Fatejo Short story on upcoming- THE TRIP!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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He was restless. Fingers still crawling on the phone wondering

Shall i call her !

He had been ringing her number every hour since she left

Missing her badly!

Being with her enabled him to overcome his sorrows from his ex lover's betrayal who unfortunately was none other than her selfish childish sibling. A vast difference between both sisters

Tejo!

His sweet innocent wife!

She was sober, wiser , beautiful and humble. Yet he didnt fall for her. He repented deeply for loving her sibling instead

The biggest mistake of his life!

She was his companion of every seconds that past after their forced marriage to save families' honour and mend his sorrows that so much so parting ways with her just for few hours was devastating.

Suffocation!

She was his oxygen!

The left chambers of his heart that pumped the fresh clean blood through his body. He couldnt breath .

Sinkng deeply under the layers of an ocean!

Titanic!

A more definable word that represented his state

I am sinking like the British Ship!

He thought to himself while dialling her number. She did not answer. Instead a voice record seeking for a message

He rang twice and then walked towards the roof for his daily practice. The academy was closed for renovations for three days in a row and Buzo will only be able to accompany him later in the evening. Tejo left at the early hours of the day only to return almost midnight.

Minutes later

Ringg

It was her.

Tum kya kar rehi ho! He asked anxiously to which she replied excitedly

We are exploring the factory side now. So i am busy . Can u call me a little while later pls!

Before he could answer

She hung up!

He frowned. Why could i not go with her for

The trip!


A flashback of two days

Tejo was given the responsibility to assist a college trip to a factory area with her colleague Ajay Mishra who taught mathematics to engineering students. They didnt know each other well as Ajay was still new to the college

and as they were the only teachers available the management decided them to be on board with the students for the trip


Fateh was annoyed and requested to tag along giving excuses he would be bored doing nothing at home but in actual was uncomfortable with the fact of the male lecturer accompanying her for the trip. A clear definable word

Jealousy!

She was too naive to notice and told him she had to compel to the regulations

Husbands not allowed to tag along for college trips!

OUCH!!!

screams of horror in his ears

That was like an arrow piercing through his heart


The trip!

Was killing him inside .An hour passed and he decided to ring her again

Fateh!

She said excitedly after picking up at the first ring.

I cant tell u how interesting it was !

He sighed to himself thinking

And i cant tell u how much i missed u!

She continued still excited

U know what Ajay did!

What! He enquired nervously

He went all the way to the townside to buy me a tasty chinese meal as they only served burgers here at the factory cafeteria. How sweet of him

OUCH!!!

That screams again and this time louder. An arrow piercing through his heart

Disappointed he said

Why did u trouble him. Could have just eaten the burger!

She continued excitedly

I told him but he wanted to have chinese instead and decided to purchase for me as well. And u know what else he did!

What! He was getting more nervous

I slipped and twisted my ankle and he went down town again all the way to the pharmacy purchasing an ointment to rub on my swollen ankles. I feel better now!

OUCH!! That screams again with an arrow to his bleeding heart

And u know what else he did!

what!! He was more and more nervous

He supported me to walk as well!

OUCH!!

The screams getting louder as another arrow penetrated his bleeding heart

Ok i have to go now ! He decided we go downtown for dinner again. There are variety of restaurants there. !

I cant talk long. Phone battery dying and i forgot to bring along the charger. Ajay's phone also facing the same issue

OUCH!!!

He was dying with the screams as well with yet another arrow through his very.wounded.heart

Line disconnected

His head spinning felt the ground shaking beneath his feet when a voicd interrupted

Kya hua itna ghebraya hua kyun hai!

Buzo enquired anxiously seeing the

bharah bejha topdha!

of his friend. The red face like someone barbecued him in the tandoor pit!

A version of tandoori chicken. Red as ever!


He ran down the hallway with Buzo rushing behind in order to collect the car key

To fetch her!

Cant bear the fact that she was getting sweet favours!

He helped her to walk!

Where did he hold her!

The shoulder!

The arm !

The waist!

Aaahhhhh!

He was annoyed like hell

Ruk jao! U cannot go! College regulations! Buzo held his arm tightly struggling to pull him towards his room

Chod mujhey vo sala mathematics teacher meri bholi bhali biwi key sath ziada sweet ho reha hain!

Apney sath bheganey ka formula sehi istimal kar reha hain! Uski toh!

Chod mujhey! Chod!

Arey chup kar!

Buzo pushed him towards the bed locking the door of the room

Kisney bola tha tujhey hero ben ney key liye tejo bhabhi ko job pey leganey key liye! Ab bugat!

Aisa hai college mey kam karti hain toh trip pey jaana hota hain aur agey bhi aisa hoga. Aur vo Ajay jo hain only favour dey raha hain. Nothing else!

Buzo consoled the irritated fateh who was sitting restlessly on his bed

Yehi toh problem hain!

Favour dey raha hai!

Itna sweet kyun ho raha hain!

What is he upto!

Fateh frowned

Arey chill kar!

Dont think negative!

Be positive!

Tejo bhabhi can take care of herself and kuch.hi genton mey wapas ajayegi!

Buzo replied calmly to which the much annoyed fateh continued

Genta toh mera bhej raha hain soch soch key dono key bich mey kya ho raha ho ga!

Meney McDonalds liya hain abhi lata hun. Kuch khaley!

Dimaag tendha ho jaiga!. Buzo rushed towards his car to collect the packed fast food

Virks were out attending a wedding reception

He frowned as a text message came in minutes after he had his dinner

Sorry fateh i had to put up a night here. The tour bus engine broke down and we are stranded. Will be back in the morning. Accomodation already arranged at a nearby hotel.

Buzo and fateh played video games and were enjoying the moment when her next message made him

freak out!

All rooms fully booked only one left so Ajay and i had to share one . But dont worry he requested for an additional bed to make ourselves comfortable!

OUCH!!

The screams too loud hitting his ear drums real hard and heart half damaged with too many arrows penetrating at the same time

My wife with another man in the same hotel room!

He was getting restless and buzo switched off the lights assuring him all would be ok and surrender to his sleep instead to make him feel better leaving behind

his anxiety!


They were drenched from head to toe in the rain after dinner as they had to walk.back to the hotel as taxis were not available after 11 pm in that area

As they reached the room they decided to change and go to bed exhausted from the full day trip

She was changing in the shower and Ajay was doing the same deed in the room when fateh's call came in

Kya kar rehi ho!

Tired and sleepy she blurted

Kapdey utar rehey hain!

Line disconnected

Her phone battery dead

His heart dead as well hearing her torture filled words

Kapdey utar rehen hain!


Vroooom!

Seconds later fateh singh virk was driving recklessly and speedily like a.bullet train down the road to save his wife's

Virginity!
































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hope makers are reading the forum stories. If they include this for Fatejo😳🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG... THE HELL.... 🤣 WHAT WAS THIS YAAR.... you broke my heart 💔LOL


I was expecting a sweet Fatejo Trip OS but this was hilarious.... I can't stop laughing... you're too good...

Just a quick idea though, can you index all you're writings... they are all so wonderful. Worth reading more than once 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Love this!! It was a treat to read about this jealous Fateh! 🤩

He left at the end for his wife 😆

Buzo being the voice of reason as always

Thank you for the tag! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh god this was hilarious!

Each and every one of Fateh's dialogues against the math teacher had me laughing.😆

Another nice story by you Anita, thank you!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq to all of u for appreciating my work

But makers dont seem to understand this fact that fatejp jealousy track can garner them trps

Instead show the lame jasfa jealousy track instead

Look at last week trp dowm

No one interested

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hahaha,,,,,, you are too much, seriously.... itni creativity aur khurafati ideas aate kaha se hai ?🤣

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