RaghVi Drabble: The Phone Call - Page 4

Oh Reem when I first read Pallavi was crying I thought Mandaar did something awful...but then ....it was beautiful and so deep😭

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Hey Prriyam (I am not sure if that's your name hence addressing you by your UN)

I said it was not good because--I wrote it at the fleet of the moment during the discussion about RaghVi separation in Shivangi's AT

I am glad you liked it that I kept it simple.

I have always felt Pallavi will be the expressive one about emotions and feelings in between RaghVi so hence this.

I am really happy that you loved it❤

This is based on during the time Raghav asks Pallavi to go to Kolhapur---but in this drabble---instead of Pallavi agreeing, she fights back with Raghav and the final decision is that she will stay in Hyderabad only but not in RR Mansion. and I wanted a really good memory for Pallavi to cherish so that she is reminded of Raghav--and nothing sounded better than Raghav singing and since Pallavi is a fan of old songs--she stumbles upon this song while listening to the radio.

About my writings--I have been told Dance of a Lifetime is my best work till now but I love all my works, but The waiting room and Debt remains my personal favourite.

Reem, yes I am Priyam.

Thank you for helping with the backdrop to the story!

You write really well. Less words and more being said, is a wonderful style. 👏🏼👏🏼

I sure will read the stories you have mentioned; meet you in those threads. 👍🏼

Painful and emotional write up.

Reckless decisions based on half knowledge is far more dangerous n destructive than anything else.

It's good they patched up. Nice work 💞

Originally posted by: sruthysudeep04

It was sooo beautiful yaar... Could just feel it .

Thank you so much and I am glad you were able to feel it❤

Originally posted by: Joyness

Just Lovely

Thank you so much Joyness❤

This is so good I want to cry. 😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Oh my gawwwwdddd yaaarrrrr

amazing amazing 👏👏

Thank you so much Shreyangi❤

(I hope I got your name correct)

Short but charged with emotion and depth. It's no mean feat to capture intense emotion in words Reem, you have done that brilliantly.

Do keep writing ❤️

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

This was so simple and powerful 👏 . It was soo good Reem. You portrayed their angst, grief and longing in short words. That's a huge thing 👏👏.

You have done justice to the story and their characters. Please keep writing 🤗

Thank you so much Amna❤

I am glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: Lisaxx

Thanks for the tag lovee

When will you post Eloquently????
I am waiting for that

This was written so well....I am so glad this did not have a sad ending.

this was really good...and not even from a single angle it looked random

I Loved it Chinmayiiii❤️❤️

I am not going to post that at all

me too

But it was just a random thought which came into my mind

Thanks Lisa❤❤