ShiVi OS- Wasab (Excrutiating Pain) page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Haaye aur kitna dil mein utroge tum Dev? Itna gehra kon mere dil mein utar sakta hai? Aaj bhi tumhen dekha to bas dekhti hi reh gayi. Poori dunya bhool kar. Main kya kar rahi thi, kya keh rahi thi mujhe kuch hosh hi nahin. Kitne pyaare ho tum. Soft spoken, sweet, sober aur ek gentleman. Tum to mere prince charming ho.

Aur tumhara bhai? Huh! Shiva! Kyun hai woh aisa? Kitna dheet hai! Aaj bhi mujhe tum tak pahunchne nahin diya! Aa gaya beech mein. Maine socha tha ki apni is diary mein uski buraiyan nahin likhungi. Par ye mumkin hi nahin. Woh to mujhe pareshan kar ke rakh deta hai Dev. Likhna hi padta hai. Itna harsh hai. Jaahil aur gawaron jaisi harkaten hain uski. Koi ladki kabhi aisa pati na chahegi.

Chalo khair jane do. Main kyun apne aap ke mood ko off karun?

And from that page onwards, Shiva and Dev were both present in her diary. But where Dev was her hero, her life, love and obsession. Shiva was her irritation. She seemed to be disgusted by him, his smell, his clothes. She seemed to have a prob with everything he did. And yet in her whole diary she didn't seem to be evil. Her words showed her innocence and purity and immense love for everyone and everything except him. He seemed to be the only one who didn't have her love and not because she didn't try. She had tried. He had always been a closed off person and especially for her he had seemed to be extra harsh and rude. She had been polite and tried a lot to be accepted by him. He hadn't. And today as he read her diaries he saw how she saw him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mahi ..all your stories make me go through a tornado of emotions and now you have named your story excruciating pain😭 I should let this one go to keep myself happy but I have realised I like to be heartbroken so I will read it( as if I could have stayed away 🤣)

PS please mahi healing process bhi dikha dena ..and ending happy de dena ..please please

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Emotions ka volcano erupt hone wala hai🔥

Bahut pyaara teaser, I really like it❤

Excited for this one..

Meriii Maahiii😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting teaser👏

This story seems to have lot of emotions like your rest of stories

Waiting for first part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waah 👏👏

Kya likha hai

Aap teaser pe hi maar dalo hume

Waiting for the emotional tornado🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Koi ladki kabhi aisa pati na chahegi.


My heart is broken 😭🥺

Pls update soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ohhh mannn.🥺🥺

I can actually imagine raavi writing all this in her diary.

Shivaaa💔💔

This is going to be an emotional roller coaster.

*Buckling up*

Thank you soo much for writing something on this.

Waitingg eagerlyyy for the first part ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Maahiiii.. this is going to be a tearjerker as usual looks like 💔

"Koi ladki aisa pati nahi chahegi" shiva's heart will shatter at that 😒

I hope we get to see her eating her words in this one! The teaser was beautiful! I can't wait for the whole story! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful Teaser! Looking forward to read the complete OS!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mahhiiiiii🤗the teaser was so heart wrenching...💔

My Shiva is shattered😭

I really wish we get to see Raavi moving mountains to get back her Shiva

Itna harsh hai. Jaahil aur gawaron jaisi harkaten hain uski. Koi ladki kabhi aisa pati na chahegi.

These lines broke my heart...My Shiva💔

We are in for an emotional rollercoaster this time...I am waiting for the next update....Update soon❤️

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