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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm


Absolutely...

We are here at this forum because of our bond..

It was a very young guy who passed on...and that too a suicide. His parents were inconsolable... Mom fainted and had to be admitted.. We were absolutely at a loss for some time..

We ourselves were feeling so bad for the boy's untimely fate..

Even the doctor cried because she had been treating him for a few years now..

Looked as though he was under control but then this happened.. 😞😞

Ofcourse we had to file the reports in the police... Quite some formalities..


However much we read and hear about death, when it happens in front of our eyes, it hits us in ways we've not expected. Om Shanti to the departed soul 🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kalyani's POV past

After getting beaten by Atharv and gang, Malhar was fondling the wound on his arm.

"Is it hurting too much?" Malhar was shocked at seeing Kalyani.

Malhar just kept looking at Kalyani with his tear-filled eyes. Kalyani felt so bad seeing him like that. She brought some cotton and a mini Dettol bottle her mother kept in her bag in case of any emergency.

Kalyani held his hand, unintentionally touching him where Atharv had hit him.

"Ouch!" he cried in pain.

"I'm so sorry."

"It's OK."

Kalyani poured Dettol on the cotton, and being the master of clumsiness Kalyani was, she poured a lot of Savlon on her own arm. It stung so bad.

"Aah! Aah!" Kalyani cried. The burning sensation was so intense.

"Arey, who told you to bring Dettol? How can you hurt yourself like this?" Malhar scolded Kalyani, "Is it burning too much?" Kalyani didn't know earlier that Malhar had it in him to scold anyone but it felt cute at that time, to be scolded by someone for hurting herself.

"G...g...give me the cotton," he said. Kalyani handed over the cotton to him. She had just realised he didn't stammer when he was scolding her.

Malhar cleaned Dettol off the skin of her hand and arm. It was a facepalm moment for Kalyani. She came for tending to Malhar's wounds but instead hurt herself.

"You too apply Dettol on your wound," Kalyani said.


Malhar's POV


Hinjewadi Canteen and Catering Association had organised strike against sub-par working conditions. When Pulkit from Administration called the catering company responsible for their office, their head told him that he had no complaint from the company's side, but for the sake of association call, they had to respond. And the worse thing was, Hinjewadi being 40 kms from the main city, no other arrangement could be done at such a short notice.


Malhar went outside my cabin to just see if everything was going smoothly. Employees were carpooling or sharing two-wheelers with their friends as there was no restaurant or food stall nearby. Malhar thanked God that he used to bring his own tiffin!


The canteen with its glass walls looked like a haunted house from outside except a wandering ghost standing listlessly in the empty canteen. Malhar should have known...Everyone would get wind of what's happening in their office but Kalyani Deshmukh would have zero clue even if a raccoon starts a rock concert in front of her. Malhar know he had zero business in concerning himself if she's hungry all day or all year. After all, she never looked back or cared about how he was doing. Hell, she didn't even talk to him after that incident with Atharv, Deepak and gang. Stop thinking like old Malhar! Behave as people expect a CEO to behave, Mr. Malhar Rane! Malhar smoothened his tie and the lapels of his coat.


Kalyani's POV


She couldn't believe the whole canteen vaporized just like that. People were leaving with their friends somewhere. There must be some kind of announcement she had missed. If only she had paid more attention to what was happening around her instead of reading about cryptid encounters on Reddit or digging into Teletubbies conspiracy in web articles. You know what's worse, life has made her halwa and it was Kalyani herself who sat on frying pan and had lit the gas flame to be cooked. Kalyani punched the wall in frustration, but like everything bad she did bounced back at her, there was no impact on the wall but her hand definitely got bruised in the process.


"Why do you always hurt yourself like that, Kalyani?" She heard a familiar voice. Oh no! Not again! Did she always have to embarrass myself in such a cringy way before Malhar? Cool! Let this hotshot CEO think he was friends with a fugitive from Agra mental asylum posing as a high school student.


Malhar held Kalyani's fist which was still closed. Kalyani tried to get it out from his hold but he grabbed her wrist tightly and carefully opened her each finger as if he was unfurling the petals of a flower. Damn! Even Sofia the Robot would swoon if she were in Kalyani's place. Just for the sake of curiosity, Kalyani wanted to ask Malhar, when did he become so adept in making a woman swoon in addition to updating his looks and financial status? Vaise to, Kalyani swooned at him even when he was that chashmish, taar wale daanton vala seedha-saada darpok Malhar (Trans. Bespectacled, braces over teeth, simple, timid, Nikhil) who everyone used to bully and make fun of. So you can say Kalyani was being biased, but even from a perfectly impartial view, khair leave it!


"You're smiling, seriously Kalyani? I mean who beams like that after hurting themselves?" Malhar arched his eyebrow and it was cute.


"No one ever died of punching a wall?" Kalyani waved.


"You yourself told me at school about a man who punched a wall and then the wall, being ancient, collapsed on him, cracking his skull and his dead body was found in the rubble afterwards."


"Arey, it was in a movie. The man ordered a child to be crushed by elephant so that was kind of a poetic justice. When the wall was falling on him, his face was zoomed in three times with a woosh woosh sound and in the background were the wails of the murdered child."


"But you never told me about the movie. You simply said you know a guy who punched a wall..."


"Leave it, na," Kalyani said. Kalyani was fond of telling tall tales at school. Actually, she still was but now there was no one to listen to her nonsensical talks.


"Have you had lunch?" Malhar asked me. Kalyani knew for sure he definitely knew that she was clueless about this canteen's vanishing act and now was purposefully goading her.


"Actually, I...," Kalyani fumbled. How was she going to tell him that she didn't know of a restaurant nearby and she didn't know to drive a scooty and she didn't even have a friend who would ask her- Kalyani, are you hungry? Sed life is fun only in the world of memes not after you meet a friend/crush you abandoned years ago after his mind-boggling glowup.


"Come, let's eat," Malhar said.


Is he going to take her to a seven-star restaurant from where she'll be kicked out because she didn't know yet how to eat chowmein with chopsticks without dropping them on floor and her clothes?


"Where to?" Kalyani said horrified.


"What do you mean by where to?" Malhar said, "We'll eat in the amphitheatre. Let me bring my tiffin."


The amphitheatre was in the centre of our company's quarters built primarily for cultural functions but it was majorly used by employees for dhoop-senkna(getting sunlight) during winters, gapiyana(gossiping) and apne seniors ki buraai karna(bitching about seniors), you get the picture.


Vaise, Kalyani was very excited. She just wanted Nishigandha ki bacchi to see her with Malhar once and then she would scare her all the time dropping hints how good friend she was of the CEO. Every girl in her team would die to talk with me...Bwahaha!


Kalyani's reverie was broken soon though. Malhar was coming towards her. He had ditched his expensive navy blue suit and Rado watch. His sleeves were rolled up, his hair was messy and to Kalyani's surprise...he was wearing thick glasses similar to the ones he used to wear at school. Shit! Malharji never liked someone making stories about him and Kalyani even in the past and if someone saw Kalyani now eating lunch with him, they would all tag her being favoured unfairly. But impression jamaane ka itna accha mauka chala gaya iske proper behaviour ki vajah se!


Believing that Kalyani was caught up in some kind of weird time loop, she asked Malhar as he was spreading his handkerchief to keep the tiffin box on, "Are Malharji? Aapko fir se chashma lagne laga?"


"Mujhe to hamesha se hi chashma lagta hai," he said nonchalantly.


"So how are you able to see without it?" Kalyani asked, "I started wearing glasses in college but I can't even see my fingers without it."


"Lenses," he said softly, "Come eat na!"


Kalyani tore a morsel of chapati and ate it with a bite of malai kofta. Kucch bhi kaho bande ke haath me swaad to tha hamesha se hi.


"So, you have, like," Kalyani said, her mouth full of food, "your own chwwwartered wlane?"


"What?"


Kalyani ate her bite completely and asked, "Do you have your own chartered plane?"


Malhar looked at Kalyani as if she were the Doraemon who jumped out of the TV, "What? I'm just a CEO, madam, not a business owner. Itni bhi salary nahi milti hame. And if someone better comes in the scene, we are sacked just like that." Kalyani appreciated that at least he had the decency to speak after chewing his morsel completely unlike her.


"You must be kidding," Kalyani said. Who could sack a CEO afterall?


"No, I'm serious. Once someone expert in a new technology, someone more favoured by the board of directors due to his connections, someone who could ensure better turnover comes, a CEO is asked to step down to a much low-level post in the name of giving him rest and making him spend more time with his family. Sab chaar din ki chaandni hai, Kallu madam, fir ghana andhera..."


He cleared his throat, and said, "Sorry, I meant Kalyani. I didn't mean to call you by...by that name."


"You don't stammer anymore," Kalyani said with a smile. Their lunch was over by now.


"When I got into IIM Ahmedabad, each morning I would wake daily at 2 AM and practice speaking a sentence without stammering."


"It must be hard," Kalyani exhaled.


"It was," Malhar gazed at the horizon, "But what other choice did I have? I no more wanted to be the timid loser who gets spooked at his own existence."


And finally Malhar had repeated the words Kalyani been dreading since she saw him again. The saddest part was, it was not these words Kalyani regretted the most, it was what she did with Malharji afterwards which haunted me till now.


.....


Malhar's POV


Malhar had tried his best to not dig up old graves, but he just wanted Kalyani to get a glimpse of the extent to which she had hurt him ten years ago and he could swear, this was just the surface level. But Malhar knew, though Micky was wrong in every way in what she did with him, it was not as if he was completely blameless either. He always expected her to be his knight in shining armour yet he never realised how she was crumbling into pieces of herself. She needed him, and he was busy in his own pity party. They were just two selfish youngsters then, oblivious of how their actions were affecting each other and maybe, they were just two selfish grown-ups even after ten long years.


Please let me know your feedback about this chapter.

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Woww pragyaa..., the update is super good.

I love this ff totally and completely.

Though malhar us not the one to have petty revenge or grudges, he wanted kalyani to know how hurt he is

This atharv is such a guy, he definitely had done something which made kallu to say those words to her malharji.

Kalyani malhar ko tend karne gayi, but he tended her because she being the clumsy one. I loved fun opposite they have become after 10 yrs.

Kalyani was swooned by malhar even at their school time and now to.

I loved the update pragyaa, you explained their pov exactly.

I totally totally loved it. Will be waiting for your update.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Woww pragyaa..., the update is super good.

I love this ff totally and completely.

Though malhar us not the one to have petty revenge or grudges, he wanted kalyani to know how hurt he is

This atharv is such a guy, he definitely had done something which made kallu to say those words to her malharji.

Kalyani malhar ko tend karne gayi, but he tended her because she being the clumsy one. I loved fun opposite they have become after 10 yrs.

Kalyani was swooned by malhar even at their school time and now to.

I loved the update pragyaa, you explained their pov exactly.

I totally totally loved it. Will be waiting for your update.


Thank you so much Swathi 💖💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Babe... It was awesome..

Atharv was such a sick guy...

Malhar was beaten up... Kallu coming to tend his wounds but she ended up getting tended by him.. 😆 I like clumsy Kallu..

She even noticed that he didn't stammer when he scolded her.. 😆 daantna toh Malharji ka trademark ban chuka hai.. 🤣

And now too Malhar knows her so well that she would be the only one who didn't have food to eat..

Aww... Kallu swooning over Malharji both in past and present..

So sweet of him to share his food with her..

And Kallu ke mind me plans ban rahe the to show off that she was friend of CEO.. 🤣

So while eating Kallu got to know some facts about the corporate world..

And also how much he had felt hurt by her words on the past..

He just couldn't stop himself from calling her Kallu.. 😊

Thank you Pragya for the update.. 😘🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Babe... It was awesome..

Atharv was such a sick guy...

Malhar was beaten up... Kallu coming to tend his wounds but she ended up getting tended by him.. 😆 I like clumsy Kallu..

She even noticed that he didn't stammer when he scolded her.. 😆 daantna toh Malharji ka trademark ban chuka hai.. 🤣

And now too Malhar knows her so well that she would be the only one who didn't have food to eat..

Aww... Kallu swooning over Malharji both in past and present..

So sweet of him to share his food with her..

And Kallu ke mind me plans ban rahe the to show off that she was friend of CEO.. 🤣

So while eating Kallu got to know some facts about the corporate world..

And also how much he had felt hurt by her words on the past..

He just couldn't stop himself from calling her Kallu.. 😊

Thank you Pragya for the update.. 😘🤩


Thank you so much Rekha for your sweetest comment 🍧🍨💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww pragyu it's amazing meri pragyu mera dil le gayi aaj to iss update sein pata nahi kyon par main dono kein liye sach main royi aan issein padhtein huien ..💕🥺

Malhar is a soft guy who only wants just little love and friendship ...I can totally understand his situation it's really feel very hard to even live somewhere where everybody just taunts you for your body structure or your speaking way or on something..going daily there it's just hurts to the core in your teen age ..but I need you to put up a solution how Malhar answered them back getting frustrating he realised his true worth...I really want a savage Malhar who would make them regret for their action..👍🏼

Ohh poor kalyani how her life goes up and down in those 10 yrs ....but I loved their cute scene how kalyani tries to soothe Malhar pain but end up hurting herself and how she felt good after listening his care for her ..aww such a cute scene ..😳😳

malhar now doesn't wants to take any revenge but still he wants to let her know that what impact she left on him by her bitter words but alas he dont know that he doesn't about poor girl suffering really she is truly suffering so much ...😭😭

Kalyani kein sapne sabko jalane kein..🤣aur usne kaafi baatien sikh li malhar ke saath lunch karte karte...but the favorite part is there where he unknowingly called her kallu ..ahh it was so goood to see him breaking that wall slowly slowly😳

Hope so kalyani soon find her solace in Malhar and he also like her helped her in growing again ..I somewhere know why Kalyani said those bitter words actually reading that scolding scene I felt like kalyani understand his potential so she somewhere said those things to hurt him to get him learn his worth...

Jaldi jaldi update dena pragyu...🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Aww pragyu it's amazing meri pragyu mera dil le gayi aaj to iss update sein pata nahi kyon par main dono kein liye sach main royi aan issein padhtein huien ..💕🥺

Malhar is a soft guy who only wants just little love and friendship ...I can totally understand his situation it's really feel very hard to even live somewhere where everybody just taunts you for your body structure or your speaking way or on something..going daily there it's just hurts to the core in your teen age ..but I need you to put up a solution how Malhar answered them back getting frustrating he realised his true worth...I really want a savage Malhar who would make them regret for their action..👍🏼

Ohh poor kalyani how her life goes up and down in those 10 yrs ....but I loved their cute scene how kalyani tries to soothe Malhar pain but end up hurting herself and how she felt good after listening his care for her ..aww such a cute scene ..😳😳

malhar now doesn't wants to take any revenge but still he wants to let her know that what impact she left on him by her bitter words but alas he dont know that he doesn't about poor girl suffering really she is truly suffering so much ...😭😭

Kalyani kein sapne sabko jalane kein..🤣aur usne kaafi baatien sikh li malhar ke saath lunch karte karte...but the favorite part is there where he unknowingly called her kallu ..ahh it was so goood to see him breaking that wall slowly slowly😳

Hope so kalyani soon find her solace in Malhar and he also like her helped her in growing again ..I somewhere know why Kalyani said those bitter words actually reading that scolding scene I felt like kalyani understand his potential so she somewhere said those things to hurt him to get him learn his worth...

Jaldi jaldi update dena pragyu...🤗


Thank you so much Vanshu 💜💜💜💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kalyani's POV

Kalyani didn't know why but her mood was uncharacteristically good today. It was sunny outside yet a cool breeze is blowing. Kalyani was never the dancing in the rain kind of girl. Give her sun, give her warmth, give her limbu pani, there's nothing else she wants. Kalyani was humming her favourite song- Ik Vaari Aa Bhi Jaa Yaara and life didn't seem like so shitty anymore.


https://youtu.be/zXLgYBSdv74


Suddenly Kalyani heard Nishigandha's voice, "Who the hell has hired an irresponsible employee like you, Miss Kalyani Deshmukh? You don't understand how precious is each minute in Corporate World? How dare you refuse what Mr. Bannerji asked you to do?"

"Ma'am, I just asked him for approval from competent authority as it was an inter-department issue. Last time I allowed the modifications in the source code without approval, I was called for explanation," Kalyani replied with as much politeness she could muster.

"I'm not at all interested in the stories of your past lives," Nishigandha bellowed, "I won't allow anyone to hamper the productivity of our company. You spoilt children of rich people think you can get away without lifting a finger. That's why people like you always depend on your others for your pocket money. You have the mettle to do nothing on your own."

"Ma'am, I requested Kalyani so much..." Mr. Banerjee was saying in a snakelike voice. Kalyani took a pencil and pushed it against the skin of her wrist.

"You don't understand. You never need to work hard and hustle like us because of your financial situation." Kalyani could never forget Malhar's words in the past.

"Seriously, Malharji? That's what you think of me? My father only has one Maruti 800 car and you think I'm some spoilt rich princess. I know you are orphan and are living on scholarship. But it's not as if my life is completely sorted. We have just one two BHK flat, that too on loan which is not yet repaid. Everytime I visit my extended family, I feel like a black sheep on hearing my uncles and aunts about my highly successful cousin...you know what, go to hell Malharji."

Kalyani might not be rich but it waa true she was a spoilt loser. In spite of being brilliant at studies, she had let every opportunity pass through her grasp just because she was not feeling like to do it. Kalyani had always done what she felt like, always had let her heart take decisions without realising heart is a fickle, treacherous companion who always lands you in trouble.

"People like you can never succeed in life. Always a burden on their organisation, family..." Nishigandha was saying.

The pencil was deeper into Kalyani's skin. It was hurting so much. She could feel a hollow hammering inside her heart. Kalyani so needed to sit down, but knew doing so will only cause Nishigandha to boil more. Kalyani tried to open the zip of her purse for the meds the psychiatrist asked her to take in case of any such episode of panic attack, but her hands were shaking so much that she dropped her purse. Kalyani looked around for anyone to at least nod towards her or have an expression of feeling bad for her, but no one was there for her. Except her parents, no one had ever been there for her.

Kalyani took her bag and rushed out of the office. And no, unlike what they show in Kdramas, Malhar was not there and why should he be? How much we love someone, we are just humans, not an omniscient entity present everywhere and everytime to protect those we love. No one can protect the other all their life. We can't even protect ourselves everytime.

It was not the time for company bus to leave and there was no other mode of conveyance visible for Kalyani to get to her hostel which was 45 kms away from office. Kalyani deleted her Facebook and Instagram accounts, deleted her WhatsApp, switched off her phone and collapsed on the burning ground beside the road. Cars were moving past in speed covering me in dust and soot. Kalyani started humming, tears streaming down my face, "Hai pyaar to kai dafaa kiya, tujhse nahi kiya to kya kiya..."


https://youtu.be/DvqFRQWqTMI


Malhar's POV(next day)


When Malhar got back to his cabin after the board meeting, Kalyani was waiting for me. Obviously, her tussle with Nishigandha was discussed in every floor, still Malhar was shocked to see Kalyani in person because she was never the type to use her connections in dealing with office politics.


She stood up and threw a newspaper on Malhar's face. Now this was not what Malhar was expecting. Before he could ask her anything, she shouted, "What the hell is this, Malharji?"


Malhar took a deep inhale and answered in a low voice, "Since you are doing all this newspaper throwing and shouting here, I think you are more suited to answer this question."


"Open the business section," Kalyani always started trembling when she was too angry, "You are dating Diya?"


Malhar looked at the article responsible for all this drama. Diya came from a poor, conservative family who fled her abusive family and struggled on the footpath and finally got a chance as a model after making some questionable sacrifices. She rose to as a highly sought after supermodel and after an affair with the heir of a multinational corporate house who had zero business sense, she took over the reins of the loss-making software company and made it as one of the top five IT giants in the country. And now that she had broken up with her boyfriend, media needs her to link her up with some other person. Obviously people have a strong industrial backing due to their families' name could make it very difficult for such media houses by engaging them in lawsuits, they made Malhar the scapegoat just because of a meeting he had with her for a contract.


"You are dating Diya or not, tell me?" Kalyani demanded.


"And now, why am I answerable to you? It's none of your business whether I'm dating someone or not," Malhar said leaning against the side of table with my arms crossed.


"Listen," Kalyani started chewing her lips and then held Malhar by the collar, "If you date that model, I'll make sure to make both of your lives hell."


Now, this was becoming fun. It was easy for Malhar to clear all Kalyani's doubts by telling her the truth that he was never interested in any girl except her. But the image of Kalyani kissing Atharv at the chin in front of the whole bus flashed before Malhar's eyes. Now was the perfect time to give her a taste of her own medicine.


"Now, now, Kalyani," Malhar smirked, taking her hands off his collar and made an act of dusting his collar, "Do you think me to be so weak that I'll let you get away with making my life hell? I'm sure you're mistaking me for someone else."


"I fully know, who you are, inside and out, Malharji," Kalyani growled, charging towards Malhar. She closed her eyes and stood on her tiptoes. If anyone needed any proof that Kalyani was mad, this was it. She inched her face towards him but Malhar clamped her mouth shut with his hands.


"Grow up, Kallu," Malhar said in disgust, "You think you can hurt me again by this revenge kissing drama again. Normal people kiss out of love, not to make a point or hurt someone. You're sick. But you know what, whatever you do or happens with you has stopped affecting me since long ago. Do you think I give a damn about all your tantrums after you kissed Atharv even after knowing what he did with me in that deserted godown. Just leave, Kallu."


Kalyani was absolutely not used to telling her to get out. Her eyes were red from angry tears and she lifted her hand to hit Malhar, but he blocked her midway, hissing, "Don't you dare hit me again, Ms. Kalyani Deshmukh. Cross me again and I'll bloody make sure you pay for everything you've done to me with interest."


Kalyani kept looking at Malhar as if she couldn't understand a thing.


"Get out of my cabin!" Malhar shouted.


All this drama wouldn't have happened if Malhar had simply told Kalyani why this contract was so important for him. Malhar was in the least bit concerned about Diya. He opened the proposal file by Diya's company and got to the third page. Under the heading Project Head, was written Mr. Atharv Bapat.




Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Oh God! Kalyani kissed atharv and Deepak in school for revenge from malhar. Doesn't know what she had done in the past.

Malhar is so hurt and he still loved her.

That contract is of Atharv bapat.

Just waiting for your next update. I really love this ff.

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