RAGHVI DRABBLES.. (DRABBLE 10 ON PAGE 25) ( 15 November ) - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Okay so i tried my level best but i couldn't get myself to forget that Kitchen scene BTS that got stolen from us. I thought a bit about it and here's my take of still fitting it into the story line. This is set up after Saturday's episode, all the tickling and recording drama is already over.


DRABBLE 3 : A PROMISE


It was a decent morning in the RR mansion this time. Decent because Kirti was still asleep so no one had to listen to the typical Nibba-Nibbi morning wishes. Amma was already out for pooja quite early in the morning and Farhad was still unwell so no third party disturbance as the adorable couple slept peacefully. The sunlight wasn't harsh but bright enough through the curtains to illuminate the room a bit. Pallavi ad always been a light sleeper when it came to lights, even a little flick and her mind would wake her up so currently as she groaned at the contact of the sudden light that penetrated inside her room. She tried pulling up the duvet to her face only to find the task a lot difficult that it was supposed to be.

Damn was this duvet filled with dumbells. she cursed.

As the weight of those dumbells shifted on her due to the sudden pull of the duvet, her eyes widened open in the fear of an animal above her but fortunately it wasn't some wild animal or a cute puppy, rather than anything cute it was actually her husband who had recently found a new to grant him a peaceful sleep everynight. Partially lying on her.


Everynight since the past week, her husband would get back in the room late night after work, grab his PJ's and would fall partially ontop of her and partially on the bed, snuggling deeper into her waist and would doze off into some wonderland. It had become a task or rather a personal gymming session for her every morning to get off from his grip and leave the bed. So that's what she did again, dried slipping away his weight from her only to make him snuggle more as he moved a bit up from her waist. Her cheeks flushed when she saw him smile in his dreams as soon as she touched his arm, ruffling his hairs she did the last thing she does everyday. Called out to him in a sweet tone.

"Raghav. Utho subah ho gayi hai." she spoke in a soft voice moving her fingers in his hair.

"Sone do na Saree ka dukaan aur tum bhi so jao. " he turned his face towards to door away from her.

"Raghav tum so sakte ho lekin mujhe bahut kaam hai. Amma ke mandir se aane se pehle naashta bhi banana hai." she reminded him.

"Han aur uske liye main Reddy ko salary deta hai." came a groan from his side, "Lekin tum toh sunega nahin." he left his grip on her swiftly sliding onto the bed.

"Banata wahi hai main bas help karti hoon kyunki mujhe achcha lagta hai." she patted his back to which he dismissed her with his hands and she went to get freshen up laughing at his kiddish antics.


Pallavi examined the kitchen, it had been a week and a hald since they got settled back in this house but she was still not sued to all the modern appliances and wierd gadgets of his kitchen. Today she had planned to make a cake from him that got ruined last night because well as he had cutely said it earlier, he wanted her to make it the day she thinks that he deserves it and with all the recent happenings because of Ved. he had very well been occupied to keep his family safe so he definitely deserved some sugar rest.

"Ma'am kuch chahiye aapko." came Reddy's voice from the counter as he made dosa's for breakfast.

"Cake bana hai." Pallavi gave a sheepish smile.

"Aap oven use kar sakti hai. Waise bhi abhi uska koi kaam nahin hai." Reddy smiled helping her out with the ingredients.

Pallavi glanced at the high tech oven infront of her. Well she had never used one before but what could go wrong? Right?


Raghav buttoned his waistcoat as he looked arounf for his watch. Ever since Pallavi had walked into his life, she had basically taken over it and turned it into a systemized order rather than a mess. So now all his morning requirements were out and arranged before he came out from the washroom. He didn't have to worry about any file or call out for his servants because his wife was a perfectionist in her work. His Wife. There was that word that made his stomach churn in pure happiness. She was a part of his life. A more prominent one. But the recent stress had worn him out, everytime he tried to tell her the truth, something or the other would intervene and now his confidence had given up and his selfishness had taken over. He wasn't gonna let anybody ruin the things between them. She would never know the truth.

His thoughts were interrupted with a message notification on hs phone. A look at the screen and his mood went from a happy spongebob to an angry bird.

Kya hua abhi tak nahin bata paya na bhabhi ko. Tension not maine saara intezzam kardiya hai. Akhir main tera best friend jo hoon. Pray karunga ki woh iss sadme se jaldi bahar aa jaye.

- VED.


The message made his blood boil so he quickly grabbed his coat and dashed out to put a final end to this pathetic misery. He stopped Naidu at the staircase as his eyes searched for his wife.

"Pallavi ekkada undi? (where is Pallavi)" he asked.

"Ma'am toh kitchen main hai." replied the servant to which he gave a nod and made his way down trying to contact Farhad.

The sudden mist blurred his vision as he looked around. The hall was a blur and the smoke grew more.

What is this? , he thought and then Ved's message played on a loop in his mind.

Had that idiot done something? Was his Pallavi in danger?

Raghav ran towards the kitchen, the source of the smoke. He prayed to venkateshwara to keep his wife safe as he cursed ved simultaneously.

The scenario int he kitchen kitchen shocked him as he saw utensils lying around and the smoke getting denser. He quickly turned on the exhaust as he called out for his better-half.

"Pallavi! Pallavi! Kidhar hai tum? Pallavi!" he called out making his way to the counter.

"Kya hua Raghav idhar hi toh hoon." Pallavi stood up from behind the counter, something burning in her hand with a lot of smoke coming out. He released the breath he didn't knew he was holding as she grabbed her close to him, pulling her in a hug as soon as she kept the hot burning tray.

"Thank god tum theek hai." he sighed.

"Mujhe kya hoga Raghav." Pallavi replied in confusion but still happy that she got to inhale his scent.

"Mereko laga tumko woh-" Raghav pulled awy but stopped midway as he realised that he was gonna tell her about Ved.

"main kya?" she asked.

'Kuch nahin. waise yeh kya kar raha tha tum?" he looked around.

"Protein cake banane ki koshish." she gave a cute pout. She had tried her best but damn the oven.

"Mera liye?" he asked in shock.

"Nahin Naidu ke liye. veda Manus. ofcourse tumhaare liye. Ab tumne hi toh bola tha ki jab lage ki tum iss cake ke layak ho toh dobara banaun toh-' Pallavi blurted like she always does and stopped when she saw him all surprised.

Raghav finally noticed the look of her wife. Flour all over and in a cute aprin. She looked like an angel. Her hands covered with the batter and that look that she gives him everytime she blurts out something she wasn't supposed too.

"Toh tum ek cake ke liye poora ghar jala diya." he teased.

"Oh hello meri koi galti nahin hai. Woh toh maine kabhi oven use nahin kara hai isliye galat setting ho gayi. Upar se yeh koi normal oven toh hai na Raghav rao ka super high tech oven hai toh iski manuel bhi online nhin mil rahi thi." she turned her face annoyed that he was laughing at her.

"Saree ka dukaan tum na." he turned her to face him and the air made her hair fall on her face. he smiled at how it annoyed her so he brushed the strands lighting by his hands taking them behind her earlobe as softly as he could. the sensations made her inhale a sharp breath as she looked deeper into his eyes. Raghav rubbed his thumb on her cheek as he stepped a little closer taking in her fragrance. Jasmine.

He loves it when her aura grabs his senses, something that had started way long back since the day she met. The memories of that day was still frsh in his mind and so were the happenings of the unfortunate night 2 years back. The thought of blood on his hands made him pull it back only to be grabbed by hers as she stopped him from moving away.

"Raghav. Aaj nahin. Maine wada kara tha na ki tum mujhse kuch bhi share kar sakte ho." she spoke in a soft voice with sincerity in her eyes.

"Kuch bhi." he asked unsure that somebody could actually trust him.

"Kuch bhi." she replied with a smile and it opened his heart of the cage from his guilt.

"Toh main bhi promise karta hai ki main tumko sab batayega Pallavi. Bahut jaldi." he promised.

"Aur main uss waqt ka intezaar krungi." she squeezed onto her grip on his hand as he stepped closer.

"Main sab theek kardega." he whispered standing closer to her as he softly kissed her forehead, " Main tumse kabhi alag nahin hoga."

The honesty in his voice was evident but along with it was something more. A fear of something or so she thought.

"Kabhi nahin." she smiled as he looked down on her.

She knew whatever it was, it was something big but she also knew that the person here was raghav. Someone she was gonna trust no matter how dark things would get. She was gonna be his light, a light that would never fade away.


Thank you for reading.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Nicely Done, Dear!!

This was a pretty good way to give us our beloved scrapped scene. Like it's in perfect sync with the flow of the piece here


You also gave us the fantasy of Raghav actually sleeping like that on Pallavi everyday, Haaye ....if this happens everyday I think quite a few of us would be dead in the next few days😆


The last part was so well written, I could properly imagine them playing it out onscreen.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely..thanks for writing as we were made fools in the show by the editors by editing the scene so you have made the day

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

The whole bts was beautifully turned into a story

I loved it.

New bed of Raghav---thank you for fuelling the imagination that each night they dont show on TV, Raghav sleep like that😆

the last moment--between them from putting hair behind ear to holding hands and promising each other--all so brilliantly written

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it

sooooo gooood


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Originally posted by: SONIA441

Nicely Done, Dear!!

This was a pretty good way to give us our beloved scrapped scene. Like it's in perfect sync with the flow of the piece here


You also gave us the fantasy of Raghav actually sleeping like that on Pallavi everyday, Haaye ....if this happens everyday I think quite a few of us would be dead in the next few days😆


The last part was so well written, I could properly imagine them playing it out onscreen.


I was super annoyed with how they had cut scenes specially the kitchen one. I am so glad that you liked this one.

Of course Raghav will sleep on his Saree ka dukaan every night after all she is his favorite 'Gadda'

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Lovely..thanks for writing as we were made fools in the show by the editors by editing the scene so you have made the day

Thank you.

I am happy that you liked it. 😊

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Originally posted by: ReemShah

The whole bts was beautifully turned into a story

I loved it.

New bed of Raghav---thank you for fuelling the imagination that each night they dont show on TV, Raghav sleep like that😆

the last moment--between them from putting hair behind ear to holding hands and promising each other--all so brilliantly written


Thank you so much.

I mean Raghav should have stolen a forehead kiss when she was drunk in the actual scene but nonetheless.

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Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Loved it

sooooo gooood



Thank you ❤❤

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Welcome to the Sunday Special!!

A little backstory to it is that Raghav saved Keerti when Pallavi called the police. he surrendered himself and now he is in jail.


DRABBLE 4: JAIL BUDDIES


Pallavi closed the car door as soon as it haulted infront of the Police Station. There was nothing that she was prepared for today, not at the time when Raghav switched the confession recording with his and not now when the media mobbed her. Asking all sorts of questions about her husband. Thankfully Farhad came to her rescue as he stood infront of her like a shield taking her safely inside the police station.

"Mr. Raghav Rao." she asked as soon as she entered.

"Pallavi!" came a worried voice from one of the cell.

"Bhabhi aap jaiye main idhar dekhta hoon aur phir lawyer se baat karta hoon." Farhad spoke as Pallavi replied with a nod and dashed towards the cell from which the voice came from.


Raghav panicked as soon as he saw his wife walking through the corridor towards him. She wasn't supposed to be here but then she was always the most adamant.

"Saree ka dukaan tum idhar kayko aaya." he asked with a stern look.

"kyunki mera pati ek idiot hai." she snapped back with the same look that he gave her as she held onto the steel bars.

"Tumko idhar nahin aana chahiye tha." he spoke looking deep into her eyes begging her to let go because he can't see her like this anymore.

"Aur tumhe bhi woh sab nahin karna chahiye tha. Dekho Raghav main tumhe koi ilzaam apne sir nahin lene dungi. Abhi Farhad lawyer se baat karke tumhe bahar nikalega aur tum sirf sach bologe." she requested him this time. She was tired of fighting with him. They were supposed to solve things together as a couple but rather they were fighting against each other.

"Aye constable. Isko idhar se lekar jao." he called out for the guy who ran upto them.

"Raghav-" she pleaded.

"Mereko kuch nahin bolne ka hai." he looked away not wanting to meet her eyes.

"Par Raghav-" she tried making him understand her point of view but the constable interrupted her.

"Madam yeh aapse nahin milna chahte hai aur ab visiting hours bhi over ho gaye hai. Aap kal aiyega." he asked her to leave.

Pallavi gave a glance to her husband who turned his back on her trying not to give into her hopeful eyes.

"Tumhe nahin sunni na meri mat suno par main toh apni baat kehkar hi rahungi." she stated at him as she turned around.


In fast steps she walked upto the inspector as the rage took over her mind. All the happenings of the day playing on loop. She grabbed the pistol from the inspector's belt and pointed it at him.

"Are madam yeh kya kar rahi hai aap." the inspector was taken aback from the sudden stunt and so were the other people.

"Aap Raghav ko abhi chhodiye." she told him.

"Madam dekhiye kisike lag jayegi aur maine aapke aadmi ko bola hai ki ab sirf jo kar sakta hai aapka waqeel hi kar sakta hai. Isliye yeh gun mujhe dijiye." he pulled his hand out for her.

"Nahin. Raghav ko bahar nikalo abhi." she moved forward but this was new to her so when the lady constable grabbed her from behind Pallavi dropped the gun.


Raghav was tensed as he heard a commotion outside. Maybe a new case arrived, he thought as his wife's words rang in his ears. The gate of his cell was opened and as he turned around, he came face to face of a smirking Pallavi.

"Tum idhar kya kar raha hai? Isko kyun laaya hai tum?" Raghav asked the lady constable as she locked the doors again.

"Ek on-duty officer par bandook taani hai isne isliye aaj raat toh yeh yahi rahegi." the constable replied and walked away.

"Thank you." Pallavi called out to her as she turned to face her husband.

"yeh kaisa naya drama hai saree ka dukaan." Raghav came close to her in fury.

"Maine kaha tha na ki main toh baat karke rahungi aur ab toh tum yahan se bhaag bhi nahin sakte. Dekho hum dono band hai." she crossed her arms as she gave a playful look to him.

"Pallavi yeh mazaak ka time nahin hai. I am very serious." he pointed his finger at her.

'So am i Raghav." she glared back.


"Anna" Farhad came to the cell, " Bhabhi aap andar kya kar rahi hai?" he asked being confused.

"Wahi toh main keh raha hai. Tujhe iska dhyaan rakhna tha toh yeh idhar kya kar raha hai." Raghav glared at him.

"Anna main toh laqyer se baat karne gaya tha aur bhabhi hume Anna ko bhara nikaalna tha aapko andar nahin bhejna tha." Farhad spoke.

"Meri galti nahin hai ki tumhare Anna itne ziddi hai Farhad. Aur agar yeh ziddi hain toh main bhi maha ziddi hoon." she spoke.

"Toh phir toh ab aap dono ko aaj raat yahi rehna hoga kyunki court band ho chuka hai. Ab jo hoga kal hoga." Farhad rubbed his neck.

"great! Just great." Raghav punched the wall and sat down on the ground.

"Farhad tum jao aur Amma se kehna ki woh pareshaan na hoye." Pallavi told him and so farhad left without any other word.


"Yeh tum theek nahin kara Pallavi." Raghav looked at her as she sat down beside him.

"Toh rok lo mujhe. Mil jaane do asli gunehgar ko saza." she replied in a soft voice.

"Aur woh main nahin kar sakta." he replied.

"Toh theek hai tum apna pyaar azmao aur main apna sach azmaungi." Pallavi smiled at him as she held his hand closing her eyes and keeping her head on his shoulder.

Raghav looked at her as he softly slided the strand of her hair from hair face to behind her earlobe. He wanted to say so many things to her, apologize for hurting her but even he was bounded by a brother's love. He had vowed to protect his sister and he was just trying to fulfill that.

As his gaze went from her to the bench at the other side away from their cell, he saw two contables eyeing at them or rather his wife. He turned to look at their point of interest when he realised what it was. Apparently his wife out of all days had chosen to wear a net saree today, keepings things a little visible for others.

"Waise toh iska khudka saree ka dukaan hai. Itn option hai iska paas lekin nahin isko aaj hi aisa net ka saree pehehnna tha. Are ghar par mere saamne pehenta , isko apne pati ke liye rakhta lekin nahin." he murmured under his breath beaing possessive for her.

He turned with bloodshot angry eyes towards those constables that said ' back off or you won't be able to ever watch anything through those eyes'. And the message was perfectly delivered as the constables looked at anything but them now.

Extending his hands he pulled the coat that he had tossed on the ground beside him in anger when he was pushed into the lockup hours ago and covered her with it, trying to hide her from those hungry eyes and the hungry mosquitos. As he pulled her closer into his arms, he could hear her soft snores, smiling at her sleeping figure he kissed the top of her head and kept his head on hers. A minutes later he heard a soft murmur.

"Main tumhe kuch nahin hone dungi Ghamandi Rao. yeh Pallavi Raghav Rao ka promise hai." she murmured in her sleep snuggling closer to him to which he smiled intervining their fingers.

"Janta hai Saree ka dukaan. Main janta hai." saying so he closed his eyes going back to a peaceful sleep beside his jail buddy.


Here we go again..

Will wait for your reviews...

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