Two-Shot : Just Another Evening - Pt2, PG10 - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Thanks you for considering my request and writing such a beautiful piece 😍😍😍

This was so beautiful, heartwarming, sweet and hot all at the same time

Loved how Virat texted Aai for Sai not coming early as she slept late, such a small yet beautiful gesture 🥺❤️

Nice start to their morning, a very good morning indeed☺️☺️☺️

Loved it 😍❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

Omg hawt hawt hawt...

You made my morning nice tooo along with SaiRat's ☺️

Im like not in this Duniya anymore.. Talk to you once I am back from SaiRat Land 😌


BtwYourAniyathiIsn'tThatInnocentSoDontHesitateToHaveMoreMaturedContent⭐️

IGiveYouFullRightsToVazhithettikalMe😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

As always magic

Part two was hot awesome heartwarming

Keep writing and you will have uncountable appreciation and mature tags☺️

Thanks for tagging

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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Awesome

Although it had mature content but it was more romantic than the sexy.❤️


Loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Superb story

Love the way you showed a common day in Sai and Virat’s life

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Amazing both of the parts!! Totally loved a normal evening and a night at their lives.. something I wish to see in the future.


Sai being worried for him and him being busy with his work. And then both of them spending time with each other after a long day ❤️.


I loved the mirroring of their actions while sleeping. These mirrorings are special to me, as I totally love in the show too. The way they subconsciously mirror each other.


Morning activity was really hot 😈. That's how a couple start their day sometimes. It was hot as well cute.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Sweet, hot, magical, romantic, and very realistic at the same time. So beautifully written, I loved this part. I hope you keep writing more as you have a beautiful gift of writing emotions so well that it reaches the audiences heart. A job superbly well done! I cannot wait to read more and more of your work.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

It was a perfect blend of everything ❤

Why are they soooo cute and hot ??😂❤🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

Ahem Ahem☺️

SaiRat ke din ki shuruaat☺️

HOT update🙈🙈🌡🔥

#DeliciousMorningBreakfast

#DinKiShuruaatInTheBestWayPossible

#SanskaariCoupleGotWild

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Posted: 4 years ago
#80

Amazing chapter Appu ☺️☺️🔥🔥❤️❤️🤭🤭

The way you spin emotions and feelings into words is outstanding 👏👏🥰🥰

So our Veeru can sense Sai's presence while being asleep too 😳😳 that was such an Aww ! moment 😙😙 I can just imagine Sairat sleeping while tightly cuddling with each other


It's the first time you have wrote a mature story right !?!? It was amazing 😉😉🤭🤭🙈🙈

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