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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita


one male lead was starving, one was making him starve, another didnt even have much screen space..two female leads were complaining and troubled on their troubles


Ok but THIS is hilarious 🤣


Yup I wasn't expecting Sid to propose n land in hospital 🤔 But due to this I got such a beautiful jail convo between SidSa so thik hai 😆 Yup it's high time make him a cadet n move on 😊

Yes the SidSa jail convo was beautiful...it was one of the few good scenes of this track...😊

make him a cadet and if batra is giving karan a second chance, mummyji should give Sid a second chance too...I love that bond as well...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Not sure why I keep coming back to crib 😂😂


Online people wanted left right left (mostly). We are getting modern day romance which start with two opp people, faltoo ka mu and twisted sense of abuse/empowerment. None wants that nahi to so called saas bahu show na dekhte. They are not using the army backdrop bas naam k waste rkha hai like ghum has kept ips male and made a mockery out of it. These characters need to focus on themselves and tone down. Sumanji ka ott isn't cute anymore when she's shaming someone for EMA, similarly karan needs to stfu and focus his work as a mentor (this I have been saying from week 1 and now he has tons of support from fans).



Unpopular opinion but numbers are suffering because focus is on one character. In 4/5 weeks we get Karan k bhabhi niece (who btw what purpose will serve apart from showing haw he has a heart. Unnecessary characters) , he is also involved in sid sanju part, he has conflict with monu cause she's rich, he's issue with batra and don't like mrs Batra/sid too. He also have connections to those army subordinate dudes. Story is revolving around him only. Meanwhile what other characters are getting? What do we know about sid and his mom? Monu and her training? Where is suman ji k husband btw and how's he ok with her being here? Why Faizi is now a clown? They need to realise when you hire 6 people split ss between them. Lrl had so many bonds like huda naina, naina had her own issues (which is like monu here) , Rajiv k issues, there was KKK character and puja. They focused on their own characters and training no time for commenting on others. Just copy paste lrl if they can't write it will be a thousand times better show.




Last thing- hiring a great actor like Kunal and just wasting him. It's criminal. Dude didn't work years just to get slaps in a sab tv show.

Your lines 😆 Sanju should keep her hands away from Sid, Karan shouldn't taunt Monu in every sentence. 🤔 SiMi needs reality check.

Edited by A_for_Arpita - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: urmita

Yes the SidSa jail convo was beautiful...it was one of the few good scenes of this track...😊

make him a cadet and if batra is giving karan a second chance, mummyji should give Sid a second chance too...I love that bond as well...

Mummy Ji is hurt so it's ok if she takes time to forgive Sid. I feel Karan will take Sid in his team let's see.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

OMG promo mein I liked MoRan more 🤣 But ask Neha she knows how I am destined to fall for the second lead in every damn multi couple shows 🤔 Jhand Hai Meri Life 😭

Sharrarat I used to watch too 😳 I signed up this show mainly because ALL leads except Faizi were familiar and favourites 😆 KoeZi gonna be doomed I can very well see that 😳 Let's see if they can balance out between MoRan & SidSa 🤔 I badly hope they do. 🤞

JuJu and KoZi are our only hope . 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

JuJu and KoZi are our only hope . 😆

Mere babies ko JuJu nehi bolne kaaaa 😭 😆 Chal jhooti you have high hopes on MoRan too 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Not sure why I keep coming back to crib 😂😂


Online people wanted left right left (mostly). We are getting modern day romance which start with two opp people, faltoo ka mu and twisted sense of abuse/empowerment. None wants that nahi to so called saas bahu show na dekhte. They are not using the army backdrop bas naam k waste rkha hai like ghum has kept ips male and made a mockery out of it. These characters need to focus on themselves and tone down. Sumanji ka ott isn't cute anymore when she's shaming someone for EMA, similarly karan needs to stfu and focus his work as a mentor (this I have been saying from week 1 and now he has tons of support from fans).



Unpopular opinion but numbers are suffering because focus is on one character. In 4/5 weeks we get Karan k bhabhi niece (who btw what purpose will serve apart from showing haw he has a heart. Unnecessary characters) , he is also involved in sid sanju part, he has conflict with monu cause she's rich, he's issue with batra and don't like mrs Batra/sid too. He also have connections to those army subordinate dudes. Story is revolving around him only. Meanwhile what other characters are getting? What do we know about sid and his mom? Monu and her training? Where is suman ji k husband btw and how's he ok with her being here? Why Faizi is now a clown? They need to realise when you hire 6 people split ss between them. Lrl had so many bonds like huda naina, naina had her own issues (which is like monu here) , Rajiv k issues, there was KKK character and puja. They focused on their own characters and training no time for commenting on others. Just copy paste lrl if they can't write it will be a thousand times better show.




Last thing- hiring a great actor like Kunal and just wasting him. It's criminal. Dude didn't work years just to get slaps in a sab tv show.

Well yours may not be such an unpopular opinion...I think pretty much everyone was expecting a star one shows category ka show...something like left right left...proper use of the army backdrop...and they have just started so they can still work on their story and make things better....

Romance and mus are cool...but yes I agree story is going like Karan is the only hero, the center of universe...all the questions u just raised are valid ones...they should atleast remember they have 3 pairs of leads, not one..and give the 3 equal importance instead of just revolving around Karan...

And writers need to stop making karan or sanju taunt monu whenever they can already...monu doesnt deserve it, she has proved that since long and every time karan makes a rich girl comment at monami it makes him the bad one, not her...this army hone ka ghamand thing they are showing with karan they need to tone down...


Last thing- hiring a great actor like Kunal and just wasting him. It's criminal. Dude didn't work years just to get slaps in a sab tv show.

His is the most interesting character here...They should give Sid equal importance as Karan if not more...

Edited by urmita - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Mummy Ji is hurt so it's ok if she takes time to forgive Sid. I feel Karan will take Sid in his team let's see.

Yes hope aisa hi ho...ye bawal itna lamba khicha hi to atleast it should be a reality chk to karan and he should rectify himself...I mean even the ittu si bacchi his niece is more mature than him...

They should be like u wanna win Sanju? fine finish this training and prove ur worth and take Sid in team and move on already like they should have done originally instead of starving him...jail mein daalne tak thik tha but starving thing was not cool at all...psycho killers ko bhi jail mein dal roti and pani mil jati hai...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

OMG promo mein I liked MoRan more 🤣 But ask Neha she knows how I am destined to fall for the second lead in every damn multi couple shows 🤔 Jhand Hai Meri Life 😭

Sharrarat I used to watch too 😳 I signed up this show mainly because ALL leads except Faizi were familiar and favourites 😆 KoeZi gonna be doomed I can very well see that 😳 Let's see if they can balance out between MoRan & SidSa 🤔 I badly hope they do. 🤞

SidSa & MoRan are interconnected with each other and I am sure in future they might even have fights because of each other .(abhi bhi lad hi rahe hai waise toh)Sanju kuch bolegi about Sid and Karan might take her side and phir MoRan will fight and same can happen to SidSa too.

KoeZi seem to be disconnected. It looks like writer doesnt know how to show their story.

Lol..side couple toh nahi honge yaha hopefully SidSa..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: urmita

Yes hope aisa hi ho...ye bawal itna lamba khicha hi to atleast it should be a reality chk to karan and he should rectify himself...I mean even the ittu si bacchi his niece is more mature than him...

They should be like u wanna win Sanju? fine finish this training and prove ur worth and take Sid in team and move on already like they should have done originally instead of starving him...jail mein daalne tak thik tha but starving thing was not cool at all...psycho killers ko bhi jail mein dal roti and pani mil jati hai...

Bechare ko koi pehle Kundan Ji K baremein bolo 😭 Sid-Mona had the sense to speak the truth n reveal about their engagement drama. Sanjana & Karan shouldn't hide about Kundan Ji from Sid n Mona.... Specifically Sid.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mineforever

SidSa & MoRan are interconnected with each other and I am sure in future they might even have fights because of each other .(abhi bhi lad hi rahe hai waise toh)Sanju kuch bolegi about Sid and Karan might take her side and phir MoRan will fight and same can happen to SidSa too.

KoeZi seem to be disconnected. It looks like writer doesnt know how to show their story.

Lol..side couple toh nahi honge yaha hopefully SidSa..

True that they are interconnected. MoRan fighting regarding SidSa is the most obvious thing on this earth. I think SidSa going to be very happy knowing MoRan connection. They wouldn't really fight because Karan is not very fond of Sid that's why he disagrees with Mona where Sanjana likes both Karan-Mona & Sid ko koi personal problem nehi Hai with Karan so may be SidSa both together will only encourage MoRan ship 😆

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