RaghVi Drabble: The Phone Call - Page 3

Loved reading this 🤗❤️

Well written ❤️

Originally posted by: Morphedwings

This was very well written and heartfelt. Keep writing!❤️

Thank you so much ❤

I said yesterday in AT that I can’t imagine Raghvi being separated from each other for long

Atleast one will try and reach out

I’m glad you wrote on similar concept ❤️

Loved the flow of dialogues

❤️

“Come home” was my fav

Well done 👍🏼❤️

Its lovely as usual 💖

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Hi Reem.

Let me start with a doubt. If this is not your good writing, I want to read what good would be! Bcoz, this is freaking awesome!

I liked the simple, small dialogues. No fancy decorated words; felt so normal but had an entire meaning to it.

I also liked how as per their characteristic goes, it was Pallavi taking the first step. To make the call, to say the miss-you, to ask what-do-we-do-now. She is in character, doing these; and she understand RR will be feeling all this and more but wont be initiating the convo.

Loved it.

Will end with a doubt - RR asking her to leave a year before, is this related to the Kolhapur ticket he planned or a random something you wrote on?

Hey Prriyam (I am not sure if that's your name hence addressing you by your UN)

I said it was not good because--I wrote it at the fleet of the moment during the discussion about RaghVi separation in Shivangi's AT

I am glad you liked it that I kept it simple.

I have always felt Pallavi will be the expressive one about emotions and feelings in between RaghVi so hence this.

I am really happy that you loved it❤

This is based on during the time Raghav asks Pallavi to go to Kolhapur---but in this drabble---instead of Pallavi agreeing, she fights back with Raghav and the final decision is that she will stay in Hyderabad only but not in RR Mansion. and I wanted a really good memory for Pallavi to cherish so that she is reminded of Raghav--and nothing sounded better than Raghav singing and since Pallavi is a fan of old songs--she stumbles upon this song while listening to the radio.

About my writings--I have been told Dance of a Lifetime is my best work till now but I love all my works, but The waiting room and Debt remains my personal favourite.

Beautiful drabble Chinmayi!!! 😳

There's a reason I don't like seperation tracks but the kind of scenes we get after they ends are amazing, just like you portrayed here!!!

And yes thankyou for the pm! ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Loved reading it, separation indeed felt to the core! Loved how you weaved it around that one song!

Thank you so much Kiara and I am glad you loved it❤

the karoke session and the song is something which I want to be deeply etched in Pallavi's mind and whenever she listens to the song in future---it would remind her of Raghav.
There are few songs which after I listen to,remind me of certain people and I want same to happen with Pallavi

Originally posted by: sunshine_94

Can’t imagine this way, way too painful

writing simply amazing

Thank you so much Sunshine❤

I am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Evarasha

Humko rula diya🥺

Humko rula diya😭

Bit thank god they unite at end💕🌟

Nice OS Reem🙆‍♀️🙏

I am so sorry Evarasha---my intention was not to make you cry

RaghVi will definitely unite in the end

Thank you so much Evarasha❤

This is awesome👏👏.

separation track could not have a better ending than this.

How Raghav simply asked her to come back without any arguments, any explanations clearly shows they both realise their mistakes without being told and want each other in their life.

You depicted it beautifully👏.

Loved reading❤️.