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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Really pragya this is so good🐱🐱

Simple and subtle scenes with their emotions is perfect💗💗

I really like your writing way❤️❤️

So atharv blackmailing worked and kalyani agreed to marriage 😐😐

But Malhar as usual bacha lega ani heroine ko 😁😁


Don't take stress pragya if you are not able to Post the chapter we will wait for you don't worry 🥰🥰

If you want to finish this FF then it's ok first work is there 👍👍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Really pragya this is so good🐱🐱

Simple and subtle scenes with their emotions is perfect💗💗

I really like your writing way❤️❤️

So atharv blackmailing worked and kalyani agreed to marriage 😐😐

But Malhar as usual bacha lega ani heroine ko 😁😁


Don't take stress pragya if you are not able to Post the chapter we will wait for you don't worry 🥰🥰

If you want to finish this FF then it's ok first work is there 👍👍


Thank you so much Vanshika. There's a twist in the climax. I'm planning to end this in old 90s miniseries way.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you so much Vanshika. There's a twist in the climax. I'm planning to end this in old 90s miniseries way.

i am waiting 😁😁
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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Chapter-10



Inside Hinjewadi office


Malhar Pallavi ko Anupriya ke cabin me chupte chupaate jate huye dekhta h. Pallavi Anupriya ke system me kuch kar rahi hoti h.


Malhar: "Kya kar rahi h aap yahan par?"


Pallavi: "Kuch nahi...kuch bhi to nahi."


"Aap hi h na vo jo hamare source codes ko rival company ko bech rahi h "


"Nahi to. Kya saboot hai tumhare paas?"


Tabhi Anupriya enters the cabin saying "Saboot ki chinta tum mat karo Pallavi. Mere system me ek security mechanism h ki koi bhi unusual activity hote hi iska web cam apne aap on ho jata h aur yahaan kya ho raha h mujhe sab dikhai deta h.to mrs. Pallavi Deshmukh, Agar zara si bhi sharm bachi ho to khud apna resignation de do. Baki industry se blacklist to tumhe hona hi h."


Inside Casablanca


Anupriya is welcomed with an applause in the cafe.


Sarthak: "Malhar ne mujhe bataya kaise tumne Pallavi ko sabak sikhaya. I'm so proud of you "


"Anu, ab to tum career me bhi itni high position par pahunch gayi ho aur tumse main kuch chupana nahi chahta. I love you."


"Sarthak, maine tumse pehle hi kaha h meri zindagi me career aur aau saheb k alawa kisi rishte ki jagah ki jagah nahi h. And ham itne acche dost hain Sarthak, ek doosre ko samajhte h,. Shaadi ke rishte me baandhkar cheezein complicate mat karo."


https://youtu.be/vHAYKhdJQzs


Kalyani: "Ye kya kapde pehen rakhe h aapne Malharji? Apne aap ko Vampire Diaries ka Damon Salvatore samajhte h kya? Aur ye kya aap cafe me aane vali har ladki se flirt kar rahe h?"


Malhar apne sunglasses ko ghumate huye: "Tumhi ne to kaha tha na Kalyani ki main bahut boring hoon, kisi black and white zamaane jaisa. That I need to change."


Kalyani ne dheeme se bola: "Itna bhi mat badal jaiye Malharji ki main bhi apko pehchan na Pau."


Tabhi Sampada Cafe me aati h.


Malhar ne ek guitar paas se uthaya and he started singing:


https://youtu.be/ZiJgkQLunUM


Kalyani jaanti thi ki Malhar Sampada ke liye Gaa raha tha lekin naa jane kyon Malhar ki nazrein us par hi tiki thi.

Kalyani thinking: "Kyon mujhe Malharji ke badalne se itni problem ho rahi h? Unki fiancee to Sampada h fir mujhe kyon unke kisi ladki se baat karne se dukh ho raha h."


Malhar thinking: "Kis baat ki sazaa de raha hoon main Kalyani ko? Sampada mujhe vaapis mil gayi, mujhe to khush hona chahiye, fir kyun mera dil chahta h ki mujhe Sampada aur baaki ladkiyon ke saath dekhkar Kalyani bhi utna tadpe jitna main use Atharv ke saath dekhkar..."


Kalyani: "Kahin mujhe Malharji se..."


Malhar: "Kahin mujhe Kalyani se..."


Kalyani and Malhar thinking together" pyaar to nahi ho gaya."


https://youtu.be/FrCExzgy95s


Guys this is the penultimate chapter of the FF. Honestly abhi se hi I've started missing you all here. Seriously aap logon ka feedback, FF and episode discussion dekhkar sad se sad din me bhi smile aa jati thi. I'll miss this story and the characters.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Hey Pragya...

Read both updates and it was very beautiful..

Pallavi is caught..

Sarthak proposed but Anu wants friendship only..

KalMa feeling the pangs of love..

All were wonderful..


Take you time to write. Don't stress yourself.

We will miss you too.. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

It’s awesome Pragya

I have read 3 part in one go..



Just loved it..


You always come up with exceptional concepts..



Thanks for it..


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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Pragya this is really nice chapter👍👍

I really like your concept of all stories


Don't worry whenever you will get time you can update your chapters

We will then only

Don't pressurise yourself

😺😺😺

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Final Chapter


Kalyani sea green lehnge me Engagement ke liye taiyyar hoti h. Magar apna makeup khud karne me use problem ho rahi hoti h. Tabhi Anupriya aakar use taiyyar karne lagti h.


"Pata Nahi Kalyani mujhe aisa kyun lag raha h ki is rishte se tum khush nahi ho."


"Kisne kaha main khush nahi hu, aai, dekho main abhi bhi smile kar rahi hoon." Aur is baar Anupriya Kalyani ko aai kehne par jaankar bhi nahi Tokti h.


Tabhi Kalyani Engagement ke liye hall ki taraf jaa rahi hoti h to uska pair fisal jata h lekin Malhar use thaam leta h.


"Malharji, aap meri engagement ke liye yahaan aaye hain?"


"Kalyani, chahe tumhara faisla sahi ho ya galat, jab bhi tumhare kadam ladkharaenge tumhe sambhalne ke liye mujhe hamesha apne saath paogi." Ye kehkar Malhar uska haath chhor deta h.


Kalyani peeche mudkar Malhar par hi nazarein gadaye hue Atharv ki or chali ja rahi thi.


https://youtu.be/MDwVsoIen3k


Anupriya: Atul tum yahaan?


Atul: Yahi sawal to mujhe tumse poochna chahiye? Meri beti ki engagement m tum kya kar rahi ho?


Tabhi vahaan Sarthak aa jata h.


.....


Kalyani ke haath me ring hoti h and Atharv apna haath aage kar deta h.


Atharv in a frustrated voice: Kalyani jaldi karo. Ring pehnao mujhe.


Magar Kalyani Malhar ko hi dekhe jaa rahi hoti h. Atharv jabardasti Kalyani ka haath pakad kar Kalyani ke haath se ring pehenne hi vala hota h tabhi Malhar awaz deta h : "Kalyani" aur uski aankhein me hi Kalyani ko vo dikh jaata h jo vo Malhar se milne ke first day se hi apne liye dekhna chahti thi. Kalyani Atharv se haath churakar Malhar ke paas bhaag jati h aur uske gale lag jaati h.


https://youtu.be/-d-YhYJ68o4


Kalyani rote huye: "Aapko pata h main kab se intezar kar rahi thi ki aap mujhe is blackmail vali shaadi se bacha lenge aur aap the ki Sampada aur baaki girls se flirt karne m lage huye the."


Malhar: "Are pagli. Vo to main tumhe jalaane ke liye kar raha tha. Tumhe pata h Atharv ke saath tumhari engagement ki khabar sunkar mera kya haal hua tha?"


Tabhi Atharv aata h aur chillane lagta h: "Mere se dhokha karegi Kalyani tu?" Aur Kalyani ko strike karne ke liye haath uthata h. Tabhi Malhar uska haath rokkar, uske chehre par ek punch maarta h. "Meri Kalyani par haath uthane ki teri himmat kaise hui?" Aur Atharv ko bahut maarta h.


"Tu bhool gayi Kalyani ki hamare beech kya deal huyi thi?"


Anupriya: "Saarthak ne mujhe sab bata diya h. Mujhe to tumhe dekhte hi shaq ho gaya tha ki tumhare iraade theek nahi h fir Sarthak ne jab tum Pallavi se phone par baat kar rahe the."


Kalyani: "Aai."


Atul: "Magar meri beti ki engagement tootne ke baad kaun use apnayega?"


Malhar: "Main karunga Kalyani se shaadi. Magar abhi nahin. Abhi Kalyani should focus on college and her dreams. Lekin main Kalyani ka intezaar karoonga, chahe meri poori umr beet jaye."


https://youtu.be/AGsn2ycFRqI


So guys this was the last chapter of FF. I hope you enjoyed reading as much as I had fun writing it. It was such a great experience discussing things in this forum. Sach m school ke zamaane ki yaad dila di yaar...

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Pragya this is really nice chapter👍👍

I really like your concept of all stories


Don't worry whenever you will get time you can update your chapters

We will then only

Don't pressurise yourself

😺😺😺


Thanks a lot Vanshika for understanding. It was such a great experience interacting with you all More than the show, I've come to love our forum and the interactions here.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Hey Pragya...

Read both updates and it was very beautiful..

Pallavi is caught..

Sarthak proposed but Anu wants friendship only..

KalMa feeling the pangs of love..

All were wonderful..


Take you time to write. Don't stress yourself.

We will miss you too.. ❤️❤️


Thank you so much Rekha ❣️❣️❣️❣️


It was such a great experience interacting with you all. It's been ten years I've completed school but talking with you all gave me that nostalgic feeling of sardi ki dhoop me ham friends ka ground me baithna and TV show discuss karna, actors par crush karna...

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