Two-Shot : Just Another Evening - Pt2, PG10 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

You are amazing writer

Love your stories

Keep writing ♥️♥️

Waiting for next.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wowwww, this was so endearing Pari didi

Absolutely loved this start ❤️

Ek minute, Addu is like his mumma when it comes to matters of sleep, the same way of arm wrapping, the same way of reacting to sleep news coming out of nowhere😆 Perfect genetic product 🤣

I guess "love is blind" is just a wrong statement, maybe love has the ability to see things far more maturely and deeply then normal emotions.

Cuz, here the wife knows what her husband's duty calls for, she always knows this, but the best thing is, it's not a dissappoinment which she feels, she doesn't consider it as a partiality which occurs between her and his duty. Cuz, any human at some point would be insecure, here Sai could have been insecure that her husbands time is consumed by his work rather than her. But ,it is not the case here, their love has made it seem like a part of life.

They understand each other, and most importantly, they trust each other. Virat's small gesture that he needs to inform Sai by waking her up actually tells how much he values her, how much he values the interference she causes in his life. A partner who you share your everything with.

And as i feel, true love never siezes from making you curious, Sai can never be selfish to have food alone, and he knows that well, but just the reason that her love for him being the cause of her hunger , makes him always mesmerised. That is the strenghth true love holds.

There it doesn't discriminate personal and professional life, it just adds on. If you have love, care, respect and understanding balanced out, there is no such thing as personal and professional life, that was how I saw that scene when Virat just joined her in bed. There was no line separating his life into two parts, Sai is part of his life, that's it, she is a part of his human life . And he just wants to be with her . That was so lovely.

This was such a lovely update.

Sorry I am just overpowered with emotions right now, so I don't realise what I am typing, but this was totally lovely❤️❤️

Update the next part soon❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Why can't they show all these in the show?🙄Anyways, you're so good with words that I can see this all happening in front of my eyes❤

Am gonna stay in this alternate universe 😁

Loved it so much and keep writing chechi ❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is sooooo beautiful! Simple, romantic, and so real!! I just love this Sairat and wish we get to see some of this in the show. How realistically you have shown their normal everyday life with romance. This seems like an average everyday life of any normal couple. I feel everyone can relate to this kind of life in one way or the other. I so love this! Can’t wait for the next part. Thank you for the tag!!


With the ongoing track, chances of beautiful Sairat moments and their nok-jhok just seems out of question for now. It’s depressing! I wish that more of our lovely and incredible writers in this forum would write ffs, os, and ts or even some romantic drabbles. We so need this right now to get through this track.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely and simple.

Loved the progression sairat made in the story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This made my heart leap into la la land ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww !! It's such a beautiful and heartwarming chapter Appu 🤗❤️❤️

Just loved how Sai defends her Virat Sir 😳

Aai - Sai banter was so cute 😙😙

Sai's concern for Virat , her waiting for him , not eating without him ; these little gestures warmed my heart ♥️♥️

Virat's ILU was also a very beautiful moment ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapdance

Such a beautiful take on a slice of life ❤️

Thanks so much! smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Wow! Soo domestic, soo beautiful

The SaiRat I wanna see.❤️

Thanks so much! smiley9


This is soo simple and perfect, SaiRat look beautiful in simple scenes❤️

Virat nuzzling Sai's cheeks reminded me of Sai nuzzling Addu's cheeks before heading for the emergency case. Both Navra Baiko like nuzzling their baby's cheeks

So glad you caught that!!! 😳


You are not alone. I am also quite disappointed with the recent episodes. Can't see my bacchas soo sad, confused and heartbroken😭


#BaikoKeHaathSeKhaanaIsTheUltimateStressBuster

#CallKiyaKaro,WarnaDilBechainHoJaataHai

#SaiRatDeserveOnlyLoveAndHappiness😭


I missed you and your hashtags!!!!



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Posted: 3 years ago
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So beautiful and well written and off course a wonderful break from the onscreen trauma we hav been enduring since the past week!

Please do write more of these and a lot more frequently! Loved every bit of it!

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