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Posted: 3 years ago
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(First try hai bhai log to apni chaplei apne paer mei hi rakhna sab log ok)

"ae bawari manne chai la de"

He checked his bedside clock for hundreth time.

Ye bawari khi kissi se bak bak karne mei lag gyi hogi

"mukhiji chai"

"preeti mukhiyayin kaha hai.. ibb tak so rhi hai ke? "

"ji unko to humne ghar se jaate hue dekha"

"acha tu ja...ibb ye bawari kidhar chal di"

"phone kar lu ke.. Na na usse kuch din naaraaz rehna hai manne tab samjhegi ke kiya hai usne veer nandini ke saath"

After panchaayat in the evening

" Ae bawari... Kahan gyi t.... Yo ab tak aayi na.. "

"sudha... "

" ji mukhiji... "

" yo purvi na dikh rhi manne... Abhi tak haveli na lauti ke"

"woh hum aapko ye purvi ki chitti dena bhool gye the subah ... "

Opening the letter first thing he noticed was that it was stained with dried teardrops.

" mukhiji hum sirf sabki khushi chahte the magar hum kuch bhi karle chahe apni jaan nikaal ke thaali mei saza ke rakh de to bhi sabko kam hi lagegi. Molkki ki jaan jo hai. Hum agar molkki hai to kya hum insaan nhi hai...kya humaare aansoo aansoo nhi... Sab to humpe chilla ke gussa nikaal lete hai..hum kisko baataye ki humei kitna dard hua hai pichle kuch din...Aur priyu ki harkato ki sazaa humei kyu.. Ye kaun sa nyaay hai aapka.. Aapne to badi aasani se keh diya ki kash humse mile na hote kaash humse pyaar na hota..magar mukhiji hamara pyaar na aise switch on off nhi hota..humne jab aapse pyaar kiya to woh hamesha ke liye tha.. Aur ab alvida bhi hamesha ke liye hai.. Bas ek hi vinti hai aapse hamare genda khargosh ka dhyaan rakhiyega..woh roye to unhe bol dijiyega hum unke dil mei hai unke bahut paas... "

"ye bawari ko maine kal nashe mei kuch zyada hi bol diya ke?"

"maayke gyi hogi... Le aaunga ek do din mei... Tab tak yahan mauhaal bhi thanda ho jaaega"

Tring.. Tring..

"hello... Haan thanedaar bol"

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Nicely written dear..🥺

Itna chota sa hii kyu.. 🥺

So viru ko laga iss baar bhi maaf kar degi bawari..abhi bhi chaud dikha raha banda..🤦‍♀️😡

Bawari chali gayi.. Sahi kaha usne.. Kadar hii nahi hai uski.. Ab hogi kadar mukhiji ko. Jab bawari na milegi..😡


So agle part mai realise hoga viru ko.. 🥺

Plz update soon.. ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kenika

Nicely written dear..🥺

Itna chota sa hii kyu.. 🥺

So viru ko laga iss baar bhi maaf kar degi bawari..abhi bhi chaud dikha raha banda..🤦‍♀️😡

Bawari chali gayi.. Sahi kaha usne.. Kadar hii nahi hai uski.. Ab hogi kadar mukhiji ko. Jab bawari na milegi..😡


So agle part mai realise hoga viru ko.. 🥺

Plz update soon.. ❤

Yep realise hoga what he lost..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: carljung

Yep realise hoga what he lost..

hona bhi chahiye.. Rona bhi chahiye.. Bas jyada mat rulana... 🥺😋
Edited by kenika - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Short but sweet, I mean sad. It's true what she said, does she not have feelings?

Waiting to read more.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kenika

hona bhi chahiye.. Rona bhi chahiye.. Bas jyada mat rulana... 🥺😋

Mera na ek ye issue hai ki mei khud ki hi story se bore ho jaati hu bahut jaldi... So ye wala viru thode din chhutti pe gya ab baad mei royega

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Posted: 3 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: carljung

One shot

(First try hai bhai log to apni chaplei apne paer mei hi rakhna sab log ok)

"ae bawari manne chai la de"

He checked his bedside clock for hundreth time.

Ye bawari khi kissi se bak bak karne mei lag gyi hogi

"mukhiji chai"

"preeti mukhiyayin kaha hai.. ibb tak so rhi hai ke? "

"ji unko to humne ghar se jaate hue dekha"

"acha tu ja...ibb ye bawari kidhar chal di"

"phone kar lu ke.. Na na usse kuch din naaraaz rehna hai manne tab samjhegi ke kiya hai usne veer nandini ke saath"

After panchaayat in the evening

" Ae bawari... Kahan gyi t.... Yo ab tak aayi na.. "

"sudha... "

" ji mukhiji... "

" yo purvi na dikh rhi manne... Abhi tak haveli na lauti ke"

"woh hum aapko ye purvi ki chitti dena bhool gye the subah ... "

Opening the letter first thing he noticed was that it was stained with dried teardrops.

" mukhiji hum sirf sabki khushi chahte the magar hum kuch bhi karle chahe apni jaan nikaal ke thaali mei saza ke rakh de to bhi sabko kam hi lagegi. Molkki ki jaan jo hai. Hum agar molkki hai to kya hum insaan nhi hai...kya humaare aansoo aansoo nhi... Sab to humpe chilla ke gussa nikaal lete hai..hum kisko baataye ki humei kitna dard hua hai pichle kuch din...Aur priyu ki harkato ki sazaa humei kyu.. Ye kaun sa nyaay hai aapka.. Aapne to badi aasani se keh diya ki kash humse mile na hote kaash humse pyaar na hota..magar mukhiji hamara pyaar na aise switch on off nhi hota..humne jab aapse pyaar kiya to woh hamesha ke liye tha.. Aur ab alvida bhi hamesha ke liye hai.. Bas ek hi vinti hai aapse hamare genda khargosh ka dhyaan rakhiyega..woh roye to unhe bol dijiyega hum unke dil mei hai unke bahut paas... "

"ye bawari ko maine kal nashe mei kuch zyada hi bol diya ke?"

"maayke gyi hogi... Le aaunga ek do din mei... Tab tak yahan mauhaal bhi thanda ho jaaega"

Tring.. Tring..

"hello... Haan thanedaar bol"

Yeh accha hai👏..lekin aise beech mein kyu chod diya..mujhe Viru ki tadap dekhni hai😏


" hamara pyaar aise switch on off nahi hota" kya line hai🙃

Edited by PSP07 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Welcome to writer's club dear 🤗

You started with a good shot... Short but crisp.👍🏼


"Humara pyaar switch ki tarah on off nhi hota" yaar this line touched me !!

"Hum chahe apni jaan bhi thaali me saja le rakh de sabko kam hi lagegi" -- sach hai ye !! No body bothers about her sacrifices

"Humne kitna dard saha hai in dino..." Bechari 🤧

Sab usko suna dete hai, wo kisko bole... Aur jise sunna chaiye tha usne bhi disown kar dia !!


Very well written 🤗

Tumhare dialogues me bhot dum hai 👏

Do continue... Keep writing 😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: PSP07

Yeh accha hai👏..lekin aise beech mein kyu chod diya..mujhe Viru ki tadap dekhni hai😏


" hamara pyaar aise switch on off nahi hota" kya line hai🙃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Suppss

Welcome to writer's club dear 🤗

You started with a good shot... Short but crisp.👍🏼


"Humara pyaar switch ki tarah on off nhi hota" yaar this line touched me !!

"Hum chahe apni jaan bhi thaali me saja le rakh de sabko kam hi lagegi" -- sach hai ye !! No body bothers about her sacrifices

"Humne kitna dard saha hai in dino..." Bechari 🤧

Sab usko suna dete hai, wo kisko bole... Aur jise sunna chaiye tha usne bhi disown kar dia !!


Very well written 🤗

Tumhare dialogues me bhot dum hai 👏

Do continue... Keep writing 😊😊

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