SS: Khush Naseeb? - Page 2

Hey Twinkle…I loved it…you sud write more…actually I had read it y'day…phir I slept…as usual…

Loved the way you showed JW takin care of the kids😳…n u included that he had practice with KW/AW….it was so cute😳😳

And the pain he was going thru…missing Bani n looking after the kids….Ganga was so matured…but Bani bought her up single so maybe that is why she was so matured at a young age…kids tend to do that….

Meera😡 😡😡…gggggrrrrrrr good JW bashed her up👏👏👏…she deserved it…n I'd say she deserved more…I am totally against any kind of violence but at times it becomes necessary…what she did was a heinous thing…n she deserved what she got…ek do laat from my side too pls😆

Poor Bani….how could sumone do that🤢…god …the pig was torturing her🤢😡…yuch man….i wish I cud get my hands on that B*****, my hands r itching now…

JW askin for forgiveness😳….awwwww…..that was so marvellously penned…loved every bit…n then all that teasing n blushing…n JW badmash bacha😆, playing a prank like that😉…luved his owwowwing…it was so cute😳😳

And the end was brilliant👏…esp the line 'This was what life was meant to be, which consisted of, the love of your life being by your side and your own little production right behind.'

So when is the next one coming…I'll be waiting.😃

loveli ss ..hey u r a gr8 writtr 😃

Nice Story Twinkle,

THe heart break, the loneliness, the bringing up of children alone, the comingback and reunion last but not the least the revenge and slap fest of Meera...

I loved it all.

Like Sammy said, I loved that last line too! The production behind...so cute!! 😳 😳

Sheena_Row OK Di... 😊

coolgurl_2005 Oye! What is happeneing? Change of mind hey? No no!! We all know what my writing is like...It's out in public now...! Now we want to see your hidden talent... 😉 Bhoolna mat!! 😃 Thank you so much Preetu...Glad you liked it... 😃 Ahem...Write more? Abh toh tumhaari baari... 😉

sanam84 Of course you'd love the part of Jai taking care of the kids...Give me a JW part which you didn't like...Now that would be interesting... 😆 I know...Jai bashed her good na? But he should've broken her nose too as well as a black eye or even two would have been better... Oh well...Maybe next time... 😉 Yeah I know...His pranks...😍...Sighs... 😆 Next one? Let me think of the date first...And then I'll let you know... 😆

swati_bhatia Thank you so much... 😊

Sheena_Row Oh! Di you're back! 😆 Thanks a tonne Di...Glad you liked it... 😃 The kinds of writers you people are...I'm just a beginner... 😳

wow, that was excellent twinkle!

How I wish KS follows your track!.....loved it...Meera getting punished immediately and Bani and Jai living together happily ever after!

You expressed Jai's troubled feelings and his responsibility towards his children very well 👏 Beautiful ending.....Beautifully written!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your SS.....please write more!

awesome storyline twinkle 👏 👏
liked the way you penned it down.everything fall nicely in its place 👏 👏

jai gave a nice treatment to that physco M--ra 😡

wished the actual KS would have been like this

really great SS... 👏 👏 👏

urooj naqvi...Thank you sweety... 😛

niruba Thanks so much... 😃 If only KS really turned out like that with PD playing Bani and ending with a sweet ending... 😭

divya_123 Thanks a tonne Divs...Glad you liked it...Yeah, Meera should've gotten some more though...It wasn't enough... 😡 Yeah...I also wish KS showed some 'logic' in it time to time...Would've been worthwhile... Missing PD too much...
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