The bare back pt 5 onwards

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dear fatejo fans

This series is for a short duration

Just to enlighten our moods coz onscreen is still frustrating

They keep showing lots of craps


Just a brief synopsis

In this os it is shown how fateh is attracted to tejo physically the same way he was attracted to jasmins beauty

Lust was used to bring him closer to her to break the boundary of friendship and starts accepting her as his wife

Jasmins delusion needs to be destroyed instantly so that she doesnt return to him and his attention needs to be diverted to tejo

But it has to be fast

So his grandparents came up with the ideas to lure him towards tejo

The bare back

Well they cant show the frontšŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

So the stupidity and craziness that he will do just to get physically close to her, right now is physical attractiom and theres where he will start developing feelimgs for her

There will be no matured content here only humor and romance with background hindi hits

If only they could have broughy this onscreen was womderful

Part 5 omwards will be in this thread only

For those who wishes to continue reading pls come to thread only

Coming up will be more hilarious

What levrel of craziness he will do to get close to her



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Posted: 4 years ago
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The bare back part 5 contd


Tejo was searching under the car seats for the imaginery cockroach which was not to be found


The others were watching

Mahi scolded fateh

Sharm ani chahiyeh apko jo kam apko karna chahiye vo bhabhi kar rehi hai

Fateh replied annoyed

Chup kar bhabhi ki chamach


All clear but mahi refused to sit in it frightened as hell

Papa ko bolo koi aur gadhi bejvadey

The bird park was 200 metres down the road ,

They decided to walk and fateh told the driver they will take a taxi instead on their way back the driver left


Mahi was holding tejos hand chattting and laughing watching the colorful noisy birds,

Walking behind them he was also enjoying his own personal view through his sunglasses

The bare back

The tune continued

Bare back tera machley dil mera

He shifted slightly her dupatta in the car when he hugged her imoments earlier

So the view was beautiful now

More flesh seen


Bhai agey ajao view bahut pyara hai mahi said excitedly , telling him to walk infront of them

He grinned

Pichey ka view aur ziada pyara hai

Main pichey hi thik hun

Tum agey agey chalo main piche piche ata hun


At 3pm they had lunch at the cafeteria of the bird park and left for home

The taxi came and fateh quickly opened the back door to sit with tejo when mahi said

Bhabhi mujhey abhi bhi coakroach sey der leghta jai

Tejo held her hand and make her sit with herself at the back sit. Mahi was hugging her tightly

Fateh sitting in front annoyed

Aek number ki chipku hai

Iska rakhsha bandhan ka gift cancel

Abhi gher jakey asli waley sey isko deraunga

Kawab mey haddi

Hath pakad key bethi hui hai chipkak chipkak key

Iski toh ,,,


After dinner amrik came to fatehs room

Aur bhai aaj bird park ka trip kaisey reha he asked excitedly

Fateh was sitting on his bed with his phone surfing the net looking for backless nighties for his wife, he couldnt forget the cockroach moment in the car, the warm touch her smell her breath and now thought what if i get more to see at night and without any disturbance, the evil touch prevailed and was getting stronger

Huh

he replied deep in his thoughts

Apka trip kaisey raha , amrik repeated

Irrk thik reha, replied slowly his eyes busy searching for larger dimension back less nighties

Toh kaun kaun si birds dekhi , amrik asked excitedly

Bare back wali , fateh replied not aware of what he said still deep in his thoughts on the phone surfing

Amrik was confused

Yeh kon si wali hai yaar kabhi sunha hi nehin

Bhai kahan dekhi thi apney yeh bird , amrik still confused

Discovery main , Fateh replied spontaneously still with his thoughts on the net surfing for his delusional desires

Amrik scratched his forehead thinking hard very very confused

Itney sare discovery channel dekhey hain aaj tak aesi chidiya ka naam nehin suna,

Yeh bhai kon sa wala discovery channel dekhta hai

Aek kam karta hun internet mey jakey check karta hun

Confused like hell he left


It was past midnight fateh was restless and turned towards tejo, lying beside she was looking beautiful in her deep slumber , if only she wore a backless nightie , he sighed and no kawab mey heddi at this hour,

The cockroach hug moments were wonderful

He could still feel her warmth , suddenly the evil touch conspiring him to move forward , she was close and had his chances now

He removed the pillows slowly and leaned forward

Naah he dropped the idea

What excuse will i give , he thought

A cockroach on the bed

Idea acha hai but she will chase me out of the room for disturbing her sleep

And papa will chase me out of the house

Moments before he went to bed kushbeer lashed out him at the dinner table for being a coward

All thanks to mahi for beating the drums

Tu coakroach sey darta hai nalaik tu boxer hai thodi si sharm kar , biwi key palu sey chipka hua tha , gedha kahin tha

Mahi added ghee to the flames

Aur nehin toh kya , apko peta hai papa bhabhi ko kesey peked rekha tha vo bechari saas bhi nehin ley par rehi thi

Fateh was glaring at her thinking

Terey ko baad mey betaunga bhabhi ki chamach

Kushbeer was furious , he didnt even finish her food

Dada dadi exchanged glances

Mundha kuch ziada phisel geya

Very good plan is working well

Bahut jald i love u bhi bolega

Tejo and gurpreet were smiling didnt know what to say

The incident reminded him to move back and went to sleep finally


Breakfast was special treat for all , gurpreet made gajar ka halwa

Fateh finished two bowls and ran up to his room

Planning to book movie tickets for himself and tejo

Done !

Two tickets for 10 pm show

And got ready for his training

Before leaving he informed tejo

She agreed to it


Throughout the training sessions he was excited giving forward fabulous fists even his trainer complimented

At 9pm after dinner they left for the show

She was enjoying the breeze from her window while he was driving the jeep

Through his sun glasses he was watching her

Her black curles covering her sweet face

Slowly he moved his hand towards the gear box pretending to change the gear so as to brush against hers which was resting on her lap

A soft warm brush

The evil touch prevailed

He was eager to sit in the cinema hall and do the rest

The crave was spicing up his hunger


The hall was less crowded. He sighed with relief

Good for my wonderful deeds in the dark

The movie was interesting its a hindi titled house full four

Tejo was giggling and laughing through out the time

A very smart move

He chose a comedy so she will be too indulged in it being entertained and he could satisfy his desires in the dark and no one would notice

The tune playing in his subconscious self

Kishore hit and also very hot number

Roop tera mastana pyar mera dewana

Bhool koi na humsey ho jaeye


He was coming closer to her inch by inch in the dark

Shoulder brushed with hers

The need was stronger now

Moving his fingers slowly towards her back

His face was close to hers

Those beautiful eyes

She was giggling too much involved in the movie

Suddenly he felt a warm touch

He was glad she responded

It was dark and he was enjoying it

He could feel a tickle on his back

Wonderful warm lustful touches

He closed his eyes

Enjoying the moment to the fullest

Suddenly he felt a hand on his pants zip

He looked down

It was not tejos hand

It was bigger and rougher

He was shocked

Sitting to his left side was a gay

And two more seated behind him

They were pleasurely involved with him

All this while he thought it was tejo

He screamed and ran out of the hall

The three followed chasing him

Tejo followed behind

The gays managed to catch him and were all over him

Tejo rescued him by beating them up with her sandals and

handbag

One was unconscious the other two ran away


Virks couldnt control their laughter

Kushbeer lashed out at him

Tu itna nikamka niklega kabhi socha nehin tha , tu aek national level ka boxer hai aur teen gay ko bhi nehin sambhal paya, shukar hai tejo thi vahan pey nehin to humey muh dikhaney layak nehin choda ulu ka petha


He ran up to his room changed and slept,

Very disappointed

Kya socha tha kya hua

Everywhere kawab mey haddi

Biwi key sath mezey bhi nehin ley sekhta

Acha khasa romantic moment kherab kardiya

Tejo walked in

He was fast asleep

She felt sorry for him

He was so sweet to take her out for a movie

Little did she knew what khicdhi he was preparing and his lustful intentions

She planned to make his favourite dish for him the next morning



To be continurd pt 6 in this thread

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lol Fateh and his kinky obsession. How many parts will this fanfic have?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Lol Fateh and his kinky obsession. How many parts will this fanfic have?


Coming to final part 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Confession karva dena plzz

Edited by AnishaPannu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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The bare back - part 6

This is the end of the os


The next morning fateh had a treat from tejo for breakfast and it was kheer

He melted with her sweetness

Called up his trainer postpone training sessioms

Kushbeer was out of town

He made a list of kawab mey haddis and how to get rid of them for a few days

Mama to be sent to maika , go and see nani

Amrik most of the time busy with college so no problem

Mahi the chipku sent with mama

Dada and dadi request to go to gurdwara to pray for my coming boxing competition


He called his nani and said i missed ap key hath key shekar parey and i am sending mama to collect them from you

same phul patti he did with gurpreet.

She said i will go im a few days time

He said

I already booked ur tickets for today evening, nani missing u so much thats why

He went to dada and dadi room and told them to go gurdwara the next few days to pray for his national championship

They agreed on the spot and even added they will put up in the gurdwara the whole day

He was surprised but glad at the same time

After he left dada smiled

Humney bhi jawani mey bahut gul khelaithey

Tu bhi zor lega lai

Akhir khun toh humara hi hai na


Line clear

Now only he and his beloved wife for next few days


Day one


At 10am after breakfast he went to an animal toy shop

Motive

To scare tejo

So she will be frightened and hug him and he could complete his lust mission


He cant be frightened any longer after the cockroach incident

Kushbeer will throw him out of the house

So instead he planned to frightened her


The guy is his known person; his name is jagu

Fateh : biwi ko derana hai kya dikha sekhta hai

Jagu ; teri toh abhi shadi hui hai na

Fateh ; is liye toh

Jagu , kya chahiyeh

Fateh ; kuch bhi sivayeh cockroach

Jagu ; chipkali

Fateh : ok

The lizard was expendice rs 1000 coz it looks like an original one


Teji was preparing lunch for both of them

No one else at home since all were practically sent away

She was cutting vegetables and he put it beside her quietly

Stood a little away from her and then screamed

Tejo chipkali terey baju mey!

She screamed

He immediately opened his arms to receive her but she ran past him to get the jadhu and hit it numerous times

Poor lizard


Fateh was in disbelief

She is not afraid of lizard also

Disappointed he took its smashed remains and buried at the back yard

Antim sanskar completed


Day 2

After breakfast at 10am he went to see jagu

Fateh ; kuch aur dena

Jago : kya hua

Fateh : nehin deri

Jaga ; kis mithi ki beni hui hai

Fateh ; peta nehin abhi tak explore kar raha hun

Jagu ; sap sey zerur deregi


He bought toy baby snake looking real costs rs 3000


She was preparing lunch

He left it at one corner of the kitchen and screamed

Tejo sap !

And opened his arms

She screamed ran to bring the jadhu and hit it hard

Disapointed

Remains buried in backyard


Day 3

Offer her to help in the kitchen

She said i do tadka u cut vegetables

He was standing far away came closer slowly slowly and was standing beside her

He put his hand around her waist

She screamed got nervous and accidentally hit the hot frying pan handle

Hot maseley dar tadka on his face and chest

Eyes burning chest burning

Two days bed rest

Pleasure toh mila nehin hai par hot masala mil geya


Day 6

Shirtless carried 2 bucket of pails went to the backyard to do weight lifting as an exercise

He told tejo his trainer advise him to do so

Improve his arm strength

She was washing dishes after breakfast facing the window

He stood in front of the window lifting the buckets of water to show his hot six pack body to get her attention

While exercising water was spilling from the bucket on the floor he didnt notice was paying more attention to her

Slipped and fall

Leg fracture

Landed in hospital for three weels

Missed boxing competition

Got left right and centre from kushbeer


Revelations

Once he recovered dadi planned puja in the hse

The nite after the puja

When everyone has gone to bed

Dada called fateh to come to the living room

Dada asked how are u doing

U looked disturbed past one month

Fateh replied physically ok but not emotionally

Dada asked who do u see at the pond in ur shower hallucinations

The whole virk khandan knew about this long back

Thanks to mahi for beating the drums

Fateh replied it wss akward

He saw tejo instead of jasmin

Then dada explained to him

U are in love with tejo

Jasmin is a history

Fateh was confused

Dadi came with two glasses of milk

They told fateh everything about their plan

Fateh was upset that tejo was not in love with him

He did a lot to attract her but nothing happened

Dada said now let us handle

Fateh said what are u going to do

Very simple

Fateh asked what

Dadi said we need to bring a girl for u

Flirt with her and u will get ur tejo

No woman can see her husband with any other woman

Fateh hugged his grandparents

Brilliant idea


So fatejo love journey to start soon pls watch it onscreen


Tq for reading




Ps

due to time constraints i couldnt write morre

Next few weeks very busy schedule

So would like to give a closure

Hope u guys enjoyed the bare back os


Have a nice day

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome story..short,simple,straight and crisp..Loved it how you mixed lustness with humor.That'swhy it never crosses the line..Best part is you did not drag the story,uploaded one after another without any gap..And also no Jasso..Keep it up..šŸ‘šŸ¼ Shall wait for your next stories once you freed..Till then stay safe..

-Tinki

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TinkiGogoi

Awesome story..short,simple,straight and crisp..Loved it how you mixed lustness with humor.That'swhy it never crosses the line..Best part is you did not drag the story,uploaded one after another without any gap..And also no Jasso..Keep it up..šŸ‘šŸ¼ Shall wait for your next stories once you freed..Till then stay safe..

-Tinki


Tq u dear


I love writing stories but its just that our busy life doesnt allow us

It takes a lot of time

It needs a flow and creativity

A gap in the stories wil not keep up the flow if its written in parts

The first two was written midnite

Third in the afternoon

And last three towards weekend


I prefer writing fun post coz it doesnt take much time

Today i am free

Coming up soom one post on fatejo romance nok jok on the topic of second hand

Got idea last nite

Thought of writing it today

Coming soon


For the onscreen

The bare back scene was badly executed

Example

Could have gotten fateh coming out from the shower

Saw her struggling to sew it


Hope he falls for her first

Does all funny things to lure her to him

I have given some examples in the os

There is a lot the makers can do but they torture us with family drama

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Completely agree with you..please do write more stories..i loved your humor content in the story that was realy funny specially the last part of his mission in house all alone🤣

Yes the bare back scene was very badly executed in the show..why tejo wanted threads to sew her kurta?How could she do that while still wearing it? She can change to another dress easily.How lame it looks to search for threads? šŸ¤”

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super funny

lolz they have to get taxi

and papa virk ki daant padi woh aur baatšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

and amrik confused which discovering channel shows bare back birdšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

lolz moive idea failed and tejo had to save fateh from gay 🤣

again papa virk ki daant🤣 bechare boxer ko tune kya bana diya woh bi national level ka🤣

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