Aazaadi aur Milan| ONE SHOT | OS

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Azaadi aur Milan


The sun had the same colour but somehow the sun was also in grief... The whole city was in pain... Not only the known and understanding people of Tulsipur but also the unknown and dramatic people of Krishnanagar were also in sorrow...


The DAS Mansion was in terror... Thakumaa standing outside was looking at Bondita with pleading eyes... Sumati was covering Bondita's body with her pallu... And there sat Bondita... Completely in dilemma... She just couldn't get what happened now... The wrong person showed up his real colours... But should she be happy or sad...


Chandrachur was roped with the wall and three guard's gun had their target on him...


Someone said it correct.... Absolutely correct... The best source to spread a news is our mouth... Spoken words spread in seconds...


There he came running... He saw her sat broken on the floor.... Devastating views everywhere... Everyone's eyes had the tears of hers.... But she sat without any trace of tears in her eyes...


He went to her... She didn't look at him... She didn't look at anyone... Her focus was on the floor... He went closer... He was about to cup her face when she fell on him... On his chest... Tears rolled down his face...


Tupur and Tapur both were upset with what happened... Tupur had slapped his husband... After knowing what happened...


Anirudh takes Bondita with him to a room... She goes but neither she spoke nor she cried...


"Yeh hua kaise Bondita" asked Anirudh afraid that he might hurt her again...


"Bondita bolo na... Nehi bologi toh nyaya kaise hoga" asked Anirudh pleading in front of her...


Flashback


She returned from a heated argument in the court because of the gender inequality... And saw ARC returning from their haveli... She was left dumbstruck when she saw Thakumaa in tears... She had never seen her crying...


She was about to ask the reason when Thakumaa went inside ignoring her... In fact she was ignoring everyone...


She went to her room and suddenly was dragged by Chandrachur and he was trying to make her his...


He said "tumhare wajah se hi sab kuchh hua hai"

Bondita at first shouted very loudly that every nook and cranny of the haveli heard it... Trying to defend herself she immediately broke the flower vase on his head... Which ragged his anger... And in frustration... He torn down her clothes...


He couldn't do anything further as Thakumaa broke the door and saved Bondita...


Flashback ends


She said it all to him... And he just knew why... He broke into pieces after listening to it... He just couldn't bear the pain...


Ani's flashback


He got the proof passed by Bondita.... He went to Thakumaa and shown her the proofs against Chandrachur...

How he affected both the family


Flashback ends



When he was suddenly pushed away by her....


She shouted " mil gayi khushi... Dushmani nibhaani thi na aapko...... Hogaye aap khush.. mil gayi khushi... Mil hi gayi hogi... Boliye.... Chup kyun hai?? Speak up Barrister Anirudh Roy Chaudhary..... Defend yourself... "


Finally the first and fresh tears rolled down her face... Then she cried and cried and only cried....


Hearing her voice Thakumaa, Sumati, Tupur and Tapur all rushed towards the room and found Bondita on the bed and Anirudh on the floor...


She saw Thakumaa and said " khush toh bohot hongi aap.... Aapka toh naachne ka mann kar raha hoga... Kitna achha ladka dhundha tha aapne mere liye... Aur Tupur kizindegi barbaad karke toh aapne aasmaan chhun liya hoga.... kyun ?? Boliye....."


She was about to continue when Tupur's action took over everyone's attention...


She was removing her bangles... Slowly without any reaction.... She removed all of the bangles... And she wiped off her sindoor...


"Thud" a loud bang... Stroke everyone's ears....


Everyone rushed towards the varanda.... And saw Trilochan Roy Chaudhary with gun and Chandrachur taking his last breathe....


"Mil gayi mujhe aazaadi aur ho gaya tera milan tere apnon se...." Saying so Tupur hugged Bondita and she smiled happily after ages...


Bonjour readers 🤗

Another One Shot😃

I wanted to write an OS on Tupur and I did it 👍🏼

Hope you all liked it 🤔

Do comment🤗

Till then

Happy reading❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Some more tags 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful ❤️

Would have loved a little bit more convo between ani and bon though ❤️

Plz write more:)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: shirin04

Beautiful ❤️

Would have loved a little bit more convo between ani and bon though ❤️

Plz write more:)

I was actually focusing on Tupur so couldn't 😭

I'll write another os their convo will be much there... ❤️

Will write more for sure 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Azaadi aur Milan


The sun had the same colour but somehow the sun was also in grief... The whole city was in pain... Not only the known and understanding people of Tulsipur but also the unknown and dramatic people of Krishnanagar were also in sorrow...


The DAS Mansion was in terror... Thakumaa standing outside was looking at Bondita with pleading eyes... Sumati was covering Bondita's body with her pallu... And there sat Bondita... Completely in dilemma... She just couldn't get what happened now... The wrong person showed up his real colours... But should she be happy or sad...


Chandrachur was roped with the wall and three guard's gun had their target on him...


Someone said it correct.... Absolutely correct... The best source to spread a news is our mouth... Spoken words spread in seconds...


There he came running... He saw her sat broken on the floor.... Devastating views everywhere... Everyone's eyes had the tears of hers.... But she sat without any trace of tears in her eyes...


He went to her... She didn't look at him... She didn't look at anyone... Her focus was on the floor... He went closer... He was about to cup her face when she fell on him... On his chest... Tears rolled down his face...


Tupur and Tapur both were upset with what happened... Tupur had slapped his husband... After knowing what happened...


Anirudh takes Bondita with him to a room... She goes but neither she spoke nor she cried...


"Yeh hua kaise Bondita" asked Anirudh afraid that he might hurt her again...


"Bondita bolo na... Nehi bologi toh nyaya kaise hoga" asked Anirudh pleading in front of her...


Flashback


She returned from a heated argument in the court because of the gender inequality... And saw ARC returning from their haveli... She was left dumbstruck when she saw Thakumaa in tears... She had never seen her crying...


She was about to ask the reason when Thakumaa went inside ignoring her... In fact she was ignoring everyone...


She went to her room and suddenly was dragged by Chandrachur and he was trying to make her his...


He said "tumhare wajah se hi sab kuchh hua hai"

Bondita at first shouted very loudly that every nook and cranny of the haveli heard it... Trying to defend herself she immediately broke the flower vase on his head... Which ragged his anger... And in frustration... He torn down her clothes...


He couldn't do anything further as Thakumaa broke the door and saved Bondita...


Flashback ends


She said it all to him... And he just knew why... He broke into pieces after listening to it... He just couldn't bear the pain...


Ani's flashback


He got the proof passed by Bondita.... He went to Thakumaa and shown her the proofs against Chandrachur...

How he affected both the family


Flashback ends



When he was suddenly pushed away by her....


She shouted " mil gayi khushi... Dushmani nibhaani thi na aapko...... Hogaye aap khush.. mil gayi khushi... Mil hi gayi hogi... Boliye.... Chup kyun hai?? Speak up Barrister Anirudh Roy Chaudhary..... Defend yourself... "


Finally the first and fresh tears rolled down her face... Then she cried and cried and only cried....


Hearing her voice Thakumaa, Sumati, Tupur and Tapur all rushed towards the room and found Bondita on the bed and Anirudh on the floor...


She saw Thakumaa and said " khush toh bohot hongi aap.... Aapka toh naachne ka mann kar raha hoga... Kitna achha ladka dhundha tha aapne mere liye... Aur Tupur kizindegi barbaad karke toh aapne aasmaan chhun liya hoga.... kyun ?? Boliye....."


She was about to continue when Tupur's action took over everyone's attention...


She was removing her bangles... Slowly without any reaction.... She removed all of the bangles... And she wiped off her sindoor...


"Thud" a loud bang... Stroke everyone's ears....


Everyone rushed towards the varanda.... And saw Trilochan Roy Chaudhary with gun and Chandrachur taking his last breathe....


"Mil gayi mujhe aazaadi aur ho gaya tera milan tere apnon se...." Saying so Tupur hugged Bondita and she smiled happily after ages...


Bonjour readers 🤗

Another One Shot😃

I wanted to write an OS on Tupur and I did it 👍🏼

Hope you all liked it 🤔

Do comment🤗

Till then

Happy reading❤️

it was like dhak dhak...dhak dhak....-----------------------------------

i loved it🤗❤️

aise hi likha karo.....❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nish27

it was like dhak dhak...dhak dhak....-----------------------------------

i loved it🤗❤️

aise hi likha karo.....❤️

thank you Nish🤗

Haan aise hi likha karungi👍🏼

Thank you dear

Means a lot ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Itna acha lagra hai to read an OS where CC gets shot 🤣


This is wonderful idea dear! Loved it.


Do continue giving us more OS's like this!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rinnie.

Itna acha lagra hai to read an OS where CC gets shot 🤣


This is wonderful idea dear! Loved it.


Do continue giving us more OS's like this!

thank you Rinnie 🤗

Yeah I'll keep giving such ideas 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I really wanted some shots on tupur's character nd it was perfect Snan 👍🏼

Nd loved it !!!

Would love to read some more from you ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aashi_009

I really wanted some shots on tupur's character nd it was perfect Snan 👍🏼

Nd loved it !!!

Would love to read some more from you ❤️

that means I'm a mind reader 🤪🤣

Thank you Aashi for your kind words 🤗

I would also love to write more for you and other forum members... ❤️👍🏼

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