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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mast update thi pragyu 😘😘😘 mazza aagaya padhkein so kalyani nein ismein bhi apna mazzak dhoondh hi liya sahi hai ..acha laga dekhkein😆😆aur nishigandha nahi sudharegi chocolate pakado aur aglein din phir kalyani ki language main break dance karwayoo...🤣🤣but I like that kalyani who really sad on her face that she doesn't want anything now...not now 👍🏼

Ohho to kalyani ko Atharva bhi dikh hi gaya bandein ne ceo ko impress karna chaha par end being the biggest joke there 🤣🤣..sahi hai kalyani ko abb ismein bhi sharam aanein wali hai kiss jo karkein baithi hai madam ussein don't know why she find so good to kiss him in front of whole bus when she clearly know what he did to poor Malhar ..I really feel bad for him by seeing how much pain they caused to him in that age ..and he is still suffering from their burns poor malhar ...

Vahan Malhar ne acha mazza liya Atharva ka abb aayega mazza when he will kick them out from that project...meri ek request diya ko bula kalyani ko jealous dekhana hai aur rahi baat kalyani kein liye to ek sahi sa employee dekhana wahann jo ussein shuru sein adore karta hoo aur itne Malhar sab realise karein somebody is there for that poor girl also aur Malhar bhi jealous. Mujhein dono ki jealousy dekhni hai kitne din ho gayien aisa kuch nahi mil raha .. 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Mast update thi pragyu 😘😘😘 mazza aagaya padhkein so kalyani nein ismein bhi apna mazzak dhoondh hi liya sahi hai ..acha laga dekhkein😆😆aur nishigandha nahi sudharegi chocolate pakado aur aglein din phir kalyani ki language main break dance karwayoo...🤣🤣but I like that kalyani who really sad on her face that she doesn't want anything now...not now 👍🏼

Ohho to kalyani ko Atharva bhi dikh hi gaya bandein ne ceo ko impress karna chaha par end being the biggest joke there 🤣🤣..sahi hai kalyani ko abb ismein bhi sharam aanein wali hai kiss jo karkein baithi hai madam ussein don't know why she find so good to kiss him in front of whole bus when she clearly know what he did to poor Malhar ..I really feel bad for him by seeing how much pain they caused to him in that age ..and he is still suffering from their burns poor malhar ...

Vahan Malhar ne acha mazza liya Atharva ka abb aayega mazza when he will kick them out from that project...meri ek request diya ko bula kalyani ko jealous dekhana hai aur rahi baat kalyani kein liye to ek sahi sa employee dekhana wahann jo ussein shuru sein adore karta hoo aur itne Malhar sab realise karein somebody is there for that poor girl also aur Malhar bhi jealous. Mujhein dono ki jealousy dekhni hai kitne din ho gayien aisa kuch nahi mil raha .. 🤣


Thank you Vanshu 💕💕💕💕Next chapters me Kalyani Diya ki band bajane wali hai, vo baat alag hai us drame me madam bhi apne bune jaal me khud fans jayengi. Magar Malhar ko kisi aur ke saath dekhe...itni seedhi nahi hai hamari Kalyani. Aur Kalyani fir Atharv ke saath Mallu ko jalaane wali hai magar is baar paasa ulta parne wala hai. Aage ke chapters me unka jalna hi highlight hai.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you Vanshu 💕💕💕💕Next chapters me Kalyani Diya ki band bajane wali hai, vo baat alag hai us drame me madam bhi apne bune jaal me khud fans jayengi. Magar Malhar ko kisi aur ke saath dekhe...itni seedhi nahi hai hamari Kalyani. Aur Kalyani fir Atharv ke saath Mallu ko jalaane wali hai magar is baar paasa ulta parne wala hai. Aage ke chapters me unka jalna hi highlight hai.

ohho to aagein madam diya ki band bajegi 🤣🤣superb mazza aanewala hai bohot ...but bura lag raha hai ye sochkein ki mallu jealous nahi milega atharav ke saath abb kalyani ko dekhkein kahan malhar ko kuch phark padne wala haj waiting for new chapters...👍🏼
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Malhar's POV in past

Malhar was looking for Kalyani outside the school where buses stood. But surprisingly, no one was there.

"K...Kallu, w...where are y...you?" Malhar called out.

"M...Ma... Malharji, here we are," a number of male voices replied.

"W...where is M...Kalyani?" Malhar asked them. He wondered for the millionth time what wrong he had done to Atharv and gang that they wouldn't leave him alone.

"Look at his trembling legs," Atharv jeered.

"I think he'll faint soon with terror," Deepak laughed.

All the other members of Atharv's gang laughed and Malhar was cornered by them.

"P...please l...let me go," Malhar pleaded.

"We will, bro," Atharv put a hand on his shoulder, "Just speak Kallu's full name without stammering."

"K...Kal...."

"K...K...Kalya...Kalya."

"Kalyani De...De...Deah..."

They showed Malhar an inverted thumb, "We said to speak her full name. How can you dream her making your girlfriend when you can't properly even speak her name? Not that she's much of a catch either. She just has booksmarts, but her screw here," Atharv said, pointing at the side of his forehead, "Has lost somewhere. She's so despo for getting a boyfriend that she's trying her pathetic flirting skills on this loser."

"Y..you," Malhar punched Atharv in the face. It was not that Malhar had stammering issue since he began speaking nor did he use to be so timid. But ever since he lost his parents in a suspicious car accident, he developed an unknown fear that someone is out there to kill him. Any violence or aggressive behaviour triggered panic attacks. Sarthak Kaka making him work on these issues by encouraging him to take small-small steps but with his scant income, he could not afford treatment at a well-known psychiatric faculty.

Now, that Malhar had punched Atharv, he started hyperventilating. He could not sense his own body. Everything was growing dark around him. Malhar saw someone charging towards him with closed fist, but he didn't feel anything on his face. He could feel a shoe on his belly, but he was feeling no pain. He couldn't sense anything until he heard Kalyani's voice.

"You dare touch him again, and I swear this is your last day in the school compound. Look at him, you have beaten him so much," Kalyani was close to tears.

Despite trying his best, Malhar couldn't get up. Now all the pain came rushing into his body. Malhar's body was broken. He was broken. He felt like the protagonist in the movie Lovely bones who could only see things but not do anything. The only difference was that she was dead and stuck in afterlife whereas Malharwas alive by medical standards.

"Kallu, are you so despo to be in a relationship, you don't even realise he's using you? He likes only Simran, it's you who are playing the fool here."

"Seriously, Simran is just his junior in college," Kalyani attempted to reason.

"Have you even noticed Simran? She's so driven and ambitious. She is the second year topper despite coming from a poor village background. Whereas you are just an aimless spoilt kid. Simran is Malhar's type, not you. But you are so desparate..."

"I'm not desperate for anyone. Who said I love Malharji? It's just that I pity him. Why would I get into a relationship with someone like him when I can marry an ambitious, good looking person who can at least stand for himself."

That's it. Malhar thought he must be dreaming all this. There's no way Kallu would speak about him like that. But little did he know, the worse was yet to come. Atharv and gang would punish him in a more disgusting way for raising his hand on them and Kallu...well Kallu.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

ohho to aagein madam diya ki band bajegi 🤣🤣superb mazza aanewala hai bohot ...but bura lag raha hai ye sochkein ki mallu jealous nahi milega atharav ke saath abb kalyani ko dekhkein kahan malhar ko kuch phark padne wala haj waiting for new chapters...👍🏼


Tune bola, aur le paros diya maine taaza garma garam naya chapter.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragyu the update was awesome but this godown scene broke kalyani also as she came at last and shue them all away from there but ek cheez samajh nahi aayi ki Malhar nein atharv aur uski gang pein haath uthaya tha yaa kalyani pein

Aur kalyani nein ek dum aise kyun baat ki atharv nein kallu ko badhkaya for sure but vo ek dum aise kaise bolega

Ohh so poor malhar stammer due to his parents death ..it's really sad to see how a little child is affected so much by that accident he lost his control at end and they done so bad with him..hope Malhar also pay them back ...👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Pragyu the update was awesome but this godown scene broke kalyani also as she came at last and shue them all away from there but ek cheez samajh nahi aayi ki Malhar nein atharv aur uski gang pein haath uthaya tha yaa kalyani pein

Aur kalyani nein ek dum aise kyun baat ki atharv nein kallu ko badhkaya for sure but vo ek dum aise kaise bolega

Ohh so poor malhar stammer due to his parents death ..it's really sad to see how a little child is affected so much by that accident he lost his control at end and they done so bad with him..hope Malhar also pay them back ...👍🏼


Ek punch Atharv ki naak par mara tha magar obviously, in return un logon ne uska bharta banaa daala. Kallu aur Mallu ki lhud ko lekar jo insecurities aur self esteem issues hain, vahi door karenge in dono ko.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Ek punch Atharv ki naak par mara tha magar obviously, in return un logon ne uska bharta banaa daala. Kallu aur Mallu ki lhud ko lekar jo insecurities aur self esteem issues hain, vahi door karenge in dono ko.

to matalab at the end ye dono teri story main bhi saath nahi honge kya ..yahan bhi dono alag ho jayenge 🥺🥺😞😞
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

to matalab at the end ye dono teri story main bhi saath nahi honge kya ..yahan bhi dono alag ho jayenge 🥺🥺😞😞


Nahi. Sweet si happy ending hai is baar.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Praggu..... It was really good.....

Loved it

Ye atharv or uski gang kbhi nhi sudrenge.....

Malharji couldn't take a word for kallu❤❤❤

Does kalyani really not love him????


Waiting tk know babes.. And sorry too I couldn't give a lambi reply...... But this was so sweet and subtle😊

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Edited by PRAKRITI_12 - 3 years ago

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