ARIYA, SHIVI, SAMSHA & KAVI FF: PYAAR - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Hey Ruhi! This is a very interesting CS! I'm eagerly waiting for the chapters! 👍🏼 believe in yourself! It will be good! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Welcome to the forum Ruhi.

Its good to have you here.

Will surely keep following your story.

Also nice character sketch.

Considering that you are new here, don't hesitate to ask for help if you ever need. We are all here to help.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Nice part dear

Loved it🤗🤗

I loved this tom & Jerry Sasha too cute

Everyone tease them cutely

Keep writing✍️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

My god masti masti ka koi mauka nahi chodte yeh samjun ke daant ke baad bhi yeh masti karte hai ek aur case arjun ne case ke liye ayesha ko sameer ki begum kya bana diya samsha fight karne lage ayesha ka samajh aata hai per sam bhi childish behave karne laga 😂 finally drug dealing case solve sam ka ayesha ke liye concern nice aur kitna intezaar karna padega humari Riya ke liye waiting for Ariya scenes fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm




Ab humare juniors itne badmash hai ki kya kahen.


Thank you aapke valuable response ke liye.😊🤗


Zayada wait nhi karna padega Riya ki entry ke liye but may be Ariya moments ke liye karna pade.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 4



Dono ka ek cute sa eyelock hota hai. Dono ek dusre ko pyaar se dekh rahen hai jo bahut kuch bayan kar raha hai. Dono ek dusre ke tensed hote hai, concern and care karte hai.


Conference Room me sab (including Arjun) ke tote udd gye SAMSHA ko sath dekh kar. Sab Sameer ki cabin ki taraf dekhte hai phir ek dusre ki aur. Arjun man hi man me smile karta hai.


SAKSHI: Guys main keh rhi hoon inka kuch chal raha hai.


SHREE: Oye, Sakshi kya bol rahi hai tu? Aise kuch bhi nhi hai.


LIZA: Kya kuch nhi hai Specky,(Shree glare at her) tumhe dikhayi nhi deta kya? Abhi Jo Rathod sir Ayesha ko jaise lekar gye.


SHREE: Ayee, Lizard tum n apna chhote se dimag par itna load mat dalo. Waise bhi jaisa tum dono soch rahe ho waisa kuch nhi hai. Hai n CHHOTU?


CHHOTU (confused): Haa yaar, aise kuch bhi nhi hai. Wah Ayesha aur Rathod sir hai. Inn dono ka kuch nhi ho sakta.


SAKSHI: Kyu nhi ho sakta kuch?


CHHOTU: Are dekhayi nhi deta har baat par ek dusre ko panja marte rahte hai. Tera wala angle kahin se fit nhi hota.


SAKSHI: Yaar meri strings keh rahi hai kuch toh hai.


SHREE: Are, tu apni strings ko apne case me use kiya kar. Yahan apna faltu sa angle mat Laga.


LIZA(get frustrated with their conversation): Tum chup raho Specky. Waise bhi tumne nhi pta inn sabke baare me.


SHREE: Ohh, Aisa kya Lizard. Bol toh aise rahi ho jaise tumhe kitna experience hai. Aur waise bhi tum dono ka dimag kharab ho gya hai. Doctor ki zarurat hai.


SAKSHI: Doctor ki zarurat Hume nhi tumhe hai. Dimang tum dono ka kharab ho gya hai.


ARJUN angerly shouted at them but not so loud. He glare at them.


ARJUN (with anger): Yeh, kya bakwas laga rakhi hai. Jab dekho bak bak kiye jaate ho. Dimag hai ya wah bhi apne ghar chhod kar aaye ho? Jab dekho nursery ke bacho ki tarah jhagarte rehte ho. Tum logo se achhe toh bache hote hai.


All felt ashamed. All looked at him and then put their heads down.


ARJUN (frustrated): Ab niche kya dekh rhe ho? Jakar Rathod ko bulawo. Ghar nhi jana kya?


SAKSHI: Main jaati hoon Arjun.


ARJUN: Sakshi tum nhi jaogi, Shree tum jao.


Shree goes to call Rathod but stopped at the doorstep Rathod's cabin and pipped inside as the doors cabin was open little bit.


CONFERENCE ROOM


When Shree didn't came back then they all went to see him where he was except Arjun.


When they reach their, at first they looked each other then at Shree who was pipping inside the cabin. They were shocked to see the couples position, but also started staring them just like Shree. First SAKSHI bend and put her head on Shree's head, then Liza put her head on her and atlast our CHHOTU on her.


They were so engaged in staring that they didn't realise Arjun was glaring them. He kept his hand on CHHOTU'S shoulder but CHHOTU didn't reacted. Then he kept his head on him then he realised that someone was upon him. He looked up and shocked to see his Akdu Arjun who was glaring them.


(He cleared his throat and asked in low voice): Kya kar rahe ho? Maine tumhe Rathod ko bulane bheja tha unhe ghurne nhi.


All looked up and saw that Akdu was there. They hurrily parted and left to collect their bags.
Arjun knocked on door and left. He has a smile on his lips.


Our SAMSHA came out of their wonderland when they heard the knock on door and parted away. Sameer tried her bandages and she left hurriedly as felt awkward.


She directly came to her desk and collected her bag. Sameer came out and went to Arjun. They came in Conference Room where all the members were.


ARJUN: Tum sab ghar jaa sakte ho agar koi kaam nhi hai toh.


SAMEER: Zarurat nhi hai, tum sab jao. Time kafi ho gya hai. And remember, iss case ki report mujhe Monday ko chahiye.


AYESHA (MV): Khadoos kahin ke. Abhi toh aise behave kar rahe the jaise kitni care karte hai but Khadoos kabhi nhi badal sakta.


All curse their bosses in their mind and left bidding Good Night. SAMJUN nod their heads and left for Arjun's house.


In parking area, Sakli and Chhotu were waiting for Ayesha and Shree.


SAKSHI: Dekh CHHOTU, abb tumhe manna padega ki main aise hi nhi bol rhi thi.


LIZA: Hum keh rahe hai n kuch toh chal rha hai inka. Aur iska pata ab main laga kar hi rahungi.


SAKSHI: Haa.. Liza, koi humara sath de ya na de but hum pata zarur lagayenge.


CHHOTU: Band karo tum dono apna Sherlock ka game. Aur, haa apna yeh muh Ayesh ke samne mat kholna, already usse chot lagi hai aur kya bitega uss par jab pta chalega ki tum dono ko pagalpan ke dore pad rahe hai.


(Sakli glare him): Tum apna bakwas band karo. Hume pagalpan ke dore nhi Tumhe pad rahe hai jo sach bhi nhi dekh paa rhe ho.


SHRESHA came and SAKLI sat with Ayesha while CHHOTU sat with Shree and drove to their houses.
SAKLI enquired Ayesha in car about her injury. She informed them and said it is a minor cut which will heal soon.


Here, in ARJUN'S house


Sameer was helping him in packing while he was smiling and this makes Sameer confuse.


SAMEER: Kya hua? Smile kyun kar raha hai. Kahin tujhe Sakshi pasand to.....


ARJUN (interpreted) : Oye, kya bakwas kiye jaa raha hai. Main aur wah bhi Sakshi ko pasand. Yeh kabhi possible nhi ho sakta. Aur mujhe ab pyaar me bharosha bilkul nhi hai aur n hi hoga.


SAMEER: Yaar, tu kab tak uss baat ko yaad rakhega. Bhul kar ek nhi life start kar. Mujhe mera Purana wala Juno wapas chahiye.


ARJUN: Dekh Sam, main wahi tera Purana wala Juno hi hoon and main wapas se pyaar karne ki galati nhi karunga. Aur Tubhi toh wahin ka wahin hai tu kyun aage nhi badta.


SAMEER: Jab tak mujhe mere Juno wapas nhi milta, yeh Sam bhi waisa hi rahega. Tu aage badhega toh main bhi baad jaunga.


ARJUN (took a deep breath): Ab mujhe emotional karna band kar aur yeh bata kya chal rha hai tera aur Ayesha ka?


SAMEER(shocked): Kya chal rha hai matlab? Tu apne dimag se yeh faltu baat nikal de. Humara kuch nhi chal rha.


ARJUN (teasing): Haa, abb meri baat toh faltu lagegi hi. Yaar yaar na rha, bhai bhai na raha.


SAMEER: Abe shaale apni bakwas band kar. Shamjhe ya Samjhayun.


ARJUN: Ab tu mera dialogue mere par hi istamal karega.


SAMEER: Nautanki kahin ka. Ab jaake sho kal jaldi uthana hai. Good Night.


ARJUN: Good Night


NEXT MORNING



All were in Conference Room except Samjun who were in Arjun's cabin.


SHREE: Ayesh, tu ab kaisi hai?


AYESHA: Shree, aise kyun puchh raha hai. Main ekdum mast. Kal bhi toh aisi hi thi.


CHHOTU: Are, kal Tujhe chot lagi thi na. Toh Shree chot ki baat kar rha hai. Tujhe dard toh nhi ho rha n?


AYESHA: Are nhi Chhotu. Main ekdum mast hoon aur meri chot bhi. Aur tumhari Sherni itne chhote choton se todi n daregi.


All smile at her respond.


SAKSHI: We are sorry yaar, Hume pta hi nhi chla aur tujhe puchha bhi nhi.


AYESHA: Are, tu sorry kyun bol rhi hai waise bhi tum dono ne ( point at Sakli) puchha toh tha car me. Main abb thik hoon. Toh pareshan hone ki zarurat nhi hai.


LIZA: Ayesh, apna haath de main teri dreshing kar deti hoon. Bandage change karna bahut zaruri hai nhi toh infection ho sakta hai.


Ayesha smile at her friends concern faces and care. She forwarded her hand to Liza who started changing her bandages.


Mean while, they heard someone's fighting. When they see in the direction from were the voice was coming at first they were shocked and after sometime realised that these two were exactly same as our Shreeza. They saw a beautiful cute girl whose hairs were tied in a pony. She was fighting with a handsome boy with spectacle. They saw that an another girl who wore light blue shirt with black jeans. She was carrying a file with her and stopping both of them.


Our masti gang looked at each other and then at them. The two stopped their fight and looked at each other then at team who were in confusion. The three of them smile. Now, our masti gang were shocked and more confused.


Suddenly Ayesha noticed the girl who was carrying file. She remembered that she is none other than her long lost friend, to whom she met in Training period.


Wah Purvi Malhotra hai, Ayesha ki dost. Dono ek saath hi training period me the. Training khatam hone ke baad Ayesha ko Kerela jana pada as uski first posting thi aur Purvi ko secret mission pe jana pada. Ab dono ek dusre ko 5 saal ke baad mil rahe hai. Ayesha khud ko rok nhi pati aur Purvi ko hug kar leti hai. Ab sab aur bhi zayada shocked ho jate hai kyunki Ayesha kitni jaldi emotional nhi hoti.


Weh alag hote hai aur sabke shock expression ko dekh Ayesha bolti hai.


AYESHA: Guys, kya hua tum sab Hume aise kyun dekh rhe ho? Aur shock state me kyun chale gye?


PURVI (to her friends): Haa guys, tum dono Hume aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Don't tell ki humare sar par horns aagye.


All laughed at her statement and looked at each other.


SAKSHI: Are nhi, aisa kuch nhi hai, bus tujhe hum ne aise emotional nhi dekha n toh isliye.


SHREE: Haa, aur tune kisi ko hug bhi kiya toh wah bhi...


BOY: Pihu, tum tum dono ek dusro ko jaante ho n. Kahin yeh teri 5 saal purani wali Ash toh nhi hai n!


Sab phir se shocked ho jate hai (except Purvi) including Ayesha kyunki usse pta hi nhi hai ki yeh ladka kaun hai aur usse uske baare me kaise pta and Purvi ko wah Pihu kyu bol rha hai?


PURVI: Haa Kabir, hum ek dusre ko pahle se hi jaante hai aur yeh meri 5 saal purani Ash hi hai.


KABIR (boy in excitement): Mujhe pta hi tha. Thank God, Teri Ash tujhe mil gyi nhi toh mujh jaise Masum ko tere ghuson ka samna karna padta.(complaining) Tu toh mujhe apna personal punching bag samjhati hai.


GIRL (huste hue): Kaun masum, Tum. Apne aap Ko dekha hai tumne Chep, ekdum bandaron ke king lagte ho?


KABIR(gusse me): Tumne mujhe Chep kaise bola? Main bandaron ka king hoon toh tum chuho ki queen ho, Chuhiya..


GIRL: Main toh muh se bolti nhi. Tumhari himat kaise hui mujhe Chuhiya bolne ki.


PURVI(frustrated): Tum dono ek pal ke liye bhi shant nhi ho sakte kya? Jab dekho Bablu—Babli ki jhagad the ho.


KABIR/GIRL: Sorry yaar!


CHHOTU: Tum dono toh ekdum SHREEZA ki tarah jhadte rehte ho?(KABIR AND GIRL ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur phir Shree and Liza ko jo ek dusre ko ghur rhe hai) Hai na guys?


SAKSHI: Ekdum sahi kaha CHHOTU. Ab humare pass do do Tom and Jerry hai.(sab husne lagte hai siwaye humare Tom and Jerry ko chhod kar)


LIZA: Haa, very funny. Wah sab chhodo. Hume toh inka naam hi nhi pta(pointing at GIRL).


AYESHA: Are, sorry yaar, main toh puchh n hi bhul gyi, tu yahan kaise? Aur inka naam kya hai?


PURVI: Yeh(pointing at girl) DIVYA SAKUJA hai. Humari Forensic Expert and isaka naam toh pta hi chal gya but yeh hai KABIR KAPOOR hai, humara Technical Expert.


DIVYA: Hume Commissioner Sir ne bulaya tha. Wah abhi aate hi honge.


SHREE: Undercover mission ke liye, correct!


KABIR: Tum sabko pta hai mission ke baare me?


LIZA: Haa, aur hum aaj sab ko good wishes dene aaye hai taki yeh mission jaldi khatam ho...


SAKSHI: And and sab safely wapas aaye.


CHHOTU: Par, Commissioner Sir ne toh kaha tha chaar members sir ko join karenge but tum log toh teen hi ho?


PURVI: Correct, Hume bhi sir ne bola tha Chaar members honge but wahan par hum teen hi hai.


AYESHA: May be Chautha member sir ke saath ho.


DIVYA: Ho sakta hai.


KABIR: Yeh sab chhodo. Can all we friends?


SHREE: Isme puchhne ki kya baat, ab se hum sab friends.(all shake their hands)


CHHOTU: Yaar chalo n Canteen chalte hai. Bhuk lagi hai..


DIVYA: Haa, Chalte hai n. Hum khate khate introduction bhi kar lenge.


KABIR: Aur Pihu ko uski dost ke saath time bhi mil jayega.


AYESHA: Okay, chalte hai but uss se pahle Liz please Mera bandage toh change kar de.


LIZA: Haa main toh bhul hi gyi thi.


(Liza Ayesha ki bandage change karti hai. Sab canteen jate hai and apna food Order karte hai.)


AYESHA: Guys so, main apna Introduction deti hoon. I'm Ayesha Kapoor, Encounter Specialist.


SAKSHI: I'm Sakshi Anand, Criminal Reporter.


SHREE: Shreekant Sen, Technical Expert. Sab mujhe Shree bolte hai, so tum bhi mujhe wahi bologe.


CHHOTU: Main, Chandrakant Patil, Commando of ETF. Sab mujhe Chhotu bolte hai.


LIZA: And atlast myself, Liza D'Cruz, Forensic Expert.


PURVI: And Myself, Purvi MALHOTRA, Encounter Specialist and Ammunition Expert.


SAKSHI: So, abb humare pass do-do Technical Experts, Forensic Experts and Encounter Specialists hai.


CHHOTU: Haa, yaar kya coincidence hai n. Saath main do-do Tom and Jerry bhi.(Sakshi and CHHOTU high figh)


(Unka khana aata hai. Weh khate hai.)


PURVI: Ash, tujhe chot kaise aayi? Tu thik hai n?


AYESHA: Haa yaar, main thik hoon. Wah yeh chit kal case solve karte waqt laga.


DIVYA: Sakshi, tumhe kya hua? Thodi sad sad lag rahi ho?


SAKSHI: Are nhi yaar, main kahan.. nhi main thik hoon.


LIZA: Jhoot kyun bol rhi hai. Saaf dikh rha hai ki tu udash hai.


AYESHA: Udash hone wali baat hai toh hogi hi n. Aaj ke baad yeh apne Arjun ko pure one month ke liye nhi dekh payegi to..


SHREE: Baat toh sahi kahan tune Ayesh. Iska matlab aab se hume Akdu ki daat nhi sun na padega, but...


CHHOTU: Hum unhe bahut miss karenge.


SAKSHI: Kya yaar tum log kya lekar Beth gye. Chalo abb Hume chalna chahiye nhi toh dono Sadu and Akdu yahan tapak jayenge.


LIZA(teasing): Waise Ayesh, kal Rathod sir tujhe kahan leke gye the?


AYESHA (Nervously): Kahan leke gye the matlab? Tu kab ki baat kar rhi hai Liz.


SAKSHI: Are, kal jab hum case solve Kar ke aaye the tab Sameer tera haath pakad ke leke gya tha n. Kahan leke gya tha?


DIVYA(confused): Guys tum log kinki baat kar rhe ho? Hume toh kuch bhi samajh nhi aa raha?


KABIR: Yeh Arjun and Sameer kahin supercop ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE and ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD toh nhi hai?


CHHOTU: Tumne sahi guess kiya Kabir. Hum unke baare me hi baat kar rhe hai.


PURVI: Then, who is Akdu aur Sadu?


SHREE: Purvi, Arjun sir hi Akdu hai and Sameer sir ko hum Rathod sir bolte hai. Aur...


LIZA: Unhen hi hum Sadu bolte hai..


DIVYA: Okay, toh phir Arjun sir ke jaane se Sakshi kyun dukhi hogi, kahin...


KABIR: Sakshi Arjun sir ko like toh nhi karti??


AYESHA: Haa, Kabir. Sakshi Arjun sir ko pasand karti hai.


PURVI: Toh phir mujhe bta Tera aur Sameer sir ka kya chal rha hai?


AYESHA (Shocked and nervous): Mera aur sir ka kya? Humara kuch nhi chal rha. Tu inki baaton par dhyan mat de..


SAKSHI: Agar, kuch nhi hai toh bol kahan lekar gya tha?


AYESHA: Are, bas wah apne cabin me leke gye the meri dreshing karne ke liye. Aur kuch nhi hai.

SAB: Ohhh...


AYESHA: Guys, yeh sab chhodo. Chalo Hume chalna chahiye CS kabhi bhi aate honge.


LIZA: Haa, chalo kahin Rathod sir Ayesha ko dhund n the ho..


AYESHA: Liza..


Sab Conference Room me jaate hai siwaye Ayesha ke jo apne khawabo me kho jati hai aur kal ke apne eyelock ko yaad kar ke mushkurati hai.


AYESHA (MV): Kya ho gya hai tujhe Ash? Pagal ho gyi hai. Uss Sadu ke baare me sochna band kar aur chal nhi toh yeh phir se suru ho jayenge. Yeh toh achhi baat hai kal kya hua uske baare me inhe nhi pta, nhi toh tera kya hota...


Sab apni masti phir se suru karte hai. Ussi bich Commissioner Sir aate hai. Kisin ne bhi sir ko notice nhi Kiya kyunki sab KAVYA and SHREEZA ki fight ko rokne ki kosish kar rhe hote hai.


Commissioner Sir inki fight ko dekh ke shoch ho jaate hai. Achanak Sakshi ki nazar CS ki taraf padti hai jo kisi ke saath khade hai. Uss insaan ki back uske side hai toh wah dekh nhi pati.


SAKSHI: Good Morning Sir.(sab CS ko dekh kar shock ho jate hai)


CS(shock se baar aate hue): Good Morning everyone.


ALL: Good Morning and Sorry sir.


CS: Its okay, but tum sabko dekh kar lag raha hai ki kafi achhe friends ban gye ho?


ALL: Yes sir


CS: Where is your bosses?


SAMJUN: Good Morning sir (sab pichhe dekhte hai jahan SAMJUN khade hai)


CS: Good Morning, Arjun tumhari packing ho gyi?


ARJUN: Yes sir, sab kuch ho gya hai.


SAMEER: Sir, is he the fourth member?(point at boy)


CS: Yes, Rathod. He is (point at boy who is beside him) ACP KAVIN KHANNA. Fourth member of the team.


KAVIN: Hello and Good Morning everyone.


SAMJUN: Hello Kavin.


CS: Purvi, are you and your team is ready for the mission.


PURVI: Yes sir, we are ready. (SAMEER, ARJUN and KAVIN were looking at CS and then at Purvi which questioning look)


CS: Team, meet the new members. PURVI MALHOTRA, Encounter Specialist and Ammunition Expert; KABIR KAPOOR, Technical Expert and DIVYA SAKUJA, Forensic Expert. And Team(pointing at Kabir, Divya and Purvi) meet ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE AND ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD. And rest of you all know.


KABIR: Yes sir.


CS: So, Arjun they are your team. Hume uss head ka jinda chahiye. Aur kisi ko pta nhi chalega.


ALL: Yes sir..


CS: Ek aur baat, ek aur new member join karegi tum sab ko as a Research Specialist. She will meet you at your destination...


KAVIN: Abb ek aur new member sir, and that too a Research Specialist. Hume isaki kya zarurat hai?


CS: Haa Kavin, ek Research Specialist. She will give you information about that gang as she is already on that mission.


ARJUN: Sir, Hume chalna chahiye.


CS: Okay Arjun, ALL THE BEST TEAM.


ALL(our masti gang): Sab apna dhyaan rakhna. All the best. We all will miss you.


PURKAVYA: We will also miss you. Thank you and hum apna dhyaan rakhenge.


Sab ek dusre ke gale milte hai and mission ke liye chale jaate hai except CS.





So, this was my Chapter 4. Sorry for the late post actually I was stuck in some Projects so was unable to post as my examinations are coming.


The new members are introduced in this chapter and Riya's entry will be in next Chapter.


Let me know, how you liked this chapter. If you like it please click on like and do comments. Your comments give me strength to write more.


Friends I won't be able to update any Chapter in upcoming days as my examinations are starting. So, forgive me for this.

Edited by RKSY - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yaar yeh mastikhoro ki toli uff kitna masti tired nahi ho jaate ab samsha ke beech kych hai ki nahi is pe fight aur jis tarah sab sam ke cabin mein jhaak rahe they yeh bhi bhul gaye ki arjun wahi per hai 😂 lo arjun ke saath jaane wali team bhi choree liza aur ayesha ki tarah sab mission per jane ko ready fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update

Love it

Continue soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for the pm & Sorry for being late in reading n commenting.

Inn mastikhor juniors ki masti kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti kya? Itni masti karneki energy inhe milti kaha se hai? Dhakte nahi hai kya yeh log? Upar se hubahu innki jaisi hi kuch aur masti khor juniors ko Arjun ke saath bhej diya....ab ETF ke Juniors ko toh Akdu Arjun ko jhelne ki aadat hai, par ab dekhna yeh hai ki UC mission ke liye join huye juniors usse kaise jhelte hai ya phir yun kahun ki Arjun inn nayi masti khoro ki toli ko kaise sambhalte hai.

All the best for your exams dear. Agle update ka besabri se intezaar rahega.


P.S: Hey plz don't mind, par tumne ekbar Kabir ke surname shayed Malhotra type kiya jab Purvi ne usse baki juniors ke samne introduce kiya, aur jab CS ne introduction diya Samjun ke samne tab tumne Kabir ka surname Kapoor type kiya hai. So, please correct it to avoid further misunderstanding.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Good luck

superb updates

continue soon after exams

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Posted: 3 years ago
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NOTE


Sorry friends, I haven't given any update since so many days as my examinations were going on but now it had been over.


So, I will be back with my chapter 5 very soon. So till then wait for some time, but I promise I will post soon. So, finally your all's favourite Riya's entry will be there.


SORRY FRIENDS ONCE AGAIN.


I WILL UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN FEW DAYS OR PROBABLY BY TOMORROW. SO, TILL THEN WAIT FOR IT AND STAY TUNED.


I HAVE ONE REQUEST, PLEASE COMMENT IF YOU ALL LIKE IT AS IT GIVE ME INSPIRATION TO CONTINUE SOON...


THANK YOU 😊


LOVE YOU ALL❤️❤️


YOUR

RUHI


~RKSY

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