ShiVi OS- Wasab (Excrutiating Pain) page 2 - Page 2

if he wasn't rude she wouldn't write negative about him.....its his fault....

nice start

Amazing...loved the teaser ❤️❤️❤️

It's going to be emotional roller coaster 😢😢 can't wait to read the next update 😊😘

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Haaye aur kitna dil mein utroge tum Dev? Itna gehra kon mere dil mein utar sakta hai? Aaj bhi tumhen dekha to bas dekhti hi reh gayi. Poori dunya bhool kar. Main kya kar rahi thi, kya keh rahi thi mujhe kuch hosh hi nahin. Kitne pyaare ho tum. Soft spoken, sweet, sober aur ek gentleman. Tum to mere prince charming ho.

Aur tumhara bhai? Huh! Shiva! Kyun hai woh aisa? Kitna dheet hai! Aaj bhi mujhe tum tak pahunchne nahin diya! Aa gaya beech mein. Maine socha tha ki apni is diary mein uski buraiyan nahin likhungi. Par ye mumkin hi nahin. Woh to mujhe pareshan kar ke rakh deta hai Dev. Likhna hi padta hai. Itna harsh hai. Jaahil aur gawaron jaisi harkaten hain uski. Koi ladki kabhi aisa pati na chahegi.

Chalo khair jane do. Main kyun apne aap ke mood ko off karun?

And from that page onwards, Shiva and Dev were both present in her diary. But where Dev was her hero, her life, love and obsession. Shiva was her irritation. She seemed to be disgusted by him, his smell, his clothes. She seemed to have a prob with everything he did. And yet in her whole diary she didn't seem to be evil. Her words showed her innocence and purity and immense love for everyone and everything except him. He seemed to be the only one who didn't have her love and not because she didn't try. She had tried. He had always been a closed off person and especially for her he had seemed to be extra harsh and rude. She had been polite and tried a lot to be accepted by him. He hadn't. And today as he read her diaries he saw how she saw him.

Ahh🥺....The Angst and The pain💔.... Already hooked....."Katta" Waiting( local slang in Malayalam showing desperateness😆)

This was soo beautiful mahiiiii ❤️❤️❤️

Shiva's pain, anguish and helplessnese wass so beautifully described.i could literally feel every emotion.

Raavi's point of view was also so clear.she missed his presence.i loved how she spoke about dev.she being in love with the person she thought he was.

Her entry after the khandar incident.❤️

I loved how the misunderstanding was solved without a confession.👏👏

The last scene was soo cutee and the last line.❤️

PS- I hope the makers show atleast a quarter of what you have written.

Mahi you are the best really❤️ this is everything I wanted..I am so happy 🤗I had thought excruciating pain but this is one of the best things I have read in a long time.

Shiva falling for her and realizing he had always given her full attention. Thank you for the diary thing that he knew he shouldn't but after seeing the hearts he could not stop himself( goodness I am being too jittery about my own diary when it doesn't even contain any such secret - just that it's my own and I don't want people to read it )

Thank you for the Anita Raavi conversation. I so wanted their relation as sisters to be explored and Anita could convince her to give everything a chance and speak about her own experience.

Shiva being drunk and his breakdown 😭

Raavi's disbelief and helplessness to sort out the mess

Both of their pain in the one month🥺

The confrontation was so delicately done ..Shiva thinking of freeing her ..Raavi's disbelief and anger

Raavi confessing all that she has felt for him and finally giving him her recent diary entries ❤️( Does it make me a sadist that I enjoyed burning of the previous diary with all Dev references?)

I loved that dialogue ek diary mere ijazat ke baigair padhi thi ek ijazat ke saath padh le

Finally that last scene and family teasing them..both of them so happy ..thank you for the happy ending mahi and giving full justice to the angst as well..You are the best

Superb :)

This is going to be so intense, poor Shiva💔

This was so so beautiful!

I felt each and every emotion! I could literally take imagine this!

thank you for this ❤️

Loved loved loved it ❤️❤️❤️ so beautiful. 😍😍

You penned down every emotion beautifully 😍😍😍

Beautifully written! Loved it!❤️