostly seen people here cribbing about Monu's character. If she is shown as perfect already then there is no point in showing her journey)

They need to stop going so slow..solve this current bawal..make Sid a trainee and get karan back and start with what they promised in the promo already...

Originally posted by: mineforever

I mostly agree with you.

I think its just been about 25 episodes(by this week) and we need to give them a chance to unfold the story. They are setting up characters right now.

I know they could have cut shot Sid fiasco but atleast now Sid has realised the ramifications of his action. It wont be easy for him.

For Karan-Monami,I feel this current track will get them to a basic understanding. Her misconception regarding Karan's cheater tag needs to be corrected and she also needs to realise she was wrong.

Monami tries but she is not able to express her points clearly,like she blamed Karan that it was all his fault but I am sure she will work on her weak areas and come out as stronger.

Karan might see her making efforts to clear his name(maybe..?) and change his perception a little. Also,Sid might help clear his name and gain entry to the academy.

Sid-Monami have a long journey ahead because both have been part of a different world altogether and they need to adapt to this army life. As Karan once told Monami,being ziddi will only benefit when you channelize it in right direction,this is their end point(Talking about their rich background when almost all other cadets seem to be from middle class or below).

I feel in this track it might be also revealed that Karan never destroyed the cadet's things.Karan is a man of few words but his intentions are mostly right and the cadets will definitely realise that and come together to save him.

This track might be a game changer in lot of relationships.

Side note-

Yes,Koel- Suman's fights are boring. Koel doesnt seem to have anything to do except fight with her. Chances are that she has filed complaint against Karan(assuming as per her dialogue in show) ,maybe this will give us Koezi scenes.

I might be in minority,but I am liking the flawed characters.(Mostly seen people here cribbing about Monu's character. If she is shown as perfect already then there is no point in showing her journey)

This reply has my heart 💖

I don't have any problem with Sid kand & Monami's actions.... Obviously they were wrong but that's the story is all about... A journey from wrong to right, a struggle from disappointments to destination.

Monami has guts but she lacks confidence on right time that's how Monami is... She is flawed so is Karan.

I have issues with only those things which I pointed out in main post Baki everything is fine. The baby misunderstanding was cliche but Monami-Karan having differences over Sid issue is absolutely normal. May be not you but I am in minority as I am loving SidSa story 😆 People here are more into MoRan and that's absolutely ok even I love them but with SidSa I am very much interested 😆

Originally posted by: urmita

They need to stop going so slow..solve this current bawal..make Sid a trainee and get karan back and start with what they promised in the promo already...

True that. 👍🏼

I think Sid will clear Karan's name thus Karan gonna rejoin & as per Baby's words Karan will make Sid a part of his team leading to the actual beginning of training 😳

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Seems like IPL is affecting SAB a little extra, TMKOC TRP is the basic proof of that and considering the drop of TMKOC I think ZDMN is still doing better BUT

Sunshine needs to work on the STORYLINE. Honestly they needs to work on developing bond between the couples now because

• To be honest the typical misunderstanding about girlfriend (Read Baby) between MoRan (KarMi) is very cliche. They needs to build up the understanding between Karan-Monami, they needs to show MoRan sometimes agreeing to disagree & sometimes understanding each other.
• The cat fight between Koel-Suman Ji is getting repetitive, yup they aren't very fond of each other we got that now move on. 😵
• SidSa has a lot of potential, Sid needs to know about Kundan Ji asap, Sid needs outdoor training where he can witness the "Village life" Sanju talks about.
• KoeZi needs to get over the bhoot bulshitt asap. Wait, they needs screen space too. 🤔

Most importantly, Dilbag Ji should try something else other than Biryani... Itni Biryani khilayenge tho pet kharab ho jayega sabka 😳

Thanks for reading 😳

I AGREE!

And I don't come to this forum a lot because I am in the minority on this... and no hate but I do not see any chemistry between Monami and Karan. I don't know what it is, but the pair doesn't work for me onscreen. I love shaleen (talented actor). Haven't seen Kaveri before in a show (but her acting seems okay). It is the spark between the couple that I am missing.

It is a personal opinion... maybe a bias but it is becoming hard to keep seeing the show because of

a. the storyline

b. the lack of chemistry