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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kalyani's POV

The results of CAT exam were declared.

When Malhar came to Kalyani after checking his result in a cyber cafe, she said, "Come, Malharji, let's celebrate your not getting into an Elite B-school. Now you won't leave this town."

He simply replied, looking for someone else, "W...when did I s...say anything about m...me not get...getting into a go...go...good B-school?"

"This means, you..."

A tall, beautiful girl in Salwar Suit came running towards Nicky, and screamed, "Congo Malhar! You made it into the 99+ percentile bracket. Now you'll get called by all premium B schools- IIM A BC, FMS... Everything will change...I too will study harder and get into IIM next year.

"But, Malharji is not leaving this city without me," Kalyani said.

Malhar said, "Who tol...told you I won't l...leave this town to join IIM? I'm not go...go...going to leave such a great opportunity..."

"What's that?" The tall girl aka Simran asked, pointing the greeting card Kalyani made to cheer up Malhar after the results. She looked better with Malhar's height than me who was just 5'1" tall.

"A gift for someone I used to know," Kalyani left the place.

And since then, the mention of Simran was in every talk of Malhar. One day Kalyani saw Simran and Malhar sharing a plate of noodle in a stall near the college.

One day, in a family wedding, Kalyani was ignored as if she didn't even exist and her cousin was glorified to lengths just because she cracked Medical Entrance exam. Why don't you learn something from your cousin?- An aunt asked Kalyani- She lives in a village where there's not even proper coaching centre whereas your father had got you admitted to the most prestigious coaching centre, still you are wasting your parents' money. Kalyani bottled all her tears, only to break down at night when she was alone.

Kalyani called Malhar. He would understand her, but when she told him the case, he replied, "So w...what was wr...wr...wrong in your aunt's words? She was merely sta...stating the truth. You procras...pro...tinate everything, act la...la...lazy, run away from hard work, and yet f...f...feel you're entitled to suc...success. I mean j...just because you're b...born to a r...rich family."

"My father is just a government official, and we are not Tata Birla. We could afford our Maruti 800 just this year, Malharji," Kalyani said softly.

"But you are more privileged than many others. And add to it, you have to act jealous to Simran. She's succeeding because she's worked hard for it? What have you done besides cribbing and being jealous?"


Malhar's POV

The phone was disconnected. Hell! What had gotten into him? Kalyani felt so alone and he just made her feel even worse. He was getting frustrated at how Kalyani was not hustling as much as was needed and he didn't want Kalyani to lose her dream of becoming a software engineer. And to be honest, Kalyani couldn't handle being an average person. She always wanted to be the topper otherwise she lost her joy and cheerful attitude. And Malhar couldn't see his Kallu like that. But at least he should've behaved like a friend when she needed him. Malhar thought of calling her, but she didn't pick up the phone. Next day was Sunday, so in the morning itself, Malhar took my bicycle and went towards Kalyani's house.

But his path was blocked by Atharv and gang.

"N...not t...today," Malhar told them firmly.

They kicked at his bicycle and Deepak and one other boy held his hands and Atharv gagged a cloth inside my mouth. They took him to a dark godown. Malhar was sweating so much. It reminded him of the dark night his parents had dies. It felt as if there was a rock lodged in his throat.

Atharv brought a cigarette near him and lit it with a lighter.

"No," Malhar wanted to scream but his voice wouldn't come.

They each took turns in burning him with cigarette one by one at his face, arms, shins, knuckles, everywhere one could think of. Then Atharv lifted a rock and crushed Malhar's legs below it.

....

After three months

Malhar's legs still had plaster on them and he had missed three months of studies in college. Everyone knew what had happened but Atharv and Deepak were suspended only for a week and were making lewd signs at me. Malhar had hoped Kalyani would ask him how he was but to his surprise, Kallu entered the bus, without looking at him, she went straight to Atharv and kissed him on the chin.


Kalyani's POV

It was not as if Kalyani didn't know what Atharv had done to Malhar but she was so broken after the day she called Malhar, she got her first panic attack. Each day was so difficult for her and nights were full of terror. And it was all because of Malhar. If he liked Simran, Kalyani too didn't have any place for him inside her heart. The day Kalyani called him, next day was his birthday for which she had planned a surprise for him but he said she was jealous of Simran. He dared say those words to Kalyani who was always there for him when he was bullied. Kalyani now hated Malhar with her everything and was ready to go to every extent to hurt him. So she proposed to Atharv even after knowing what he did to Malhar.

When she kissed Atharv, there was no expression on Malhar's face. So it didn't mean anything to him whether Kalyani was with Atharv. He was so deep in love with Simran.

Malhar held Kalyani's hand when she was passing near his seat, hissing, "What do you think you're doing, Kallu? Atharv will only hurt you. Don't you look at yourself at what you're doing?"

"Have you ever looked at yourself in the mirror, Malharji? You would get spooked yourself on realizing how ugly you look. Your teeth with braces, that champu oiled hairstyle, your thick glasses and your crybaby face! And add to it, your absolutely bland personality. Always acting like a damsel in distress. You should be thankful to me because you only survived the higher secondary as I protected you. You know how everyone in school makes fun of me for being friends with a loser like you! You deserve everything you get, Malharji! You are and will always be a loser! I must have kept mind in a dustbin for four years that's why I helped a good-for-nothing person like you at each step. Get out and don't you dare cross my path again!"

"Thanks for everything you've done for me," Malhar said and left the place.

And it was the last time Kalyani saw him.

What do you think of this chapter? Who's more wrong here- Kalyani or Malhar? What do you think Atharv deserve now that Malhar is the CEO and he had to work under him?

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Praggu..... It was really good.....

Loved it

Ye atharv or uski gang kbhi nhi sudrenge.....

Malharji couldn't take a word for kallu❤❤❤

Does kalyani really not love him????


Waiting tk know babes.. And sorry too I couldn't give a lambi reply...... But this was so sweet and subtle😊

......

Thanks a lot Praku 💜💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragyaa the update is superb...

So this atharv and gang thrashed malhar, bechara. Though malhar being fearful he can't take a word against kallu and punched atharv, but ended up thrashed by them. Felt really bad by knowing the reason behind his fears. It's really hard to take all these bullying at such a tender age.

Kalyani though wanted to fight for malhar ended up hurting him, he is really broken listening her words.

Waiting for your update pragyaaa, I loved this one

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Pragyaa the update is superb...

So this atharv and gang thrashed malhar, bechara. Though malhar being fearful he can't take a word against kallu and punched atharv, but ended up thrashed by them. Felt really bad by knowing the reason behind his fears. It's really hard to take all these bullying at such a tender age.

Kalyani though wanted to fight for malhar ended up hurting him, he is really broken listening her words.

Waiting for your update pragyaaa, I loved this one

Thanks a lot Swathi 💖💖💖💖 I've updated the next chapter.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Malhar's POV

"So I think we're all on the same page regarding the objectives of this collaboration between IndianCyberPunk and Tech Global," Malhar ended the meeting. Diya was looking at him.

At the end of everyone's applause, the peon in their office Sawant Dada brought snacks and tea for everyone at which Atharv bellowed, "The meeting has ended and this peon is bringing tea and snacks now. Bloody illiterate idiot. I'll get you sacked in a second." He clicked his fingers. Typical Atharv tantrum!

Sawant Dada folded his hands and pleaded, "I have 103 degree fever today, beta. That's why I couldn't come on time. Have mercy on me. I am your father's age."

Malhar cleared his throat and led Kaka to a chair, "Kaka! Have you applied for leave?"

He said, "Yes, but Bannerji Sir..."

Malhar dialled his secretary's number and asked her to summon Mr. Bannerji in his cabin in fifteen minutes.

Malhar went towards Atharv who was sitting in the chair as if he owns the damn place, and asked, "And Mr. Bapat, if you know so much about how a peon should work, why don't you do the job of a peon for a week? It would be a nice change for you, and our organization will also get the services of such a fine peon."

"How dare you?" Atharv pointed his finger towards Malhar, "I am the project Head."

Malhar brought down his finger with a jerk and said, "And I'm the bloody CEO of the company which's financing this project. So Mr. Bapat, please serve everyone at the meeting tea and snacks."

Atharv looked at Diya to come to his aid but she merely shrugged.

"Beta," Sawant Kaka protested.

"Kaka, you take leave until you're healthy," Malhar said, "And your salary will be credited in advance in addition to Rs. 50,000. If you need any assistance, you can directly call me at my personal number. And you Atharv, why are you making us all wait? Serve tea."

Atharv served tea to everyone and Malhar just smiled looking at him. When Atharv came towards Malhar, with the tray in his hand and said, "Sir, tea," as he walked towards him, Malhar stretched my leg nonchalantly and Atharv stumbled over it and there he was, on the floor with the hot tea on his shirt. It must be burning so much, ouch!

"Tch...tch...tch...Mr. Bapat," Malhar said, making sure Atharv heard each note of pity in Malhar's voice, "You can't even do properly the work of a person who you called, what did you exactly call him, yeah, bloody illiterate peon." Malhar stretched his hand to help him stand.

He took it and then Malhar took my next shot, "And since you spilled some tea on my shoes, won't you clean it?"

If a glare could murder someone, Malhar would be so dead sitting before Atharv.

"But I've nothing to clean your shoes with," Atharv said innocently.

"Your tie has such a nice colour, Mr. Bapat," Malhar smiled.

Atharv bent and took off his tie and started wiping Malhar's shoes clean. Aha! This is what revenge feels like! Now Malharcould understand why Kalyani had crush on Edmond Dante in The Count of Monte Cristo.

In the middle of this process, the door opened and Kalyani entered. It took her some moments to process the scene.

"Nishigandha ma'am sent these files, Sir," Kalyani said, "She was on leave. So she asked me to brief... I'll come later."

As Deepak was staggering outside the cabin, Kalyani came barging in and said, "What were you doing Malharji? How can you do such a thing to him when you yourself know what it feels like to be at the receiving end of such a treatment? This is not you, Malharji. This is not you."

"The Malhar you knew has died long ago, Kalyani," Malhar said, closing my eyes, "You cannot find him now."

"You're not my Malharji!" Kalyani said in tears.

Malhar kept sitting on my chair, "When was I yours, Ms. Kalyani Deshmukh? When you kissed Atharv in front of me? When you didn't even bother to ask how was I doing in these ten long years? You didn't even care whether I was alive or dead? When you called me ugly loser?"

Kalyani kept looking at me beseechingly.

"You know what, Atharv never hurt me the way you did," Malhar said, "So now just stop pretending that you care about me and leave."

"I really miss Malharji," Kalyani whispered, "If you meet him somewhere, please let him know."

Do you think what Malhar did with Atharv was too extreme and unnecessary? Did Kalyani deserve to be talked to like that?


Guys, two more chapters left for this FF to end.

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Naa bilkul bhi jyaada nahi Kiya malhar ne agr atharav abb Tak badal jaata aur malhar sein truly apne har kiye ki maafi mangta to main jaroor ussein maff Kar deti ..par he still has that same idiotic attitude so yaa mere hisaab se malhar nein uskein saath bilkul galat nahi Kiya .. par main iss story main abb kissi kein saath bhi jyaada symapthy nahi jaata paa rahi hoo as Kalyani nein bhi koi malhar kein saath jyaada acha nahi Kiya. . I know he did wrong by giving her that advice at that crucial time of her but still malhar nein uskien bhalien kein liye hi kaha tha ..actually Rekha di nein sahi kaha tha inn dono ko sahi main proper conversation karni nahi aati...they are too idiots who are overly in love with each other but still don't want to communicate with each other...simran nein Jab nahi Milne Diya inhein aur abb atharav aur Diya ...

Atharav kein saath Jo hua it was so correct aur main to chathi hoo malhar ko sachmain iska bhi haath vaise hi jalana chahiye jaise atharav nein uskein saath Kiya tha ..aur kalyani kein saath ka behaviour I don't know sahi tha ya nahi but agr pehle chapter ko dekha jaayein to Jo usne malhar kein saath Kiya tha uskein hisaab sein sahi bhi tha ..she really hurt him to the core ...really bad on her part ..

Waiting for new chapters...😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo

Naa bilkul bhi jyaada nahi Kiya malhar ne agr atharav abb Tak badal jaata aur malhar sein truly apne har kiye ki maafi mangta to main jaroor ussein maff Kar deti ..par he still has that same idiotic attitude so yaa mere hisaab se malhar nein uskein saath bilkul galat nahi Kiya .. par main iss story main abb kissi kein saath bhi jyaada symapthy nahi jaata paa rahi hoo as Kalyani nein bhi koi malhar kein saath jyaada acha nahi Kiya. . I know he did wrong by giving her that advice at that crucial time of her but still malhar nein uskien bhalien kein liye hi kaha tha ..actually Rekha di nein sahi kaha tha inn dono ko sahi main proper conversation karni nahi aati...they are too idiots who are overly in love with each other but still don't want to communicate with each other...simran nein Jab nahi Milne Diya inhein aur abb atharav aur Diya ...

Atharav kein saath Jo hua it was so correct aur main to chathi hoo malhar ko sachmain iska bhi haath vaise hi jalana chahiye jaise atharav nein uskein saath Kiya tha ..aur kalyani kein saath ka behaviour I don't know sahi tha ya nahi but agr pehle chapter ko dekha jaayein to Jo usne malhar kein saath Kiya tha uskein hisaab sein sahi bhi tha ..she really hurt him to the core ...really bad on her part ..

Waiting for new chapters...😍😍😍


Thank you Vanshu💖💖💖💖

The problem with both Kalyani and Malhar is dono ko apne sivaa doosre ka issue dikh hi nahi raha hai. They are hurt so unhe ek doosre ko bhi hurt karna hai. Kalyani was the one who fell in love with Malhar at first sight and Malhar started loving her gradually after some time. So she loved hard and then wanted to hurt him as much as she could. Like the saying Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And abhi bhi nahi sudhar rahe dono. Normally zyaadatar CEO stories me male lead hurts FL maine socha yahaan opposite dikhaun.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you Vanshu💖💖💖💖

The problem with both Kalyani and Malhar is dono ko apne sivaa doosre ka issue dikh hi nahi raha hai. They are hurt so unhe ek doosre ko bhi hurt karna hai. Kalyani was the one who fell in love with Malhar at first sight and Malhar started loving her gradually after some time. So she loved hard and then wanted to hurt him as much as she could. Like the saying Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And abhi bhi nahi sudhar rahe dono. Normally zyaadatar CEO stories me male lead hurts FL maine socha yahaan opposite dikhaun.

actually malhar is a soft spoken guy in a beginning but after the kalyani betrayal he changed and he changed for good in reality ...malharji humarein iss story main chaa rahien hai hope so aise hi chatein rahien ...kalyani ka vo funda hai maine pyaar kiya to sanam tumhein bhi karna padega varna atharv kein saath milkar tumhein jala jalakein karwaoongi....🤣🤣
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Posted: 3 years ago
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actually malhar is a soft spoken guy in a beginning but after the kalyani betrayal he changed and he changed for good in reality ...malharji humarein iss story main chaa rahien hai hope so aise hi chatein rahien ...kalyani ka vo funda hai maine pyaar kiya to sanam tumhein bhi karna padega varna atharv kein saath milkar tumhein jala jalakein karwaoongi....🤣🤣


Abhi to Kalyani aur bhayankar vala jalane wali hai Malhar ko. Bechara jab tak confess nahi karega, tab tak chain se jeene nahi degi Kallu Mallu ko

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Abhi to Kalyani aur bhayankar vala jalane wali hai Malhar ko. Bechara jab tak confess nahi karega, tab tak chain se jeene nahi degi Kallu Mallu ko

ohh I am waiting for our dearest jallu mallu 😜😜

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