RaghVi Drabble: The Phone Call - Page 5

Originally posted by: xxStrangerxx

Oh it was emotional 😭yet promising❤️

A small one but quite meaningful👏

You are an amzing writer Reem.🤗

Thank you so much Stranger and I am glad you liked it❤

that's a huge compliment❤

Originally posted by: hapc

Okay one line made me very mad, 'I know it is not that good'. If this is not good then I should delete my drabbles permanently. Such a beautiful story. It broke my heart first and then healed it. I loved the conversation, they didn't say too much but conveyed everything that they wanted too. It's been a while since you've written and I missed your writing. Keep writing more and more, even if you think it is not good because for us your not good is amazing.

No Adu...your drabbles are lovely and really good---dont delete those

this was just a random thought which I got while discussing about separation in Pallavi's AT hence this drabble

I have my exams coming up--so I mostly juggle between there and IF and when I have time---I come here

Thank you so much and that's a really huge compliment❤❤

This made my heart hurt 💔 (in a good way)

You can really feel the pain of their separation. But of course the song would remind her of him, so that she is calling him at 3am just to hear him again 😭

I love this story for many reasons—one of which is the way it depicts love, of even the most ordinary variety so beautifully

Love is magical and worth celebrating. Of course it’s sometimes mundane and boring too.

Pallavi arriving at Raghav's door, taking the first step even after being wounded; to me such moments are the ones when it feels most real, these private wondrous moments, that arrive out of nowhere, the ones that are, more often than not, a little bit scary yet the most fondly anticipated ❤️

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Loved reading this 🤗❤️

Well written ❤️

Thanks Sim and I am glad you loved it❤

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

I said yesterday in AT that I can’t imagine Raghvi being separated from each other for long

Atleast one will try and reach out

I’m glad you wrote on similar concept

Loved the flow of dialogues

❤️

“Come home” was my fav

Well done

I had gotten this thing in my mind only after the discussion only so I put the drabble up

"Come home" has this sense of belongingness in it

Thank you so much Sakshi❤

Such an emotional piece. You wrote Pallavi so flawlessly.

Hopefully they are always together in every high and low and never separate. Hue toh itna late na samjhe..1-2 din mein saath aa jaye.

Originally posted by: Kavita99

Its lovely as usual 💖

Thank you so much Kavita❤

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Beautiful drabble Chinmayi!!! 😳

There's a reason I don't like seperation tracks but the kind of scenes we get after they ends are amazing, just like you portrayed here!!!

And yes thankyou for the pm! ❤️

Thank you so much Dishi❤

it's a wonder that you still remember my name--you must be really good with them

Reunion tracks post separation are one of my favourites however I wish RaghVi to never separate

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Thank you so much Dishi❤

it's a wonder that you still remember my name--you must be really good with them

Reunion tracks post separation are one of my favourites however I wish RaghVi to never separate

I remember the names of my friends always!!

And yes you are Right, RaghVi don't deserve seperation. Their whole vibe together is so lit that even imagining seperation tracks dampen the mood!