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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Forgetmenot620

You are amazing writer

Love your stories

Keep writing ♥️♥️

Waiting for next.....


Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Gou06

Why can't they show all these in the show?🙄Anyways, you're so good with words that I can see this all happening in front of my eyes❤

Am gonna stay in this alternate universe 😁

Loved it so much and keep writing chechi ❤❤


I'm already in my Alt. Universe with them and Addu!! 😃

Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

This is sooooo beautiful! Simple, romantic, and so real!! I just love this Sairat and wish we get to see some of this in the show. How realistically you have shown their normal everyday life with romance. This seems like an average everyday life of any normal couple. I feel everyone can relate to this kind of life in one way or the other. I so love this! Can’t wait for the next part. Thank you for the tag!!


With the ongoing track, chances of beautiful Sairat moments and their nok-jhok just seems out of question for now. It’s depressing! I wish that more of our lovely and incredible writers in this forum would write ffs, os, and ts or even some romantic drabbles. We so need this right now to get through this track.


Thanks so much!!smiley9

Normalcy is what i miss but then, ITV needs drama to bring in TRP... so i accept it and fill in these moments for myself... I just share what I write for myself.

The beautiful moments will be back... this track is needed for Sai's realization... but it is painful to watch..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: SairatLove007

Lovely and simple.

Loved the progression sairat made in the story.

Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Dee10

This made my heart leap into la la land ☺️

Awwww...Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Wowwww, this was so endearing Pari didi

Absolutely loved this start ❤️

Ek minute, Addu is like his mumma when it comes to matters of sleep, the same way of arm wrapping, the same way of reacting to sleep news coming out of nowhere😆 Perfect genetic product 🤣

I love how you caught this!!! Sochke likhi thi 😃


I guess "love is blind" is just a wrong statement, maybe love has the ability to see things far more maturely and deeply then normal emotions.

Cuz, here the wife knows what her husband's duty calls for, she always knows this, but the best thing is, it's not a dissappoinment which she feels, she doesn't consider it as a partiality which occurs between her and his duty. Cuz, any human at some point would be insecure, here Sai could have been insecure that her husbands time is consumed by his work rather than her. But ,it is not the case here, their love has made it seem like a part of life.

Awww. this has my heart... Sai has the upbringing, and the sense of security in his love to et him be. As does Virat... the freedom they give eachother and the space they give eachother is what brings them closest.


They understand each other, and most importantly, they trust each other. Virat's small gesture that he needs to inform Sai by waking her up actually tells how much he values her, how much he values the interference she causes in his life. A partner who you share your everything with.

And as i feel, true love never siezes from making you curious, Sai can never be selfish to have food alone, and he knows that well, but just the reason that her love for him being the cause of her hunger , makes him always mesmerised. That is the strenghth true love holds.

Very aptly put... it is the little things that touch deep..


There it doesn't discriminate personal and professional life, it just adds on. If you have love, care, respect and understanding balanced out, there is no such thing as personal and professional life, that was how I saw that scene when Virat just joined her in bed. There was no line separating his life into two parts, Sai is part of his life, that's it, she is a part of his human life . And he just wants to be with her . That was so lovely.

Sometimes you just want the contact....


This was such a lovely update.

Sorry I am just overpowered with emotions right now, so I don't realise what I am typing, but this was totally lovely❤️❤️

Awwleeee....


Update the next part soon❤️


Shristhi my darling.. Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Aww !! It's such a beautiful and heartwarming chapter Appu 🤗❤️❤️

Just loved how Sai defends her Virat Sir 😳

Aai - Sai banter was so cute 😙😙

Sai's concern for Virat , her waiting for him , not eating without him ; these little gestures warmed my heart ♥️♥️

Virat's ILU was also a very beautiful moment ☺️


Thanks so much!!smiley9

Sai leaps to his defense usually... and her silence in the current track made my heart break... toh yahan compensate kara...

"I really do.." in Virat's dream hit deep... toh woh bhi khusa diya!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ppnn7191

So beautiful and well written and off course a wonderful break from the onscreen trauma we hav been enduring since the past week!

Please do write more of these and a lot more frequently! Loved every bit of it!


Thanks so much!!smiley9

Do check out my index then...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

So beautiful and so sweet. This is the SaiRat we want to see. Though the current track is sad we will get some lovely episodes later. Every dark cloud has a silver lining.


Thanks so much!!smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Mundane simplicity!!!!?



Teasing yet sticking up .... Fake complain and all true affection!!!!!

Waiting up for dinner and just being there for each other!!!!


Lots of ❤️❤️❤️


Thanks so much!!smiley9

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