One shot Ff - Page 3

Originally posted by: carljung

Ha maine bola tha ek hi din mei sab episodes daal de voot ko

Apamaan ghor apamaan😱..iss vootiya ki itni himmat aapne bola or isne suni nahi..mein toh bolti hu dharna ke aao iske office ke saamne🤣

chalo aaj ke liye itna hi manoranjan baaki epi aane ke baad

bye

Separation track pe ff😭 but I'm glad ki likha aapne😳

Itna talent h humare forum mei yrr..chupa ke kyu rakhte ho sab🤷😂

This was soo well written yrr👏 specially every line in purvi's letter👏 soo good & soo truee👍

Ese hi likhte raho & do update soon😳

Kudos!💃

Maine do video post ki hai..Molkki forum creation mein..koi kuch feedback dena chahta ho toh de dena🙃

Yoooooooo

Dr. Sahab

Need the next part right now 😳❤️

Wah wah sab Talented hai yaha

Kahan chupe hue the...You are such an Awesome writer ..🤗❤️❤️

This is so beautifully expressed...Finally Vir will realize what he has lost...And will repent...😭

Loved strong Purvi who isn't ready to take more sh*t from him...👍🏼😒

But this was a small part...Next time thoda lamba please....❤️😳

Lovely 👍🏼

Everyone coming up with great stories with this separation

Hopefully Saba writes something as well as this forum

Accha likha hai. Dialogues acche hai tumhare. Keep writing more. Ab bas yahi mat ruk jana. Mujhe aur padhna hai.😆

Per ye itna chota kyu likha. I m waiting for next part.❤

Aur priyu ki harkato ki sazaa humei kyu - This was Purvi's trigger point of anger! This was a big jolt for her.

It is really extremely well written! You conveyed Purvi's inner turmoil in a beautiful manner

You are a very competent writer, who has the ability to get into the skin of your characters, and speak as they would speak.

Then again, it is not easy to write so much of Hindi without making a single mistake. You have managed that too.

So, I hope you will write more!

Sorry forgot to tag you